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The Pirate Ghost (Formerly known as the Curmudgeon)
The Pirate Ghost (Formerly known as the Curmudgeon) is 92% done
almost done and it's turned out to be a really good read. More coming in the review...though I'm way behind on those too.
Feb 08, 2013 09:37AM Add a comment
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The Pirate Ghost (Formerly known as the Curmudgeon)
The Pirate Ghost (Formerly known as the Curmudgeon) is 70% done
Still riviting. Really sorting itself out now and a wonderful story.
Feb 07, 2013 09:01AM Add a comment
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The Pirate Ghost (Formerly known as the Curmudgeon)
The Pirate Ghost (Formerly known as the Curmudgeon) is 35% done
Wow! very dark, scary, and mature. It's abit confusing as it flips from scene to scene but the writing of each scene is fantastic! Dark, angry and sad all at the same time. And, I can now say, I know of at least one book where I like the first person-present tense point of view.

This is not for the feignt of heart, but it's very interesting and definately a "Thriller."
Feb 05, 2013 04:36AM Add a comment
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The Pirate Ghost (Formerly known as the Curmudgeon)
The Pirate Ghost (Formerly known as the Curmudgeon) is 15% done
Okay, this is stabilizing into a really good story. The begining is a bit like the movie "Momento" (Which, I liked). It's got a good villain, and what appears to be a good Anti-Hero, not to mention a well written strong female Police Officer type.

All very good, and very different. We get flash-forwards in First Person-Present Tense (one of the first time's that's actually worked for me)...GOOD Read.
Feb 04, 2013 06:08PM Add a comment
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The Pirate Ghost (Formerly known as the Curmudgeon)
The Pirate Ghost (Formerly known as the Curmudgeon) is 11% done
Wonderful Lady Cop! She's great, tough, smart and in charge. I like her.

Bellaleigh is experimenting (I hesitate to use that word) with First Person-Present Tense. I prefer Traditional - 1st Person Past Tense. He's impressed me with how he used it. There's a shifting of POV that appears to break rules, but, the first guys to point that out are the first to do it. It works for me too.
Feb 04, 2013 04:20AM Add a comment
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