What do you think of my new idea?

[Dylan]

Hi, I'm having a blast writing my horror, "Drunk on Blood" so I decided to write another story of a different genre. It's about a father and son assassin team. They kill sinners and really bad murderers all over the world in an attemp to clean up crime. The're mother/wife was killed by a ruthless murder and want to find him for revenge. So what do you think of that? Any ideas on how I can improve it?

[Michelle]

okay, how do they know who the sinners/murderers are? how do they find them?

[Dylan]

Well, they watch the news, and read the paper searching for murderers/sinners. Is there a better way for them to find them?

[Michelle]

well, im not sure. like you never know if they eventually have to go to another country or something and find someone in hiding. *Shrugs*

[Riley]

How 'bout one of them is on the FBI or something? And they know what criminals actually committed the crime, but got off. So they hunt them down, because if you're suspected for a crime you have to give up your fingerprints and stuff, so they could use that to track them.

[Dylan]

Thanks Riley, that's a good idea. I need to start reading crime books now huh?

[Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive.]

I think that it sounds really cool, Dillon!

[Dylan]

Thanks Seth! Any advice?

[Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive.]

Well, b4 you start writing make sure that you know what kind of characters you want the dad and son to be. I've had a lot of problems with that. If you want them to be the villains, so be it. But if they are the goodies, make sure that it's clear. From how you wrote it (see above) it seems like they are villians, thought they are trying to do it for a good cause. Sorry, just sayin' that you should clear it up, then I got carried away! ^^

[Dylan]

Thanks, I still have some work to do. I've also been thinking of writing a book about genocide.

[Veronica, What the neck!?]

You could put in a sci-fi twist, with maybe the son having some special mental ability that would somehow enable him to detect the bad guys.

[Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive.]

that'd be coolio too