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Phillip Slaney
Phillip Slaney is 71% done
The cutie 3/5
A really gross idea but realistically would never happen because no one would want it. However, this made me imagine equally gross things that will likely be common in the future.
May 11, 2021 02:37PM Add a comment
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Phillip Slaney
Phillip Slaney is 63% done
The Walk 1/5
Ending not clear at all.
May 11, 2021 01:22PM Add a comment
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Max
Max is on page 266 of 349
"The Cutie" (classic!), "Into Darkness" (a sketch)
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Phillip Slaney
Phillip Slaney is 61% done
Learning to be me 5/5
This was a great concept and had a good structure to the story with twists and turns. Also is very thought provoking and brought up a lot of questions. This could easily be turned into a novel that tackles multiple issues.
May 06, 2021 06:43AM Add a comment
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Phillip Slaney
Phillip Slaney is 55% done
A Kidnapping 3/5
About simulating people inside a computer and if a loved ones sim was kidnapped. Cool idea, but was kind of a boring read... again.
May 05, 2021 05:17AM Add a comment
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Phillip Slaney
Phillip Slaney is 50% done
Seeing 2/5
Like a realistic disorder from an Oliver Sacks book. The story doesn’t really go anywhere though.
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Phillip Slaney
Phillip Slaney is 44% done
The Safe-Deposit box 4/5
An interesting idea about a mans consciousness waking up in a different body each day. Well executed. I liked the ending because by half way it was obvious what was going on but the author doesn’t insult your intelligence, he just hints at it.
May 02, 2021 09:32AM Add a comment
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Max
Max is on page 230 of 349
"Learning to be me" -- awesome concept, "The moat" -- great concept that I would've loved seen developed further, "The walk" -- accomplished, self-contained story
May 02, 2021 05:52AM Add a comment
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Andrew
Andrew is on page 228 of 272
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Phillip Slaney
Phillip Slaney is 37% done
Axiomatic 3/5
The concept is What if you could change your beliefs. Really interesting idea. But I felt it could’ve been explored further. I don’t think the story that was told with that concept really reached the potential of what it could’ve shown about our beliefs.
Apr 30, 2021 12:45PM Add a comment
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Andrew
Andrew is on page 186 of 272
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Phillip Slaney
Phillip Slaney is 32% done
Blood sisters 2/5
Not really sci fi. Pretty predictable. Turned out to be a comment on corruption in big pharma. Average story set close to the present day.
Apr 29, 2021 01:04PM Add a comment
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Andrew
Andrew is on page 166 of 272
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Phillip Slaney
Phillip Slaney is 26% done
The caress 3/5
A detective’s investigation with a biological twist. And what the super rich can buy.
Apr 28, 2021 12:26AM Add a comment
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Andrew
Andrew is on page 150 of 272
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Phillip Slaney
Phillip Slaney is 16% done
Infinite assassin 1/5
So complicated it made no sense and was extremely boring to read. Gave up half way.

100 light year diary 5/5
Super interesting. News comes from the past and future.

Eugene I skipped

Closer 4/5
A guy wants to share the exact same experience as his wife. Funny but ultimately accurate conclusion
Apr 27, 2021 01:26PM Add a comment
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Andrew
Andrew is on page 106 of 272
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Andrew
Andrew is on page 40 of 272
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Max
Max is on page 184 of 349
"A Kidnapping" a brief glimpse into a permutation-city-like world, accomplished in that
Apr 19, 2021 12:26AM Add a comment
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Max
Max is on page 165 of 349
"Seeing" -- kind of missed the mindblow here
Apr 18, 2021 12:27PM Add a comment
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Max
Max is on page 146 of 349
"The safe-deposit box", awesome!
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