Status Updates From Starswarm: A Jupiter Novel

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Amy
is on page 154 of 352
re-read number I've lost count. enjoy it every time
— Dec 22, 2017 07:17PM
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the_cat
is 99% done
A story for kids I guess. Now I notice that this was written in 1998 *double checks* yup. Well imo it was already 30 years outdated by then. People on another planet with a top technology of tapes and a top security system based on dogs? Yah, sure. *yawns*
— May 15, 2015 08:01AM
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the_cat
is 70% done
"Kip said" "Marty said" "He said" "He said" "He said"
It gets annoying...
— May 14, 2015 11:58AM
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It gets annoying...

Jen
is on page 160 of 352
Yup yup. Uncle Mike met his lady friend in a bookstore. :)
— Nov 03, 2012 06:51PM
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Jen
is on page 146 of 352
It's pretty good so far, but the dogs are kind of deus ex machina. Every time the protagonist is in trouble, the dogs save the day. It would be interesting to see the POV of the dogs. "Save Timmy from the well, fire, bad guy with gun. Boy, Timmy sure does know how to get into trouble!" It's not bad, just a tad overused.
— Nov 03, 2012 09:43AM
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James
is on page 64 of 352
Just started I am likeing it so far.
— Jun 27, 2009 01:35AM
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