Status Updates From Hajar's Hidden Legacy (Beas...

Characters are fine -- I like them, actually -- but there's no external conflict. Hence, not much PLOT. *taps foot impatiently*

"I often wonder if anyone would care what color tie I wore if I was a man, but I can't really complain. It's nice to have my country featured in international news. Even if it is just for my shoes. It boosts tourism." ....I like Princess Katharine. She's not shy, but still feminine. And not ashamed of being pretty & rich.

'He could not be called handsome, not now. But he was compelling, fierce. And for a moment she was almost overcome by the desire to skim her fingers over his ruined cheek, to feel the damage for herself.' ....One side of the hero's body & both hands are covered with thick burn scars. Also, he's blind in one eye. This ain't no pussy cheekbone slash. :P

'Katharine was certain there hadn't been guests since the attack. Everything in the palace was different than her last visit. Darker. Quieter. An echo with every footstep. It felt empty.'