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ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 385 comments Mod
This is where the Operations will begin. Only one flock escapes at a time. No person gets left behind unless its been planned. A traitor Whitecoat will open the window and they will escape. The is a large room that gets filled with Choloform, and the Flock must fight off Flyboys and Erasers before getting knocked out by the gas. At least one member of the flock will get knocked out before the traitor frees them.


message 2: by DuskFox (new)

DuskFox Ivy was dragged into the room. The grip on her arm was painful and the gag in her mouth was chocking her. The whitecoats flung her into the room along with the others then locked the door. Ivy gasped as she yanked the gag out of her mouth. 'Are you guys ok?' she asked Tia and Julia helping them up. 'Well, this is new!' she said looking around the plain square room. One, they never got tested with others, and two, this room didn't have any equipment and the never left us alone.


Ice Queen Wanderer •The Cursed Prophetess• (ari-la) | 78 comments Ari pulled Opal back. Testing was not something it was good to miss.


message 4: by Kit Kat (new)

Kit Kat (kitcastellan) Two white coats dragged bree into the room and layer her on the table, she was unconscious


message 5: by Zosister (new)

Zosister Tia had her eyes shut tight, not wanting to get blinded by the light. She didn't know where she was, but she didn't want to find out. When she heard Ivy, she replied back to her, "Fine. Just fine. Where are we?"


message 6: by Kit Kat (new)

Kit Kat (kitcastellan) Bree woke up. "Where am i?" She asked to no one in particular


message 7: by DuskFox (new)

DuskFox As Ivy helped Tua up she glanced around. Two new girls had been dragged in. 'I don't know where we are. Some testing room of some sorts.' Ivy said to Tia. 'Hello, my name is Ivy. Who are you?' she asked to the two new girls.


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 385 comments Mod
Julia stretched with a sigh of relif.

A sudden hissing sound could be heard as a mist of white stuff started comeing out if the vetulaters. Julia coughed and gagged and felt suddenly tired. 10 erasers and 10 flyboys came into teh room, armed to the teeth


message 9: by Kit Kat (new)

Kit Kat (kitcastellan) "Im bree." Bree whispered


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 385 comments Mod
"Julia" Julia siad in between a cough


message 11: by Kit Kat (new)

Kit Kat (kitcastellan) ""What do we do?" Bree asks terrified


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 385 comments Mod
"Fihgt" Julia said, voice determined nad went to kick eraser-@ss. She punched one in the...VERY hard stoumche. both came away with an achineg part of theri body; julia- acheing hand, eraser- not-so acheing stoumahce


message 13: by Kit Kat (new)

Kit Kat (kitcastellan) Bree jump up and kick a fly boy in the face, her foot was throbbing while the flyboy seemed to feel nothing


message 15: by Zosister (new)

Zosister Tia heard a noise from somewhere when, ugh! She got hit in the stomach from something. She tried to open her eyes, but the light blinded her, "S***!" she closed her eyes tightly and held her stomach. Then she got a slap in the face, she could feel the bruise starting to form. She listened for anything and she heard breathing then whack! She hit something on the head. But the thing just hit her back in the legs so she fell to the ground.

((hey Coolkid, I just thought of Tia being in a experiment and losing her sight in the daylight.... But she can see perfectly in the night time/dark. What do u think?))


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 385 comments Mod
(...sounds like iggy)


message 17: by Zosister (new)

Zosister ((sorry... Just noticed.... Oops))


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 385 comments Mod
( but yes you can......if u can handle it)


message 19: by Zosister (new)

Zosister ((thanks... I will try... No seeing in daylight, but excellent at night))


message 21: by Zosister (new)

Zosister ((yeah me too...))


message 22: by DuskFox (new)

DuskFox Ivy started coughing just like the rest when the white mist poured out. She shook her head trying to rid herself of the tired feeling she got when inhaling it. Then came the flyboys and erasers. Ivy wasn't a leader, she had know idea what to do. Thankfully Julia came to the rescue. It was now or never. Ivy jumped up high when a eraser came at her. It barley had time to look up before the kicked it hard on its head and it crumpled. But then another one came and took its place grabbing at her heels. Oh great she thought. Ivy looked around and saw everyone struggling. Julia and Bree where fighting but they kept having to shake off tiredness which was making them loss the fight. Tia had tried to open her eyes, but it looked like the light blinded her and she coudnt move. Ivy flew past flyboys and erasers and bareled straight into the flyboy attacking Tia. Ivy gasped in pain when it snapped her right arm like a twig but she kept fighting. After she had grabbed its head and broke its neck she flew up to the ceiling, wings flapping hard. And the gas began to clear! Excellent she thought. And stayed up there blocking vents with her hands and flapping her wings to try clear the mist.


message 23: by Kit Kat (new)

Kit Kat (kitcastellan) Bree inhaled more of the mist. She slumped against he table unfolding her purple black wings. SHe punched an eraser and he slumped down in front of her, she fell down on the ground. "Help." She whimpered


message 24: by Zosister (new)

Zosister Tia sensed a eraser in front of her and jumped up, flapped her wings a bit, so that she hovered over the erasers head. She stomped on the erasers' head when she felt him. Her legs hurt and she knew the best way for her is to stay hovering above him. When she couldn't feel the eraser anymore, guessing he was on the ground, she flapped some more and hit her head in the ceiling. "Ouch!" she exclaimed.


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 385 comments Mod
(ugh, you wannna kill me with ur massive posts//11? lo ljks)


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 385 comments Mod
(no tables)

5 more erasers were added, these ones with wings. They flew up and attacked Ivy.

Julia round-house kicked a fly boy,.n sending it flying. She shook her head, tryig to clear her head. They needed to escape... but How. TThat was when she noticed a window... it was only small enough to just fit her through. She went up to it nad saw that in was unlocked....who'd of unlocked it? Who'd have wnated them to escape....she was so grateful that she didnt question it.
She pushed the window open. The gas didnt go out or anything, no fresh air came in.
"Guys! Over here!" SHe managed


message 27: by Kit Kat (new)

Kit Kat (kitcastellan) Bree stumbled over to the window, Bree was coughing violently


message 28: by DuskFox (new)

DuskFox ((Hey!! Just thinking, isnt it supossed to be that one person gets left behind? If so do you want that to be Ivy?))

Ivy was concentrating on the battle below trying to clear the gas for her fellow mutants that she didn't see the erasers with wings until it was too late. The only warning she got was the whistling of wind through wings that made her turn and just dodge the punch aimed at her. Oh great! She thought angrily. They started to fan out closing off escape routes. Then she heard Julia calling and a spark of hope flared in Ivy's chest. I'll go that way, she decided and aimed and kick at the flyboy closest to the window. She caught it unawares and it forgot to flap and went down like a rock. Laughing she turned around to face the others and got punched in the stomach, hard. And then, it just had to grab her already broken right arm and pull it back. Ivy screamed and was fighting to stay conscious.


message 29: by Zosister (last edited Sep 18, 2012 11:28PM) (new)

Zosister Tia heard Julia yell and aimed her wings at her direction. She put her hands out to feel it she is going to run into something. When she felt a wall she stopped and felt her way to the window, she took a big breathe in of the fresh air. "Thank you Julia!"


message 30: by Kit Kat (new)

Kit Kat (kitcastellan) Bree slowly climbed out the window and extended her purple black wings


message 31: by DuskFox (new)

DuskFox As Ivy screamed she watched through tears the rest climb out the window. She was glad they got free. But she also wanted out. Using her last ounce of strength she pulled her arm free and flapped her wings shooting towards the window. But she never got there. Ivy misjudged the flyboys speed, as her arm slid out of its grasp it catched her wing instead, and pulled back. She screamed in pain and the darkness over took her as she fell to the ground.


Ice Queen Wanderer •The Cursed Prophetess• (ari-la) | 78 comments Ari pulled he rtwin through the window.


message 33: by Zosister (new)

Zosister Tia climbed out of the window and spread her wings, with her eyes tightly shut, she felt the warm breeze and drifted up.


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 385 comments Mod
(NO!!! 1ONE PERSON GETS NOCKED OUT!!)


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 385 comments Mod
(THE OTHERS CARRY THAT PERSON OUT!!)


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 385 comments Mod
Julia saw the fallen ivy adn ran o her, 3/4 asleep. She ggrabbed Ivy and held her bridal style. Julia was surprisingly strong. Julia struggled through the small window with ivy. SHe went out first then dragged ivy out. Then they were outside. 10000+metres in the air (exgsagerated!!). She could finally breathe! Oh my gosh it felt so good!! AI FRESH AIR. She zoomed up into the air and to the distance, beocning to the others with her head for them o fllow hr.


message 37: by Zosister (new)

Zosister Tia felt free and flapped her jet black wings harder to stay aloft. She had her eyes still tightly shut, she tried to open but got blinded by the light, so she closed them quickly. "What have they done to me!" she said out loud, then covered her mouth with her hands. She couldn't see in this light or in any light.


message 38: by DuskFox (new)

DuskFox ((Ok, so Julia is carrying Ivy out. Thanks!! :-D Um...I'm not sure what to do cause she is unconscious and it would probs be best if she didn't wake up till they had landed cause the flyboy hurt her wing....I'll just let you guys decide. I'm going with the flow! Just keep swimming, just keep swimming, just keep swimming, nadada...))


ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*・゜゚・*\(^O^)/*・゜゚・*☆ Cool (coolkidrox123) | 385 comments Mod
(:P HAHAHAHAHAHAH Bwhat just keep flying, just keep flying, what do we do? we fly fly flu!1 ^_^ lol finding mutant bird freak XD)


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