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Day 24~ Rewriting the Ending
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Mar 16, 2012 08:02AM
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But if I could wave a wand I would take Leland and Reyes betrayals away so that Charley wouldn't be hurting so badly.
I wouldn't change a thing. Things happen for a reason, but something good came out of it for Charley, and the angels were not kidding when they said there would be a time of suffering!
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I agree with Traci and Tabitha.
I wouldn't change the ending NEVER, but I'd sure as hell add things. I'm still putting my weird thoughts together to post it. Hee, I'm so bad.
I don't think I would change anything either- Leland and Reyes have Charley in a pretty crappy position, but she's really strong and I can't wait to see how she handles it! I think the hardest part of being locked up for her will be the lack of all-access coffee!! I also think it may even bring her closer with her sister, and Leland definitely has some explaining to do...
I agree with all of you. I would not change the ending because Charley will grow stronger through her suffering. Hopefully, the added tension between Reyes and Charley will force Reyes to make some changes in the near future (fingers crossed). I too hope this will strengthen Charley and her sisters relationship as well as Charley and Ubies relationship.In all, the ending was hard on the heart but necessary for the growth of the characters and the build up of the story line...I would not change a thing.
I'm not a writer, so I would not dare to presume to rewrite an ending. That being said, I will say I HATE cliffhangers...but this book was perfect the way it ended. Hurtful, but perfect. Charlie now has a true friend that cannot be killed (or talk back }:)). Garrett will return. It's time for our little A.D.D. girl to grow up! And come up with snarkier comments!
Happy with the ending....only Darynda knows what's next and I trust her completely......but there must be a happily ever after at the end of all the books! I love Reyes!!!!! x
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"You are the BEST fan group, ever! Congratulations to getting over 100 members. That's awesome!
Thanks bunches! "
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Cindy wrote: "I'm not a writer, so I would not dare to presume to rewrite an ending. That being said, I will say I HATE cliffhangers...but this book was perfect the way it ended. Hurtful, but perfect. Charlie..."Exactly, Cindy! I don't think the ending was really a cliffhanger... only a tease of what's to come!! And there are many goodies we have to look forward to! I mean, Reyes is essentially free, Garrett will be around, and Charley has an awesome new guardian!
I'm happy with the ending, I'm sorry Charley has to suffer because of her dad but it seems the only way she can reach her powers is by suffering or being mad at something. Plus, the dog is such a great addition! I don't know what to think about the bike gang - I wonder about their future role.Cliffhangers are horrible but well, that's what keeps me coming back ;)
Dana wrote: "Just found this message in my inbox! Squee! That Jones is something else!"You are the BEST fan group, ever! Congratulations to getting over 100 members. That's awesome!
Thanks bunches! "
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WOW!! She's amazing :D
Ines wrote: "Dana wrote: "Just found this message in my inbox! Squee! That Jones is something else!"You are the BEST fan group, ever! Congratulations to getting over 100 members. That's awesome!
Thanks bu..."
YAY!!! That's so awesome! (and we are a pretty good fan group, if I do say so myself!)
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"You are the BEST fan group, ever! Congratulations to getting over 100 members. That's awesome!
Thanks bunches! "
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She's the best!!!!
Cindy wrote: "I'm not a writer, so I would not dare to presume to rewrite an ending. That being said, I will say I HATE cliffhangers...but this book was perfect the way it ended. Hurtful, but perfect. Charlie..."As always, well said Cindy. :-)
I love Darynda and the rest of you gals. You make me laugh and are all caring individuals. Darynda is great to us. She keeps a close eye on what we are talking about and drops in every now and then to add her input. I think that is wonderful. You never know what she might like...who knows?
I loved the ending and wouldn't change a thing. As much as I love Reyes I love the new bikers and the idea that Reyes might have some competition..lol I can't wait to read more.
I wouldnt change a thing!Its eventually going to lead to their HEA even if it takes a little longer then we hoped
I LOVE that Darynda is so "HANDS ON" with her fans....she's in Texas and Dakota Cassidy (another author I love) is going to meet her tonight. Wearing blue nail polish and skinny jeans & if I know Dakota, some kick-ass shoes! (I'm so like Charley,in that I can be lured away from a subject). Sooo, back to the book...the biker gang are Charley voyeurs, but I do wonder why Charley kissed Donovan while she knew Reyes was watching....hmmmm....TEASE!
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Charley needs to make Reyes suffer a bit! I want their HEA, but that man needs a bit of torment right now.
Traci wrote: "Cindy wrote: "I LOVE that Darynda is so "HANDS ON" with her fans....she's in Texas and Dakota Cassidy (another author I love) is going to meet her tonight. Wearing blue nail polish and skinny jean..."Like I said: TEASE! But in a "Good" way. We women earn the right to be called BITCH...Beautiful, Intellagent, Talented, Charming, Happy!
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Charley just gave Reyes a little payback, you know the saying, "Payback is a bitch". Reyes is super jealous of any man near his girl, you guys remember his name for Garrett, "it". I imagine we will all be seeing how Reyes makes Charley admit that he is her one and only. So much speculation and so much time until we discover what Darynda's muse has in store for us. Can us say "bibliophilicly frustrated", I cant wait until October. Thank goodness for all of you gals.
I think Charley was feeling down because of her dad, Reyes and Garrett's almost death that she could blame on herself... it was too much pain and Donovan was adorable and went there to see how she was. He was so kind that I guess she needed a little love for a change. I'm not sure if it was intended as a tease, but it sure ended up like that!
Well Charley did say she knew where she stood with Donovan...that he'd sell her out for motorcycle parts...hee!
Cindy wrote: "Well Charley did say she knew where she stood with Donovan...that he'd sell her out for motorcycle parts...hee!"Cindy and Dana, I totally agree with both of you. Reyes needed a major "slap" in the face after his behavior. Kissing Donovan may not have been intended as nothing more than emotional comfort on Charley's part, but Reyes definitely deserves a good ol' fashion wake up call.
Charley needs to get her bitch on and tease Reyes to his knees.
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Cindy and Dana, I totally agree with both of you. Reyes needed a maj..."
Lub it, get your bitch on. Heee! Hee!
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Oh, so, nice. Does he come with the chains?
Cindy wrote: "Traci wrote: "Cindy wrote: "I LOVE that Darynda is so "HANDS ON" with her fans....she's in Texas and Dakota Cassidy (another author I love) is going to meet her tonight. Wearing blue nail polish a..."I love that, Cindy! :)
Cindy wrote: "DONOVAN!"
Wow...um, I can think of lots of ways to put those chains to good use. :p
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Very nice!!! Comes complete with his own chains...'Scuse me while I get the bedframe and locks ready ;)
Yummy!! I have to agree with everyone. Reyes needs a little payback after what all he has put Charley through.
Cindy wrote: "DONOVAN!"
Oooo, just what I needed- some nightly eye candy!! Thanks Cindy!
Your welcome...and I will share Donovan...NOT REYES! If Charley drops Reyes (not happenin') I get him!!!
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I loved the ending and wouldn't dream of changing any of it!!! Darynda writes such great intertwining plots and characters that changing anything, would majorly screw things up!
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Comment #30 belonged to Mel.
Hey Mel, congratz!
You have won 1 copy of Fourth Grave Beneath My Feet by Darynda Jones!
This book will be pre~ordered and sent to the address you wish to receive mail.
Please email me your address so you I can make the purchase.
Thank you girls, for always hanging out and having a ball.
Yeah!!! Thanks so much. I never win anything and this is a great gift to win. :)
Thank you ladies! Good luck to you next time. :)
Congratulations Mel! And I like the Donovan Cindy picked... even though I think the chains are working for him! Hehe
Thanks Candie, Ines and Traci. Hope you win next time. :)
Oh, I missed it! Well, a big belated congrats to you, Mel!! You totally deserve it! (even though we're all super jealous of your prize ;-) )
Thanks Stephanie! Hopefully, you will win next time.
Hey ladies,when does the next book come out? Please say it isn't a year wait!
