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Montana
is 30% done
I made it 100 pages in and DNF. It was initially funny and I liked the main characters humor. However there was almost no description, and all that dialogue and banter got exhausting and confusing making it no fun to read. I think the pacing needs to be aided in her writing to add more to the internal life of the character.
— Dec 08, 2023 05:56AM
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