Status Updates From Moro's Price

Pages and pages of backstory. I'm only reading this because I have to for a review.

This story has lost my interest. The vividness of the first chapters is gone. The mystery is no longer interesting. What happened to that one dude?

Marriage in the middle of a book? And what happened to Val's friend?

There are way too many POV.

There are jarring flashbacks; too much time is taken with scene building.

Aargh--stayed up past three reading this. Can't put it down.

Ahh, it's starting to come together... Or fall apart.

I've been so confused, lot's of "terms", but it's beginning get clearer.

This story still can go both ways for me... I don't understand everything and I'm wondering if it's the story itself, or the fact that English is my second language...