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message 4501: by [deleted user] (new)

My older cousin told me that.


message 4502: by Teresa (new)

Teresa (rainbowlover) | 387 comments Ur older cousin scares me


message 4503: by [deleted user] (new)

He has a lot of scary stories.


message 4504: by Teresa (new)

Teresa (rainbowlover) | 387 comments please dont tell any more


message 4505: by [deleted user] (new)

I won't.


message 4506: by Karina (new)

Karina Ebony my theatre teacher told the same story but a little different


message 4507: by [deleted user] (new)

I probably messed up some, he told me the story two summers ago.


message 4508: by Karina (new)

Karina This is the way she said it:


One summer she and a friend were taking a road trip somewhere. it was only the two of them and her little puppy. They were in the car and had the radio on when they heard that near the place where they were driving there had been some murders and people should be careful because the guy was still out killing. They thought it would be best to stop at a motel until it was daylight again. They got two separate rooms. My teacher woke up in the middle on the night because she felt something was wrong but didn't know what. she reached down to pet her dog and he licked her hand and decided to ignore her feeling and go back to sleep...later when she woke up she went next door to get her friend and found her sliced up, written in blood on the wall were the words "humans can lick too"


message 4509: by [deleted user] (new)

That's not what I heard...


message 4510: by Karina (new)

Karina she just retold it a different way...to make it scarier i guess.


message 4511: by Madeleine (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments My 5th grade teacher told a really freaky story when we wemt on a camping trip. They wouldnt tell us of it was real or false though.


message 4512: by Karina (new)

Karina tell it!


message 4513: by Madeleine (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments I can barely remeber it...


message 4514: by Karina (new)

Karina :( sucks

I know a true story but I'm not sure if i should share it


message 4515: by Teresa (new)

Teresa (rainbowlover) | 387 comments SHARE IT!!!!!!!!!


message 4516: by Madeleine (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments Please?????


message 4517: by [deleted user] (new)

Share it please.


message 4518: by Teresa (new)

Teresa (rainbowlover) | 387 comments Pretty please


message 4519: by Madeleine (last edited Apr 16, 2012 05:53PM) (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments *horror music*

That is scary.


Guys im so loney!


message 4520: by Teresa (new)

Teresa (rainbowlover) | 387 comments OMG!!!!!!! THAT ACTUALLY HAPPENED?!?!?!?!


message 4521: by Karina (new)

Karina Yea..my mom went to her funeral. she says that until this day she will never forget the way her eyes looks because even though she was dead it looked like she was still suffering.


message 4522: by Teresa (new)

Teresa (rainbowlover) | 387 comments uggg....gotta go....mer


message 4523: by [deleted user] (new)

I got some OJ.


message 4524: by Madeleine (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments Being idle is not good for the mind


message 4525: by Karina (new)

Karina what if we tell silly stories now?


message 4526: by Madeleine (last edited Apr 16, 2012 06:04PM) (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments Ooo. I have one about zoorbles!


message 4527: by Karina (new)

Karina share!


message 4528: by Madeleine (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments Let me find it...


message 4529: by Karina (new)

Karina Ha ok..ill wait patiently (:


message 4530: by Madeleine (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments In a faraway place
Admist sparkling stars
in that vacuum of space
Is a planet called Zars

Zars is a land
Wherethe Zoorbles do roam
Bemeath bright colored planets
to them it is home

The zoorbles are special,
From their horns to their toes
they're covered with specles
From their feet to theor nose

And these Zoorbles ar proud
Oh yez, proud indeed
With their six legs and horns
And their dominance of speed

Now Atticus Zoorble,
He stood out a lot
He really was different,
he had not one spot.

His mane was quite wild,
It could not be tamed
His legs counted seven
Sohe walked as thoigh lamed

Every year on the eve
Of Zoorble-Hoorble Day,
The zoorbles traveled
Down the Woorble way

All except Atticus
Who was seen with disdain
Because he was different,
He was told to remain

So as they all left
He sat there and cried
He was more than appearance,
He was like them inside

Whe grazing alone
In his deep reverie
He heard a great shriek
It was not one of glee

He lifted his head
and pondered the noise
then went at a trot
Towards the forest of Zoise

Now the forest of Zoise
Had the mud hole of Gif
On the slippery path
To Ziffer van Dif

And the forest of Zoise
Sat on Woorble Way
And the mud he of Zif
Caught Zoorbles that day

Zoorbles who struggled
And wiggled and called
For the help of another
as their journey was stalled

Now Atticus saw them
And hurried with speed
Hoping he could give them
The help they did need

Those Zoorble saw him
And cried out in glee
For Atticus had come
To set them all free

Mattered not did his stripes
His mane, leg, nor horn
He got them all out
No more did they scorn

They thought him a hero
And said just as much
They gave him the trophy
Of Zimmer van Dutch

So that is the story
Of Atticus the Zoorble
Who saved his new friends
From something so horrible


message 4531: by Karina (new)

Karina Haha cute!..I love the name atticus .o.o
and it sound like something by Dr. Seuss


message 4532: by Madeleine (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments I had to write a seuss lile allegpry (?) For english class. Thats probably why


message 4533: by Karina (new)

Karina ohh you wrote it>!??! thats awesome! you should put this in the folder labeled Our Writing :D


message 4534: by Madeleine (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments *groan* but im too lazy...


message 4535: by Madeleine (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments Wish there was a "poke" feature here


message 4536: by Kauthar (new)

Kauthar | 779 comments Karina wrote: "ohh you wrote it>!??! thats awesome! you should put this in the folder labeled Our Writing :D"

you should put it in POEM POSTER


message 4537: by Karina (new)

Karina ohh yeah I forgot about Poem poster!

All you have to do it COpy and Paste!!

*POKE*


message 4538: by Madeleine (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments Cant. Have no xomputer. Only nook color.


message 4539: by Madeleine (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments Wait-figured it out :)


message 4540: by Karina (new)

Karina ohh sucks..sort of i guess

*POKE*


message 4541: by Karina (new)

Karina oh yay! i just saw it haha


message 4542: by Madeleine (last edited Apr 16, 2012 07:07PM) (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments *pokity poke poke*


message 4543: by Madeleine (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments Who plays cello?


message 4544: by Courtney (new)

Courtney I play violin!


message 4545: by Karina (new)

Karina Do not start a poke war with me...I'll win :D

*poke poke poke poke POKE*

Nope but I've always wanted to learn how to play it!!


message 4546: by Madeleine (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments I got a new cello and its AMAZING!


message 4547: by Madeleine (new)

Madeleine | 1065 comments I just cant fimd my music though :(


message 4548: by Courtney (new)

Courtney Madeleine wrote: "I just cant fimd my music though :("


What do you mean?


message 4549: by Karina (new)

Karina Ohh Violins make beautiful sound (:

I think she means music sheets?


message 4550: by [deleted user] (new)

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