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Nicole
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So far it is a fast read but I just wished she would do more showing instead of telling. Like finding more creative ways to say that somebody is sexy. But at the same time I like the fact that her writing is simple.
— Jan 23, 2017 02:19PM
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D Maj
is finished
Did not like it, I had to take a long reading break after finishing it. I actually finished it months ago... I believe I gave it 3 stars. She's just writing books to collect coins versus delivering a well written novel. I will not spend another dime on this author and I'm good with that.
— Nov 29, 2014 04:54AM
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Tamela
is 89% done
Too many details on insignificant matters, lack of scene development...this joint was thrown together with no rhythm, rhyme or reason. Misspelled words, present and past tense in the same sentence causes the scenes to be disjointed...she been in the game too long for this. My advice would be for Keisha to concentrate on a couple of writing workshops and less on designer grabs and labels. Label overkill...fa real!!
— Jun 14, 2014 05:53AM
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