Status Updates From The Best Kind of Forever (R...

So he just casually eats her out on their picnic, the author incorrectly described her as cumming and writes it as male cum with a white-washed look. But then! She suddenly shows up at his place saying she missed him, but his POV says they had dinner together as well. Yet, it makes it sound like it’s been days since they hung out, and she’s in a different outfit. Make it make sense, author.

He said he’d pick her up at seven for a date. He arrived right at seven and they immediately went to eat. I assumed 7 p.m makes the most sense, yet she’s saying thanks for lunch?? Even if he picked her up at 7 a.m, they wouldn’t be eating lunch. Just what time is it actually, and what meal are they even eating??

Did we really need to start both of their first PPV chapters off with them trauma dumping on the readers?? I don’t think so. Also, if she’s short, has an eating disorder, and is trying to stay under 100lbs, that means she’s currently around 100-110lbs which also means she would not have enough fat on her body to provide the curves Hayes is staring at nor the spillage of cleavage from her top. Be so for real rn.

Cuz every girl, that’s worried about her weight and calorie intake, deserves a guy who wishes to worship her entire body

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This is so cute