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message 1: by ℋɑƞƞɑℎ, Semper ubi sub ubi!! (last edited Jul 25, 2012 02:26PM) (new)

ℋɑƞƞɑℎ | 206 comments Mod
Where the plane crashed. It's dark, it's almost pitch black. The sky is stary and there's a full moon, your only light source there is. You have no idea what time it is, you just wait for the sun to rise. But it never does.

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*This will be edited...I just wanted to get it up ASAP*


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~*Just Slytherin Along w/ The Creatures*~ (Patrick Swayze's lover) (thejsaway) | 173 comments Mod
Dalton was shaking from the freezing cold, his light jacket off so he could examine his wound. He was clutching his shoulder, his lips blue and puffs of icy breath billowing in the air. God, his shoulder hurt worse than ever. You could tell it was broken. There was a big bump from the broken bone bulging out, and the rest of his arm was lower than usual. He looked at Alvina. "We crashed.." he croaked.


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~*Just Slytherin Along w/ The Creatures*~ (Patrick Swayze's lover) (thejsaway) | 173 comments Mod
Dalton looked up at her and got up with a cringe. He went over to her, holding his shoulder. God, it hurt, and shivering as violently as he was wasn't helping. He felt like he was 0 degrees inside.

((gtg))


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The ringing that flooded Eli's ears was the only thing he was capable of registering. Then, realization struck him harder than lighnting and his mind flashed to the plane and how they had begun crashing and now this. Delaney She was pregnant from crying out loud! He willed every muscle in his body to move his head and open his eyes. "D-delaney!?" he croaker out, looking over at her figure. "C-can...you hear me?" God..his voice sounded like sand papaer, not to mention his body was completely frozen..paralyzed from the fear probbly but he forced himself to snap out if it and slowly, his muscles began regaining control, although he head a terrible head injury and a huge gash on his leg, he mange to turn to Delaney.


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Alex | 28 comments Laney hit the ground hard and rolled to the side. Drake and Hayden followed close behind her. As she began to sit up, some kind of plane debri came down from the sky and landed on her arm. She cried out in pain as she felt it gash her skin open. She felt a crack in her forearm. She screamed and pushed the debri off her arm. Blood was gushing out of a cut on her lower bicep. She grabbed to to try to slow the bleeding but the blood ran through her fingers. She screamed "Help! Someone help!" she'd lost sight of her brothers and she couldn't see anyone else.


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~*Just Slytherin Along w/ The Creatures*~ (Patrick Swayze's lover) (thejsaway) | 173 comments Mod
Alvina~Dalton
"You hit your head...and almost fell and died....so I saved you," he said, his voice wavering with shivers. He squeezed his eyes shut, his shoulder killing him. He kept walking with her though.


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Sammy hit the ground and heard someone cry out. He ran towards the noise. He started crawling and felt a person. He also felt blood." Where..Where's the cut?"


Mary *TheBigBangTheory* *I love Louis!* | 63 comments Poppy hissed and grabbed the arm without the scar. Sparky raced over to go to her, and she picked him up, treating his wound. She was glad no glass was involved, and was about to head off, when Sparky barked at the other passengers.


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Alex | 28 comments Laney looked up at the person leaning over her. "My, my arm," she shakily said and pointed to the deep gash. "I...I think my army's broken," she said and grabbed her forearm as a pang of pain shot through it. She made a noise in the back of her throat and looked at the person with pleading eyes.


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Sammy ripped off a piece from the bottom of his shirt. He felt around for the cut. When he found it, He started wrapping her arm with the cloth.
Hannah stood and tried to find her brother." Liam?"
" Here." He said.


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~*Just Slytherin Along w/ The Creatures*~ (Patrick Swayze's lover) (thejsaway) | 173 comments Mod
He shook his head. "I don't know..." he whispered, shaking still. He held his shoulder, wincing. Dalton felt terrible. He was cold, afraid, and hurt. He looked up at Alvina.


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~*Just Slytherin Along w/ The Creatures*~ (Patrick Swayze's lover) (thejsaway) | 173 comments Mod
"I dunno..." he said. He thought and took a clump of snow and put it on his shoulder. It was cold, but it numbed the pain, and that helped greatly as well.


yojharobed || I have no sword. I don't need a sword. Because I am the Doctor and this is my spoon. En garde! (yojharobed) | 104 comments Mod
((Simba, Ashbumundo? ;D))


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~*Just Slytherin Along w/ The Creatures*~ (Patrick Swayze's lover) (thejsaway) | 173 comments Mod
"It's okay..." he murmured, sinking down into the ground. He tried to stop shivering, but he couldn't. He tried to relax, but that was impossible too. He wished Alvina would do something, but he knew she couldn't.


Mary *TheBigBangTheory* *I love Louis!* | 63 comments ((Poppy's a medic...))

Poppy turned and surveyed the hurt an injured people. She was too kind to just walk off like she had planned. She looked at the nearest two people. One seemed to have a broken shoulder. "May I help you?" she asked polietly.


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((Convenient enough XD))

Dalton looked up at Poppy. "I broke my shoulder..and she hit her head." He looked over at Alvina, knowing she was too modest to take any help. He, on the other hand, was more than happy to be treated, for the pain was immense.


Mary *TheBigBangTheory* *I love Louis!* | 63 comments Poppy rolled her eyes. "If you say so." she grumbled to her. She knelt down by Dalton. "This might hurt a little." she mumbled softly, her mouth a thin serious line. "You might want to grip some snow." she said as she popped his shoulder back into place. "It's still broken, but it should heal normally now." She placed some snow onto the wound and pulle out from her pack a piece of gauze, waterproof tape and a towel. She wiped the wound carefully after removing the snow, then put some more on and placed the gauze ontop, putting only a thin layer snow. "When it melts, leave this bandage on." she said as she began to wrap the shoulder up. She hissed in agony as she bumped her arm, but continued to treat him. "Just keep it clean and try not to move it too much." He face was covered with a thin layer of sweat and drops of his blood.

((don't even know if that's how you do it... But whatevs!XD))


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~*Just Slytherin Along w/ The Creatures*~ (Patrick Swayze's lover) (thejsaway) | 173 comments Mod
Dalton nodded. "Thank you...so much." He gave her a little smile. He looked over at Alvina. He knew that she was going to be stubborn. "Just take the help while you got it, Alvina. Quit being so stuck up about it!"


κίρστεν (Kirsten) (kirsten_j) | 62 comments Kris~Alexi
"M'okay." Kris muttered, sinking gratefully down on the rock and putting a hand cautiously to sore spot. She winced slightly. "Think I just knocked my head." She blinked at the plane smoldering in the snow. "Just... can't believe this is really happening. I feel like I'm on some weird survival TV show."


κίρστεν (Kirsten) (kirsten_j) | 62 comments Kris~Alexi

His touch was gentle enough, but Kris flinched away at his touch still. She gritted her teeth.
"Yeah, I know." She shuddered, only partially from cold. "I was sure I was dead back there. Thanks for getting me out" She looked up at the stranger and grinned slightly. "I'm Kris by the way."


κίρστεν (Kirsten) (kirsten_j) | 62 comments Kris~Alexi

"Nice to--" the broke off, wincing, "Er... meet you too." she squinted at the ship. "D'you think anyone else survived?"


κίρστεν (Kirsten) (kirsten_j) | 62 comments Kris~Alexi

"I think there were some parachutes on the plane." Kris said, nodding. She got slowly to her feet. The cool air outside the plane was already making her head feel clearer. "I figure we'll have a better chance in large numbers. Let's go look for them."


Mary *TheBigBangTheory* *I love Louis!* | 63 comments Poppy to Alvina and Dalton
Poppy gave a curt nod of the head to Dalton, then turned to Alvina. "Do you mind if I look at what happened? I might be able to tell if it will get bad." she suggested, blushing slightly. No one had praised her on her medical techniques.


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~*Just Slytherin Along w/ The Creatures*~ (Patrick Swayze's lover) (thejsaway) | 173 comments Mod
Poppy~Alvina and Dalton
Dalton looked at them. He really did hope Alvina let her check it out. He didn't want her getting more hurt then she already was. He gave her a look as if to say, "Let her do it" to Alvina, with a tinge of pleading in his eyes.


message 25: by Alex (new)

Alex | 28 comments Laney gave a weak smile in thanks to the boy helping her. She winced and made a noise in her throat as the boy found a prodded the cut. "I...I think my arms broken or something," she mumbled. "I felt a crack and it hurts like absolutely nook other."


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" It feels broken." Sammy said." I think we should move before I help more."
His dog shivered next to him.


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Alex | 28 comments Laney did her best to nod and tried to stand up. She tried to brace herself on her other arm but fell back to the ground as pain shot through her hurt am and her legs gave out beneath her. It must be the shock that's making me so uncoordinated she thought and puffed her cheeks in frustration. "Sorry I don't know why I'm so weak," she muttered.


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Sammy stood and held out his hand." Do you want me to help you?"
Hannah was lying limp near a patch of trees.
Liam stood up and looked for his sister.


κίρστεν (Kirsten) (kirsten_j) | 62 comments Kris~Alexi
"Same here." Kris said. She got to her feet. "We should keep an eye out for those chutes too. We can at least regroup with them." She glanced nervously at the plane, suppressing a shudder. "I... don't know if anyone else survived that crash."


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Alex | 28 comments Taylor ( I think I'm Jacobsessed) wrote: "Sammy stood and held out his hand." Do you want me to help you?"
Hannah was lying limp near a patch of trees.
Liam stood up and looked for his sister."


Laney looked up gratefully. "More than anything. Thanks," she said as she took his hand and slowly stood up, holding her injury arm close to her body. Once she was fully vertical, she looked at the boy and said "I'm Laney by the way."


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" I'm Sammy." He smiled at her. He turned." Did you hear something?"
Liam found Hannah.
Hannah was groaning. Her legs hurt.


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Alex | 28 comments "Hi Sammy," Laney weakly smiled. She glanced around trying to locate what he was referring to. "I hear a lot of things...what are you talking about?" she asked nervously. She hoped whatever it was wasn't some kind of wild beast or something.


κίρστεν (Kirsten) (kirsten_j) | 62 comments Jay~Tasia

"Nonononono..." Jay muttered, trying to turn the parachute as best he could without letting go of Tasia. He felt his feet brush the tops of the pine trees and let go of the string to hold Tasia tight, trying to shelter Katie between them. The branches and pine needles scratched at his hands and face. With a jerk, they came to a stop, dangling from the parachute now caught on the pine branches. Jay took a steading breath and risked a glance down. He swore softly.
"Tasia," he said through gritted teeth. "If I lower you down, d'you think you could jump the last few feet?"


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Alex wrote: ""Hi Sammy," Laney weakly smiled. She glanced around trying to locate what he was referring to. "I hear a lot of things...what are you talking about?" she asked nervously. She hoped whatever it was ..."

" Someone groaning. Do you see any one hurt, or lying on the ground in pain?"

Hannah asked quietly," Liam?"


Mary *TheBigBangTheory* *I love Louis!* | 63 comments Alvina~Dalton and Poppy
With a final furious glare at Dalton, Alvina muttered, "Fine. But be fast."
She really didn't want to get a ton of attention, especially from Dalton. She had enough problems with him already and she didn't want sympathy from him.
Once again, she was tempted to get out her knife to feel more comfortable and realized that she would finally be able to.


Poppy nodded and got to work on Alvina's head, quickly icing it and wrapping it in recor time. "Just be careful with it; if you start seeing flashing lights, or throwing up or what not, then you have a concussion." she concluded.


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ℋɑƞƞɑℎ | 206 comments Mod
Ashby Grace~Peeta's Future Wife wrote: "((tehe, XD she's super loyal))

Mirage could feel Eric's eyes on her and she knew he could tell what was happening. Tears slipped from her good eye but blood was still blinding the other.
She took a deep breath and told herself to pull it together. With the dry part of her shirt she patted away some of the blood and but some snow on there.
Mirage stood up and signed slowly to Eric, "Going in. Finding Diandra."
It was slow and tedious, but she knew he would be able to read it. She placed a hand on his shoulder and smiled sadly. "I'll be back."
She was about to turn away when she looked back. "With your sister." she added.


Eric refused to look up for a minute, but he did eventually. His grew wide, but from living with Diandra, he knew it was worthless to argue with Mirage. "Be safe. You understand?" He signed with a frown. He sat back on the snow, not caring that it was soaking through, and freezing.


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~*Just Slytherin Along w/ The Creatures*~ (Patrick Swayze's lover) (thejsaway) | 173 comments Mod
Alvina~Dalton and Poppy

Dalton sighed and looked at Alvina. "You okay now?" he whispered. He was really concerned about her, much less himself. He wanted to make sure she wasn't feeling so much pain.


Mary *TheBigBangTheory* *I love Louis!* | 63 comments ((Shrugs))

Poppy wiped her hands satisfactoruly and began to amove to walk around and leave this place behind. But Sparky wouldn't let her.


yojharobed || I have no sword. I don't need a sword. Because I am the Doctor and this is my spoon. En garde! (yojharobed) | 104 comments Mod
((Sorry, I've been crazy busy! :/ I['ll be on tomorrow too!! =D))

Simba~Rosita
Simba didn't let go of Rosita's hand as the parachutes slowed their fall. They landed softly in the snow, but debris from the plane was still flying everywhere and he tugged on her hand.
"We need to move," he said and pulled her forward stumbling through the snow.
He was prepared to run a million miles to keep her safe, and it was difficult in the snow, but he didn't dare let go of her hand.
After a while, he sat her down on a rock after dusting off the snow. "Are you alright?" he asked her in worry. "Are you okay? Are you hurt? Anywhere? You need to tell me. Are you okay?"


Rosita~Simba
Rosita clung to the strength of his hand, and caught her breath. "I think-I think I hurt my hand," she panted. "It feels stiff, and I can't move it." She leaned against his chest(he's sitting next to her, right? =D), and shivered slightly. She felt safe in the shelter of his arms, and she felt like she could stay with him forever.


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((I don't know, because if its bad and she falls asleep, she might die :x))

Alvina~Dalton

"Yeah, I'm fine..." he said. Dalton leaned back against a tree, shivering. He tried to calm himself, but his shivers scared him a bit. How long would they be out here? It seemed like they were smack in the middle of nowhere. He felt a bit hopeless, to be true.


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(( Where's Alex?))


message 42: by κίρστεν (Kirsten) (last edited Jul 26, 2012 09:26AM) (new)

κίρστεν (Kirsten) (kirsten_j) | 62 comments ((Hannah, just so you know, I moved Jay & Tasia to this thread. ^^ Msg. 46))


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ℋɑƞƞɑℎ | 206 comments Mod
((OH! Wow I didn't even see that! Well thank you :) ))

Tasia~Jay

If Tasia thought her arm and shoulder hurt before that was nothing compared to now. "D***," she said angrily as she looked up at the parachute. She shifted Katie tightly closer to Jay as he sheltered her.
"Jump?" she asked, a note of hysteria in her voice. She cleared her throat and took a deep breath. "What about Katie? And you? Would I hold Katie? Maybe I could, um, climb the tree and..." she trailed off, at a loss.
~~~~~~~~~~~
((Diandra's in the plane...I'll move it here ^^))


yojharobed || I have no sword. I don't need a sword. Because I am the Doctor and this is my spoon. En garde! (yojharobed) | 104 comments Mod
((Yeah, Hannah, I was going to ask you how we were going to RP Diandra and Marc with the Airplane folder locked...=D))


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Diandra~Marc and maybe Mirage

Eventually, Diandra woke up again. A sense of dread washed over her when she realized what happened, but her Marine blood kept her calm on the outside. She stood slowly, feeling a deep gash on her forehead. She gingerly touched it, but decided that Marc was more important right now. Where was he? She walked over on shaky legs to where he was. "Marc? Marc?!" she called, a little panicked. She gingerly held his wrist, relieved to feel his pulse even though it was slow. She looked around the plane, seeing the only opening was closed. A sense of nausea washed over her from the sudden claustrophobia that settled on her. "Stay calm, stay calm, Eric needs you," she told herself.


message 46: by yojharobed || I have no sword. I don't need a sword. Because I am the Doctor and this is my spoon. En garde!, Perché tutto il rum andato? ~Il Capitano Jack (last edited Jul 26, 2012 10:35AM) (new)

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Marc~Diandra

Marc felt himself slowly come out of a black fog and his eyes fluttered. He winced as the harsh sunlight streamed in through the plane windows and hit his eyes, and he looked around slowly to see...Diandra? She was kneeling beside him, holding his wrist and looking worried. He turned his hand and wrapped it around hers, squeezing lightly. He groaned as his head started to throb relentlessly with every beat of his heart.


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Diandra~Marc

Diandra was trying to decide what to do to wake him up when she saw his eyes. Blood was streaming from her wound on her forehead and she was starting to get dizzy, but tried to shake it off. "Marc!" She cried hoarsely. She blinked quickly and squeezed his hand. "Are you hurt?" she asked as she started looking for wounds.


yojharobed || I have no sword. I don't need a sword. Because I am the Doctor and this is my spoon. En garde! (yojharobed) | 104 comments Mod
Marc~Diandra

Marc sat up carefully. "Shh, I'm fine," he soothed, brushing back a lock of her hair. "I hit my head, but I'll live. You're the one that's hurt. Sit still and let me see your head." He pulled a bandanna out of his pocket and gently wiped the blood from her forehead. "Are you dizzy? Any double vision?" he asked, concerned.


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Diandra~Marc

Diandra shook her head, "no. Are you sure? Do you have any internal injuries?" she asked as she looked him over slowly. "I'm fine," she insisted, but sat still either way. "D'you think Eric's okay? Mirage? Gosh," she groaned and shook her head. A wave of dizziness overtook her and she leaned back, wincing. "I'm dizzy, no double vision."


yojharobed || I have no sword. I don't need a sword. Because I am the Doctor and this is my spoon. En garde! (yojharobed) | 104 comments Mod
Marc~Diandra

"No, I'm perfect," Marc said firmly. "I'm sure that they're fine. Mirage can take care of herself, and Eric looks plenty capable." He leaned over her, checking her vitals worriedly. "Just sit still, you don't want to make it worse. I'll go see if there is any water in the galley." He stood up.


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