Status Updates From Magic Unchained (The Nightk...

Jan 10 Not enough romance. Their relationship had too many problems right up until the very end. He sucked and she was better than him but I didn't really like either. It was weird til the end and some things were too perfect and cheesy, and some things left off unfinished. Absolutely 0 interest in continuing with this series and world.

Jan 9 So not pleased with my progress. It’s cuz I didn’t really want to read and was busy. The relationship went in a direction I didn’t like and things moved too fast too soon. I don’t really like either one of them and she’s too wishy washy. The plot is ALL over the place and it’s one ridiculous thing after another and feels so slapped together and off the tracks.

Jan 8 Early on I could tell this wasn't for me. The characters and phrases and world are weird AF and not attractive. WAY too much time in side characters POVs. 7th in the series and there isn't enough backstory for me to know what's going on. The writing is good and has personality. It's gotten better and there's some good chemistry but needs way more moments.