Status Updates From Lake Road, Last House

not a whiff of romance

there are passages where the writing is fantastic, but then there are bits that are just wtf? like a paragraph about the water tank that has no obvious connection to the paragraphs before or after. and then he finds raccoons got in the house that mentions food containers from "last night". none were mentioned, he went from the restaurant to the barn where he's staying, why/when/how did they get in the house?