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First impression: Katie is such a childish and stubborn brat! Looks good so far though.
— Jun 07, 2014 11:17PM
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Amanda [darjeeling_and_jade]
is 58% done
So far I feel like this is just a love story with a tiny, tiny bit of paranormal thrown in as an afterthought. The main point of the novel (Kate using her powers to find the kid) isn't even on the back-burner, it's in the fridge. I wish that was more of a focus.
I also am increasingly feeling like the author is forcing the characters into a romance just to have a romance. It's very stilted.
— Jan 15, 2014 05:28PM
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I also am increasingly feeling like the author is forcing the characters into a romance just to have a romance. It's very stilted.
Amanda [darjeeling_and_jade]
is 14% done
More infodumps. It bogs down the story. I also don't need all of these descriptions about people's appearances.
— Jan 13, 2014 09:42PM
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Amanda [darjeeling_and_jade]
is 14% done
Too much telling. The author shows the emotion etc but still feels the need to tell us. It's already shown, don't tell / ruin the emotion.
— Jan 13, 2014 09:40PM
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