Status Updates From Crimes Against Magic (Helle...

I'm also really struggling with the complete modernity that people in the 15th century are displaying, there's no reason in the story for it to be happening. They're using whole giant concepts that didn't exist then.

Page after page after page of exposition. This needed a much better editor.

Entertaining but I'm having a lot of trouble keeping track of all of the many random Jims, Joes and Janes who keep popping up 100 pages after they were mentioned in passing one time.

Well, that was fine. I guess it's somewhat notable that the author lets Nate struggle against foes or situations, rather than just being OP and instantly defeating or solving anything. Nothing like the Demon Accords protag who can kill a room of 30 people in 17 seconds or whatever nonsense that was. The stakes feel more believable here.
Mordred being killed from a distance in the epilogue was kind of lame though

Why would the entrance to a stairwell be disguised as an office if they're on a floor that requires top level clearance to access? That doesn't maky any sense. There would be no need for subterfuge if only people with proper clearance can access the floor to begin with.
Now that Nate has his memory back, he's acting very edgy. I guess that's not surprising for this type of novel.

Lol, he wrote 'less I see something' instead of 'lest I see.' Embarrassing to have that published in a work. It's a real doggie dog world out there, for all intensive purposes.
Someone claims the initial job to steal The Iliad copy started this whole thing. But that's not true. That job was not connected to anything that happened afterwards, at least as far as the characters knew at the time. Bit of a snafu