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Algel Crestfall
Algel Crestfall is on page 19 of 80
I think the pacing of the story is way too fast...
Jun 27, 2013 06:48AM Add a comment
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Mercy Cortez
Mercy Cortez is on page 75 of 80
"Flames of the past only burn the future"
Jun 19, 2013 12:58PM Add a comment
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Mercy Cortez
Mercy Cortez is on page 50 of 80
I wish this was written a little simpler, it has a nice idea, just a bit wordy.
Jun 19, 2013 04:53AM Add a comment
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Mercy Cortez
Mercy Cortez is on page 17 of 80
Im a little confused. I like this but I don't 100% understand at the minute.
Jun 18, 2013 04:04AM Add a comment
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Mercy Cortez
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Really lovely prologue; if the rest is as good I'll be thinking way too much. Have I mentioned, I love analogies!
Jun 17, 2013 04:26AM Add a comment
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Sophie
Sophie is on page 35 of 80
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