Status Updates From Dreams of the Witches Three...

10 pages in and I’ve been met with all the hallmarks of a person desperately trying to emulate the style of Tolkien with none of the skill to back it up. So much tell with very little show, plenty of typos/bad grammar, and bad pacing.

First feel in, I really think this book needs a proper introduction. There is no prologue, it just softly enters then starts going off randomly. It feels scattered at the beginning.