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Casse NaRome
Casse NaRome is 82% done
At this point, I just want to get to the end.
Dec 17, 2012 11:11PM Add a comment
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Casse NaRome
Casse NaRome is 69% done
the length, grammar, punctuation and extra or missing words indicate this book could use editing. you can set up a pattern by using 2 or 3 events and situation...cut the rest out and shorten the word count. tighten it up. good story though.
Nov 22, 2012 08:42PM Add a comment
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Casse NaRome
Casse NaRome is 44% done
don't get me wrong but this story is waaaay too long. I like the story and characters but a normal books would be done. No reason for this book to be triple a regular books length.
Nov 22, 2012 03:13AM Add a comment
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Casse NaRome
Casse NaRome is 11% done
Aiden and Paulie flipping out and horrified that little Delilah is growing up! so realistic! We'be got to do something, there are boys out there. LOL love it.
Nov 21, 2012 01:56AM Add a comment
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Casse NaRome
Casse NaRome is 8% done
He names his guitar Dee-Lee after sister Dee-Dee but he keeps calling the guitar Dee-Dee? Good book just needs editor for little mistakes.
Nov 21, 2012 01:12AM Add a comment
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