Status Updates From The Lure

Nope: not bad but a bit fanfiction like. No charactee development. Great plot and concept , maybe one day when I’m bored I’ll go back to it.

There's a girl named Blasie, and she meets these two boys that are in a gang and there names are Rico and Danny and they don't like this boy named trek (which is in a gang to) . well... Blasie is friends with trek sister Arial and Blasie likes him so her group of friends Danny and Rico ask her to set him up by beating him up and she really didn't want to do and now she is paying the price for helping Rico and Danny.

Blaise is still emotionally unstable every since she watched her best friend die in front of her. She is now trying to do things to protect her other friends from getting hurt.

Blaise is still emotionally unstable every since she watched her best friend die in front of her. She is now trying to do things to protect her other friends from getting hurt.

Blaise, Kaylee, and Melissa were getting chased by some boys because of their friend named Rico. Rico was tagging the "locos" territory and they were coming back for revenge.

i haven't even started yet. i picked it because it sounded good when you read it out loud.