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Writing Prompt Numero...Three
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Brooklyn
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Mar 21, 2012 05:42PM
Write something sappy. Don't look at me like that, you know you want to. It doesn't have to be REALLY sappy, just normal teenage crush stuff is fine. Have fun!
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He turned his head to talk to one of his friends, and I could see his face. He was smiling, telling a joke I couldn't hear, then laughing as he delivered the punch line. A funny feeling ran through my heart. It was...electric. That's the only way to describe it. A little trill of electricity sparked my heart.He's cute, I thought. Then I realized what had just entered my brain. I can't believe I just thought that, I thought to myself. Before, whenever I thought of cute I thought of babies and puppies. Not boys. But it was true. He was cute.
That brought another pang of electric feeling, not as good this time, because I knew he didn't like me. He probably didn't even know my name. Why would he? He had his pick of girls, more or less, any of the prettier, more popular girls. I knew that.
But couldn't he see, just look over into my corner and see that I wasn't shallow or silly like those girls? Couldn't he see that I liked him for who he was, that I thought he was funny and cute? Unbidden, lyrics popped into my head.
Can you feel the things I feel, right now, with you?
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She layed there watching him as he layed there. His soft orange chest rose up and down as he slept. Sonic had told her to go watch him. She watched it go up and down in perfect rythm. She smiled. If only he knew how I felt, she thought. She quickly shook the thought away. He liked Selia, not her. Frost layed down on her back. "You know you're not worth it," she muttered to herself. Selia was pretty much perfect. She was strong, brave, sweet, caring, nurturing, lovable, and well just plain out perfect. Frost sighed as she listed everything she was. Destructive, angery, dark, a monster, and invisable. Invisable to everyone...but Tails. Maybe he did care about her, but not like he cared about Selia. Frost sighed. "Great another girl to try to be like," she said. Tails rolled over so he faced her. Frost looked at his sweet, peaceful face. She sighed. He looked so gentle and calm when he was asleep, not that he wasn't when he was awake, but there was someting different about him. She sighed. "What are you up to," she muttered to the sleepin fox.
I felt the surge of goosebumps raise on my arms, just looking at him. Jet black quills with dark red streaks, red eyes that screamed danger, golden rings just to keep his energy in. Everything about him was dangerous...which made more than just cute. Why did he ever pick ME? I wondered, He could do so much better.He smiled a dangerously wicked smile and I surpressed a shudder. What could I do to ever make him happy? Why didn't he pick someone more like him? Someone dangerous, powerful, someone who understood...I jerked upright, because I could understand.
Suddenly, his fingers curled around mine, and more chills racked my body. I was scared of him, but he said that he really cared about me, possibly-no, I couldn't think that, could I? I looked at him with his drop-dead-gorgesnous, his looks that could kill. His blood red eyes poured into mine and another smile curled his lips. My heart was soaring through the sky, my stomach was in knots, my brain was losing control. But he was worth it. Despite his looks, he was the one person who TRULY understood.
Wow! Love all the Sonic stuff! Ana, GREAT description of Selia. :P Kayla-breathtaking! "drop-dead-gorgesnous" love it!
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XD! I was blushing SOOOOO badly when I wrote that!!!!
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Ohmigod we need to extract more sap out of the Sonic freaks! It's HILARIOUS! Love the cheesy heartbreakness, Bookland. :)Hehe, anyway...
I plunged into the pool, cold water slapping my thighs, my hair stretching out, and my swimsuit swaying. As I ducked under to practice holding my breath, a dark shape floated nearby, barely noticeable behind my goggles.
I rose back up, gasping for air. I was getting better at holding my breath. Meanwhile, the shape swam closer, and that's when I realized it was a hot guy.
His six-pack glittered in the sunbeams shining through the window. He wasn't too tall, which was admirable for dwarf girls like me. He had the most enlightening smile- soft and loving. It pierced my heart.
I dove beneath the water's surface to avoid him looking at me. Too embarassing! But maybe he liked me too? It was too much to ask for. Yet I was tempted to try to win him over.
When I went back up, I tried not to blush. The guy was only six feet to my left, and his muscular arms splashed the water near me.
It was only when he leaned back onto the edge of the pool that I realized a stunningly beautiful girl laughed beside him.
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LOL! Maybe if I try hard enough, my brain power will will Sonic characters to life! :O!!!! LIGHTBULB!!! (Said how Gru says it)
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You know, the main character???
I don't think I spelled his name right though...
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Haven't you seen Despicable Me?
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LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOOLOLOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXXDXDXDXDXDX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thanks Bookland! and i think that between ana and kayla, if all it took was willpower to bring characters to life, then sonic would already exist. and tails would be a pilot XD
And Shadow would be my boyfriend. >:)
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XD! What? He would!
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XD! Deffinatly! Well...unless I kept passing out from epicness...O.o
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hahaha. If you've got shadow, I want sonic! :p
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oh snap she's gonna give me a concussion with that hammer
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Lol. You can have Sonic, at least Shadow doesn't have some crazy fangirl following him around...oh wait...
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XD! Hey, don't make me sic Shadow on you!...crap I am turning into a creepy fangirl that stalks Shadow....
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Lol. Yes you are.
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i'm, like, entirely outside of this conversation. don't kill me, but i don't really know sonic about that much. anyhow...
his perfect blonde hair moved slightly when he spoke. his laugh pierced the air as one of the friends that always crouded him told a joke. his blue eyes smiled he replied to someone. i took in all of this from across the room. i sighed. he thought of me as a friend, nothing more. would he ever know of my conceled feelings for him? everyone in the grade thought he liked the other, equaly beutiful girl, and that asumtion was perfectly reasonable. could i, a less than perfect someone, ever have a chance?
his perfect blonde hair moved slightly when he spoke. his laugh pierced the air as one of the friends that always crouded him told a joke. his blue eyes smiled he replied to someone. i took in all of this from across the room. i sighed. he thought of me as a friend, nothing more. would he ever know of my conceled feelings for him? everyone in the grade thought he liked the other, equaly beutiful girl, and that asumtion was perfectly reasonable. could i, a less than perfect someone, ever have a chance?
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That's awesome Megan! And don't worry about the Sonic stuff, I didn't know a lot about it either, and it only took me a year to get it all figured out XD. You can generally just ignore their conversations...no offense guys! XD
Ok. I'm ignoring all sonic geeks.
Aw...I fell neglected. :'( jk
HOLD ME SHADOW!!!!!!
you should feel neglected... *evil laughter*
Bwahahahahahaha!!!!!! *sobs onto Shadow's shoulder. Looks up, realizes what she's doing, and backs away slowly* hehe...DON'T KILL ME!!!!!
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I DON'T WANNA DIE!!!! I'M GOING WITH ANA!!! *Runs into wall* DANGIT NOT AGAIN!!!
