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Anna (SylviaGrant) I would be pleased to help you Scarlet.


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Anna (SylviaGrant) You haven't written a single thing.
Do you need story ideas? I have lots.
By the way it isn't my ideas....
26. His dog Rex had been missing two days. His dish sat untouched on the kitchen floor.

27. The kid ran fast. His legs pumped and he pushed himself past the point of pain. He needed to get away.

28. Janet Livingstone was no fool. Her husband had divorced her two years ago, and she had been surviving ever since.

29. Sally sat up in her bed. She was positive she heard a noise. Something that didn’t belong…

30. He had done it! With shaky hands he signed his one million dollar cheque over to the bank teller.

31. Lake Louise was beautiful. It was a skier’s haven. Everywhere Jack looked was paradise. After five years of saving, he was finally on his dream vacation.

32. The turbulence was getting worse. The pilot looked at his co-captain and nodded. It was time they alerted the passengers.

33. He looked out the tiny window. Staring at the sun, a tear ran down his face. This was the closest he would ever get to freedom again. His life was this tiny cell. There was no escape.

34. She was a karate expert. None was better in their field. Yet she couldn’t get the rest of her life together. Even now the landlord was on the hunt for her.

35. Crash. The attorney looked up from his newspaper. Incredibly, a red Pinto and black Mercedes had just crashed in front of him. He smiled, and approached the two cars. He withdrew his business card and handed it to each of them. “I saw the whole thing. Whoever hires me, will get a nice settlement.”


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Sarah Weldon (sarahrweldon-author) | 6045 comments newspapers are a good source of opening paragraphs too!


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