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'Sam jumped and missed being washing lined by a fraction of an inch.'
I wonder if the author meant 'clotheslined'? Hmmmmmm.

i put this down february 25th intending to pick it up a day or two later... and now it's been over 5 weeks. and it feels like i never took a break from it. and it's as boring and scattershot as ever, and the ending is just a big anticlimactic letdown.

just too damn much going on... now we've added in the israelis, mossad, half of europe, spy meets spy, get smart, sleeper cells... this might work as a multi-night miniseries script treatment, but it's too frenetic for a cohesive book.

another slam-bam-thrill-a-minute-quick-cut-chapters action novel. so much going on.. shadow government, nuclear attack, al qaeda/isis, double agents, etc etc.