Status Updates From Greegs & Ladders

Great so far for lovers of Douglas Adams novels

So far it feels as if it's trying way too hard to be Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy and reads as if it were written by the fictional Perd Hapley of Parks and Recreation.

Going to keep reading, so far it's m'eh.

Going to keep reading, so far it's m'eh.

This book is starting to feel wordy for the sake of being wordy (no hypocrisy here). I LIKE it, but I'd also like to see an axe taken to it. In a metaphorical sense.

The perspective changes are really off-putting. Why was a chapter written in the first person?!

I thoroughly enjoyed the Kurt Vonnegut reference.

I'm really rather enjoying this! :D Bizarrity + absurdness and other made up words.

Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.

Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.

Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.

Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.

Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.

Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.

Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.

Story is finally picking up, and even a desire has just been set (but late, if you ask me). Loving the origins of Earth, but feel there is still too much explanation for everything. Good humour here and there.

The plot has finally sorted itself out and now has the drive and passion needed to make a story interesting. The satire is working as a result, and I just wished the book started like this.

Structure of plot is an issue. Too much explaining, not enough showing. The only thing making me read on is to learn more about Krimshaw, whose emotions and events being centre to the story.

A random sentence was in first person. Despite the character being so, Wilx is becoming excessively annoying with his long passages of explaining. Sounds like an article.