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I trudged to the backyard, worn with boredom. As I bent down to begin clipping the thousands of weeds outlining our whole house, I heard a series of stomping behind me. Eyes boggling, I turn around.....
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I trudged to the backyard, worn with boredom. As I bent down to begin clipping the thousands of weeds outlining our whole house, I heard a series of stomping behind me. Eyes boggling, I turn around.
I looked around nothing was there. I looked back down to see a blue stone. "What the heck," I muttered. I picked it up. It glowed a blue color. I lookedat it wierdly. "Wow, its so pretty," I muttered. I looked back. Still nothing was there. "Just hearing thing," I muttered. I walked into the house holding the stone. The eerie silence of the house scared. Namine wasn't home 'cuz her and dad went to an eye appointment, mother was at her cooking class, Haru was at his friend's house, I couldn't visit Joyce because she was at Drama Club. The only person who I was able to visit was Leo, but he lived on the edge of town. I heard something run in the kitchen. I looked up. "Haru," I said on instinct. He was always trying to scare me. 'Do you believe in magic,' something said. I looked around. "Hello," I said. 'Do you believe in magic,' the voice came again. This time I realized I wasn't hearing it with my ears....but with my mind. "WHO'S HERE," I shouted. 'Just answer the question, do you believe in magic,' it said again. I sighed. "Yes, yes I do believe in magic," I said. 'Hello Guardian,' the voice said. I froze. "Wait what? I'm not the guardian...who are you! QUIT MESSING WITH MY MIND," I cried out. I heard a faint laugh. 'Of course yo uare then Guardian,' the voice said again. I shook my head and ran towards the kitchen. 'Only a true Guardian would run towards the trouble,' the voice said. I walked in the kitchen to see a giant troll like creature. "A TROLLOCK," I said in aww. Okay maybe more like AHHHHHHH.
(Okay)I trudged into the backyard, worn with boredom. As I bent down to begin clipping the thousands of weeds outlining our whole hpus, I heard a series of stomping behind me. Eyes boggling, I turn around to see my sixteen other siblings racing out of the house. I rolled off to the side as the wild animals they call humans raced past and left the
yard in total disaray.
"Great," I groaned.
I placed my hands over the grass and willed it to grow back. It did and I smiled. Next I turned to the weeds and they shriveled up instantaniously. Sure being one of sixteen seedrian children was hard, but it was worth it. I placed my hand on a wilting flower and it sprung to life. It was a bright yellow daisy and my smile grew as it did.
Yes, being a seedrian was worth it.
Love the stories!! And I like how you guys temporarily disregarded your need to mention a Sonic character. :P
Hehe. Mine was about a Sonic species. XD! I discretly included my nerdness.
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alrighty...
i trudged into the backyard, worn with boredom. as i bent down to begin clipping the many weeds that surounded the whole house, i heard a series of stomping behind me. eyes boggling, i turned around and took of running. i heard a scream of anger behind me. "i didnt mean to hurt your rat!" i cried as i raced up the porch. an other rage growl filled the air. i yanked on the door, only to find that it was locked. slowly turning, i saw my older sister walking up the steps with a triumphant smile on her face. she raise her right index finger and drew it across her neck, as if telling me i was about to die. grimacing, i ran towards the rail. i jumped it, barely making it past the deadly thorns of the rose bush. "it was just an acident!" i huffed as i came around the back of the house once again. spinning to face her, i grabbed her by the shoulders. holding her there, i began to speak in a very calm voice. "listen to me. your pet vermin is upstairs in the cage. it is perfectly safe. i did nothing to it that you told me not to."
"but-" she began, but i silenced her with a glare. " now leave me alone." calmly, i released her shoulders. walking away, i heard her mutter something. sighing, i got back to work.
i trudged into the backyard, worn with boredom. as i bent down to begin clipping the many weeds that surounded the whole house, i heard a series of stomping behind me. eyes boggling, i turned around and took of running. i heard a scream of anger behind me. "i didnt mean to hurt your rat!" i cried as i raced up the porch. an other rage growl filled the air. i yanked on the door, only to find that it was locked. slowly turning, i saw my older sister walking up the steps with a triumphant smile on her face. she raise her right index finger and drew it across her neck, as if telling me i was about to die. grimacing, i ran towards the rail. i jumped it, barely making it past the deadly thorns of the rose bush. "it was just an acident!" i huffed as i came around the back of the house once again. spinning to face her, i grabbed her by the shoulders. holding her there, i began to speak in a very calm voice. "listen to me. your pet vermin is upstairs in the cage. it is perfectly safe. i did nothing to it that you told me not to."
"but-" she began, but i silenced her with a glare. " now leave me alone." calmly, i released her shoulders. walking away, i heard her mutter something. sighing, i got back to work.
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Love 'em all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I trudged to the backyard, worn with boredom. As I bent down to begin clipping the thousands of weeds outlining our whole house, I heard a series of stomping behind me. Eyes boggling, I turn around.....
...to see an elephant. An elephant! Bravely, I stepped up to the beast and...okay, really, I screamed and tried to run away, but I tripped over something-probably my own feet-and had to watch helplessly from the ground as the monstrous creature lumbered over to me. Slowly, the elephant reached out its trunk, carefully wrapping it around my waist. I closed my eyes tight, waiting to be lifted into the air then descend into the monster's eager jaws. I felt myself being lifted off the ground. Here it comes, I thought. I really should have been nicer to my mom...and that was the last thought I had before I realized the elephant was trying to set me down on my feet. Quickly, I took my own weight, and the trunk retracted. I dared to peek at the animal. It didn't look evil...
I won't ask why you thought the elephant was going to eat you.
XD! Nice. I never thought of elephants as man eating.
you didn't? but everyone knows that they are!!!!
They are??? I so confuzzled!
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Hey, the girl in my story is an idiot. Don't judge. XD
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ME TOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I trudged to the backyard, worn with boredom. As I bent down to begin clipping the thousands of weeds outlining our whole house, I heard a series of stomping behind me. Eyes boggling, I turn around..... And saw an army! There had to be at least a thousand peole in uniform marching towards me. And it didn't look like they were stopping. Terrified I turned to run but found another group of soldiers facing me. I was surrounded on all sides. Four of the men picked me up and threw me into a wooden cart. They rolled the cart for what felt like hours, when finally we reached what I could only guess was their secret army base. They tied me up and told me to wait for their leader to talk come so he could question me. Bewildered, I struggled against the ropes that held me, but it was no use. Then, a grotesque creature entered the room. Made mostly of slime, it glooped toward me. The last thing I remember are those wickedly sharp teeth closing over me.
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HOLY FUDGE THAT WAS AMAZING!1!!
Love the stories!! Alex, follow Ana's advice! :)
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