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message 51: by Kath (new)

Kath Middleton | 23860 comments Pat (Scorpio) wrote: "Ignite wrote: "Oh go on Pat and Katy. Have a go!"

I am trying Kath, but it keeps going astray."


So does the tune. That can be a fair point if you wish to make it!


message 52: by Jud (new)

Jud (judibud) | 16799 comments Simon (Highwayman) wrote: "Going astray? You mean we were supposed to be focussed?

Jud, can you delete the bit about darth vader from mine please."


But that would only leave the words squiddling and pookie


D.M. Andrews (author) Andrews (dmandrews) | 1551 comments I know someone else who's convinced it's Danger Mouse.

Crikey.


message 54: by [deleted user] (new)

I won't be entering but I will vote this time! I missed the last one while I was busy catching up after my holiday!

:0)


message 55: by Kath (new)

Kath Middleton | 23860 comments Sent mine in. It'll be the one without the mutant violins!


message 56: by Pat () (new)

Pat ()  | -245 comments Mine is in also, thanks to Ignites encouragement.


message 57: by Kath (new)

Kath Middleton | 23860 comments I'm always happy to encourage anyone Pat. (Even some of these author types!)


message 58: by Simon (Highwayman) (last edited Jun 14, 2012 01:13PM) (new)

Simon (Highwayman) (highwayman) | 4276 comments The authors seem to have gone quiet. Perhaps they think we are not taking this creativity thing seriously.

Perhaps I should take the squiddling reference out. It seemed appropriate at the time.


D.M. Andrews (author) Andrews (dmandrews) | 1551 comments I'm working on an entry :)


Gingerlily - The Full Wild | 34228 comments I'm working on an exit!

(not really, but its such a good line...)


D.M. Andrews (author) Andrews (dmandrews) | 1551 comments hehe - good one.


message 62: by Pat () (new)

Pat ()  | -245 comments It has gone very quiet here. they can't be scared, can they? No of coure not! Come on folks Give us a run for our money.


message 63: by Kath (new)

Kath Middleton | 23860 comments It will be a damning indictment upon our taltented authors if a few jumped-up readers can put them off. Are you submitting your biography then Simon? Fast Women, Loose Cars, was it? Fits the music quite nicely I think!


Gingerlily - The Full Wild | 34228 comments Fast Food, Loose Bowels more likely!


message 65: by Kath (new)

Kath Middleton | 23860 comments Well, you've met him, I haven't. I'll be guided by your assessment!


message 66: by Jud (new)

Jud (judibud) | 16799 comments snigger, snigger.


Simon (Highwayman) (highwayman) | 4276 comments My entry is in......
My Bio is still with the proof reader....


message 68: by Kath (new)

Kath Middleton | 23860 comments To prove s/he can read it ?


Simon (Highwayman) (highwayman) | 4276 comments s/he is still trying to get it through the google translator but is having problems with the english/canadian facility.


Patti (baconater) (goldengreene) | 56525 comments Oiy.

You're the one who has been ignoring me all week, Simon.

Jeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzzz


Simon (Highwayman) (highwayman) | 4276 comments Tut. And I was trying to be diplomatic by not mentioning your name....


D.M. Andrews (author) Andrews (dmandrews) | 1551 comments I've submitted to Jud.

(everyone does in the end...)


message 73: by Kath (new)

Kath Middleton | 23860 comments D.M. Andrews (GoodReads Author) wrote: "I've submitted to Jud.

(everyone does in the end...)"


It's that dominant Red Hair gene!


D.M. Andrews (author) Andrews (dmandrews) | 1551 comments It's the roundhouse kick - it's a slap in the face!


Patti (baconater) (goldengreene) | 56525 comments D.M. Andrews (GoodReads Author) wrote: "I've submitted to Jud.

(everyone does in the end...)"


Just spattered all over my iPad. Thanks.


D.M. Andrews (author) Andrews (dmandrews) | 1551 comments You're welcome :)


message 77: by Stuart (new)

Stuart Ayris (stuayris) | 2614 comments Just posted my entry to Jud!


message 78: by Jud (new)

Jud (judibud) | 16799 comments Just to confirm, everyone that has said they have sent their entries in here I have received them! Although I did edit Simon's a bit to make it a little more acceptable.


message 79: by Stuart (new)

Stuart Ayris (stuayris) | 2614 comments Thank you Jud!


message 80: by Jud (new)

Jud (judibud) | 16799 comments 5 entries so far


D.M. Andrews (author) Andrews (dmandrews) | 1551 comments I have this feeling we are going to know which one's Simon's ;)


message 82: by Jud (new)

Jud (judibud) | 16799 comments It's not the one with singing mermaids and talking animals...


message 83: by Emma (new)

Emma (emzibah) | 4125 comments Patti (Stir Crazy) wrote: "D.M. Andrews (GoodReads Author) wrote: "I've submitted to Jud.

(everyone does in the end...)"

Just spattered all over my iPad. Thanks."



Oh dear, me too!! You could have warned me!! :-)


message 84: by Jud (new)

Jud (judibud) | 16799 comments I have an early entry to share! I'm not gonna mention who wrote it but I love it and wanted to share it, if the author wants they can own up themselves! Thanks very much!



The little Mermaid gathered all the little fishes around her. Settling gently onto a rock, she softly sang to them of all the wonders of the land above.
Of the tall majestic trees and the gentle grasses, little fluffy lambs and all the talking animals.

The little fishes listened all agog; to hear the tales she had to tell.
Of the farmyard with the big red rooster and the little brown hens, of the brown eyed cows, and baby calves, which played in fields of green. The woolly sheep with the little lambs, leaping and jumping in the spring sunshine.

How the farmer lived in a large white house, with the thatched roof. And the sheep dogs who worked for their living. All the barn cats that kept the little brown mice from the corn. The cheerful farmer’s wife, who fed the chickens’ daily, was big and round with rosy cheeks.

The little fishes giggled and squirmed to hear such amazing things. The baby crabs listened, their eyes all on tiny stalks at such wondrous things.
The little mermaid smiled and sent them off home to tea, and dreams of magic beings that lived on the land.


message 85: by Jud (new)

Jud (judibud) | 16799 comments When I say early entry I mean it's an unofficial one! It's not being entered it's just for fun :o)


D.M. Andrews (author) Andrews (dmandrews) | 1551 comments Awwwww.... :)


message 87: by Jud (new)

Jud (judibud) | 16799 comments That's the winner in my eyes, since I'm sort of in charge of this contest can I call it off and declare the winner myself?


D.M. Andrews (author) Andrews (dmandrews) | 1551 comments Yup, if you want to end up in a tin of tuna ;)


message 89: by Jud (new)

Jud (judibud) | 16799 comments *cries*


Simon (Highwayman) (highwayman) | 4276 comments No mention of squid so we know who didn't write it.

Very good indeed though.

As it is the weekend now is the time to get the headphones on and write your submission......


Simon (Highwayman) (highwayman) | 4276 comments Why isn't the mermaid one an entry though?


message 92: by Pat () (last edited Jun 16, 2012 05:25AM) (new)

Pat ()  | -245 comments Are we still stuck on 5 entries Jud?

edit for ?


message 93: by Pat () (last edited Jun 16, 2012 08:47AM) (new)

Pat ()  | -245 comments Simon (Highwayman) wrote: "Why isn't the mermaid one an entry though?"

Already sent one in


message 94: by Tim (new)

Tim | 8539 comments Okay, I've scribbled something. Am I right in thinking I have to friend Jud before I can send it? (Still finding my way around...)


message 95: by Kath (new)

Kath Middleton | 23860 comments You might be able to send her a message without. It depends on what her settings are.


Patti (baconater) (goldengreene) | 56525 comments Friending is easiest Tim. Well, I think so anyway. If you're not friends you have to do a silly capcha thing.

Just click Jud's name and you'll see where to friend her.


D.M. Andrews (author) Andrews (dmandrews) | 1551 comments And a dance, Patti, don't forget the dance.


Patti (baconater) (goldengreene) | 56525 comments Pat (Scorpio) wrote: "Simon (Highwayman) wrote: "Why isn't the mermaid one an entry though?"

Already sent one in"


Did you write that Pat? It's lovely!


Simon (Highwayman) (highwayman) | 4276 comments Everyone can pm me. Of course if it is too good I won't send it to jud.


Geoff (G. Robbins) (merda constat variat altitudo) (snibborg) | 8204 comments D.M. Andrews (GoodReads Author) wrote: "I'm trying to work out what old TV series used that music...

Thanks, Jud!! :)"


I think you may find it was The Last Song, a comedy series written by Carla Laine Starring Geoffrey Palmer.


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