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Annabel Rowley
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Thoughts so far: Dialogue could be better. The banter is cringey in some parts and just overall dialogue never seems to flow. It feels awkward. The overall plot is interesting enough to keep me wanting more but I do think some instances of foreshadowing are too obvious and give too much away.
— 4 hours, 31 min ago
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Kristen (IG: books.n.snakes)
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Fairly certain I’m already gone for Von
— Jan 24, 2026 12:01PM
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