Status Updates From Beginnings (The Trifectus S...

I don't know if I can finish this book. It is pretty terrible.

I can't continue reading. I think i'm going to be physically ill if i read one more chapter. 21 pages... it took 21 pages for Juliet to fall in love. smh.

Time to relegate this book to the Did Not Finish Shelf. Fan fiction is a great idea poorly executed her. Byrne thinks this is Twilight meets Hunger Games. Those books were well written and do not need to be rewritten in such an amateurish way. Characters are underdeveloped, thoughts/emotions are jumped to without reasonable logic or consistency, dialogue is missing. Reader is left clueless.

good lord, the h hasn't had a real conversation with the H (having only met < 2 weeks ago) & she's daydreaming about being the future Mrs. Sullivan. So far, I wouldn't recommend this book to anyone over 15,unless they have the attention span of a gnat. The author is male, clearly explaining the poorly written h POV. The sections written about the other species is well done.

so the girl falls madly, deeply in love with the guy, with virtually no conversation between them, then a few pages later she thinks he's "breaking up with her". Wow! How old is Logan Byrne???

"There are packs all over the country and especially the world." Yikes!

No skimming of this book!! Action is really fast! Story doesn't seem to be very developed. In chapter one, we're reading from Juliet's POV, then out of no where, omniscient POV about Marcus for only a paragraph.