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What do you like to see while reading?
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Jun 16, 2012 09:40AM
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I hate when people repeat themselves over and over. I also hate it when people have incorrect grammar, spelling, and puncutation. I really like when people are descriptive (without repeating) and when stories have a good plot!
I couldn't get past page 20 xD and that was after a week of trying! IMHO, it sounded like it was narrated by an extremely high strung hillbilly!
I actually liked that one. I mean, the book was set pretty far in the future, it would have been weird if they talked exactly like we do
Yeah but it just didn't strike me as..something worth going through all that trouble..I don't know.I have had people tell me that the book was great but I just can't quite get back to reading it.
Kelley wrote: "I know!I couldn't get through that book solely because of it's writing..."
What's weird about the writing?
What's weird about the writing?
You should, but try to keep an open mind. It's pointless if you go back thinking about how much you hated the writing. I actually stopped noticing it after a while
Oh, Charlie, she had this weird thing where all the characters had accents and she didn't use any quotation marks.
Sarah wrote: "I hate when people repeat themselves over and over. I also hate it when people have incorrect grammar, spelling, and puncutation. I really like when people are descriptive (without repeating) and w..."Amen
Sherri wrote: "Exactly! ot bascially sounded like a hillbilly xD"YES!I go by Sherri's words.But I think the plot is good...
xD bahahahaha!!!!! And no offence, I grew up in Virginia and heard people who talk like that, but reading it while I'm a 'spelling nazi' annoys the crap outta me
Holly wrote: "Oh, Charlie, she had this weird thing where all the characters had accents and she didn't use any quotation marks."
Weird. I might try it anyway
Weird. I might try it anyway
*feeing offended*A psychologist has every right to pry!
One way is to enquire and the other is stalk!For the good of the world!
Stalking is one of the biggest warning signs of zombification in its early stages. The brains eating, which happens to be a large part of a psychologists job, comes in later
What are you saying I made it all up? (oh crap I think she's on to me... QUICK!! Hide the evidence!)
*Hides phone behind back and calls on for personal security*Oh nothing!Seemed a bit too fishie*looks around the room with narrowed eyes*
*shuffles backward and chucks something out of door that appeared from nowhereSooooooooooo how's the weather been treating you?
Not too fine I'd say.*personal security standing below ground catches the object and texts me*
Look what we've got here!
*summons the wizard*Me:Follow her.See what she's up to.I just got a text from my security about some mysterious flying object,Now go!
Wizard:Yes,my lord
*puffs into smoke*
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