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Andre Jute (andrejute) | 4851 comments Mod
Amazon now publishes on the book's page a selection of the phrases from it which readers highlighted. This is clearly what readers consider important. Here are two phrases most commonly highlighted by readers of STIEG LARSSON Man, Myth & Mistress

...an intellectual should count his enemies with pride as the measure of his righteousness, and if he finds none backtrack to when he sold out...

...entirely independent of what their self-appointed betters though they should be reading, deciding for themselves on the large samples from books...

The first is an authorial opinion on independence of mind, the second refers to the readers' own Kindle experience.

STIEG LARSSON Man, Myth & Mistress by Andre Jute STIEG LARSSON Man, Myth & Mistress by Andrew McCoy


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J.A. Beard (jabeard) Interesting. I wonder how often people highlight in fiction.


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Claudine | 1110 comments Mod
Maybe I am an apathetic reader....I don't sit with a highlighter ready to mark certain passages.


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Katie Stewart (katiewstewart) | 1099 comments You can highlight on your Kindle, but how would Amazon know if you did that? (I highlighted a metaphor in Iditarod that I particularly liked, but that doesn't appear on that book's page, I'm glad to say. I'd like to think I can do something without the whole world knowing.)


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Margaret (xenasmom) | 306 comments I am a huge fan of those teeny, tiny sitcky notes. I use them when there is, what I consider, a wonderful passage in a book. But then I also collect quotes.


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Claudine | 1110 comments Mod
I presume there is some kind of built in feedback that allows Amazon to "read" whatever you would add to a bought ebook whenever you are online on your device?


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Andre Jute (andrejute) | 4851 comments Mod
Last time I looked, you had to tick a box on Manage your Kindle to have your notes and annotations (and presumably your highlights) saved to Amazon's server. Claudine and Sue will remember that I looked into that when we set up the panel to edit THE MEYERSCO HELIX, and decided a good old-fashioned exchange of letters between editors was more secure -- and a damn sight more comforting. I'm glad I did, and with it instituted notes in Word, because the Kindle as a notetaker/annotator turned out to be very unreliable, at least in my hands.

Frankly, like Claudine, I would feel uncomfortable if a monster as unpredictable and arbitrary and crude (by comparison with the gentlemen who once inhabited publishing) as the Zon were to know what I write on manuscripts, many of which are other people's work. Amazon, I fear, on the slightest pretext will turn into Big Brother.

@Margie. There was time when all writers, and thoughtful people, had commonplace books into which they copied passages from books, their own best thoughts, etc. I'm glad to hear you keep up the practice. You will love the highlight facility on the Kindle.

@ J.a. One lady writer has reaching for a hundred readers highlighting the same passage, and that is just one of the many passages highlighted by large numbers of her readers in only one of her books. See link below.

@Katie Now you have me chewing my fingernails. You can write to me privately to tell me what it is. Put a poor writer out of his misery!


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Andre Jute (andrejute) | 4851 comments Mod
Writers on ROBUST are cordially invited to post highlights readers have made, as reported by Amazon, on http://www.amazon.com/gp/customer-for...

Readers on ROBUST: If Amazon hasn't yet reported your highlight, there is no reason you shouldn copy and paste it here:
http://www.amazon.com/gp/customer-for...
But do remember to name the book and the author!


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Andre Jute (andrejute) | 4851 comments Mod
It's a amazing what readers see in your books. Margie, in her review of IDITAROD at Librarian's Quest
http://librariansquest.blogspot.com/2...
includes this line in one of her quotations:

"The ptarmigan decided he and his dogs were not a threat and settled like down from a tearing pillow fight."

It's the sort of line no novelist should throw away for readers to glide over at the end of a passage of hot action. Of course, the problem is, the novelist himself glides over it because his focus is on the action. A professional doesn't say, Gee, lookit me, wonderful image. He says, Christ, that's a darling little phrase, let's murder it, it holds up the story. All that saved the metaphor is the *action* of the ptarmigan settling: in so detailed a novel, it would have shattered both the idyll and the pressing, urgent realism to leave them hanging, because many readers will know they cannot fly anywhere at night. (It's like the deer/elk/moose Sharon raised, but worse.)

It wasn't until Margie quoted the line that, after reading it a hundred times without noticing (after deciding grudgingly it had better stay), I again noticed what a charming line it is, and presumed Margie chose it because "a tearing pillow fight" appeals to the juvenile in her -- and her readership, of course!


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Margaret (xenasmom) | 306 comments Andre Jute wrote: "It's a amazing what readers see in your books. Margie, in her review of IDITAROD at Librarian's Quest
http://librariansquest.blogspot.com/2...
includes this line in..."


If I might just step in here...I love that line because yes, I freely admit, I am still a kid at heart sometimes (hard not to be after 33+ years as a teacher) and yes, it appeals to my students but a tearing pillow fight is a universal image. Most of us have been in pillow fights at one time or at the very least read or have had read to us a story in which a pillow fight is part of the events. For some reason the image of down floating through the air after a rioutous romp is so vivid; it goes with the ptarmigan. I really like that. As a reader it is important to me that the author conjures images in my mind so that I feel like I am either there with the characters or I am watching the story unfold like a movie that I never want to end.


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Patricia (patriciasierra) | 2388 comments Reminds of a time when I was a little kid and heard my mother let out a yelp. I ran upstairs to see what was wrong. There sat my sister in the middle of her big feather mattress (which she had cut open) covered in white feathers. She always was an odd bird.

Speaking of notes in books: When I was doing some research for Richard Sewall (who was writing his Emily Dickinson biography) he handed me a book to take away with me for a week. He asked me to read it, looking for echos of Emily's poems. He knew the facts of Emily's life, but had trouble holding her poetry in his mind -- while I couldn't get it out of mine. The book was Reveries of a Bachelor, one of Emily's favorites. Now here's the part I treasure about that memory: the book Richard put in my hands that day was Emily's own copy. Reading it was like having her at my shoulder, whispering in my ear, because her penciled comments were written in the margins. I found a hair between two pages and wondered if it might have been hers. The color appeared to be a match: "...like the sherry the guest leaves in the bottom of the glass." (That may be an inaccurate quote, but it's close enough for our purposes here.)


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Andre Jute (andrejute) | 4851 comments Mod
Thanks, Margie. I'm glad I got it right. Duck!


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Margaret (xenasmom) | 306 comments Patricia wrote: "Reminds of a time when I was a little kid and heard my mother let out a yelp. I ran upstairs to see what was wrong. There sat my sister in the middle of her big feather mattress (which she had cut ..."

odd bird...feathers...very clever.

What a wonderful memory, Patricia and what a gift to hold her book in your hands. Thanks for sharing.


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K.A. Jordan (kajordan) | 3042 comments Feathers - reminds me of a funny commerical...http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zcc7li...


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Patricia (patriciasierra) | 2388 comments Cute.


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Katie Stewart (katiewstewart) | 1099 comments Andre wrote: @Katie Now you have me chewing my fingernails. You can write to me privately to tell me what it is. Put a poor writer out of his misery!

Just off to see if I can find it... I liked the ptarmigan one, too.


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Margaret (xenasmom) | 306 comments Kat wrote: "Feathers - reminds me of a funny commerical...http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zcc7li..."

It is cute and that laugh will get you going.


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Joo (jooo) Oh dear. I've been using the highlighter to highlight mistakes, missing words and typos so I can contact the author and point them out to them. I hope none of my highlights gets chosen.


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Andre Jute (andrejute) | 4851 comments Mod
LOL. That'll teach the buggers to do the job right.

Er-- second thoughts, didn't you review one of my books, Joo?

Burn your Kindle immediately!


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Joo (jooo) Don't worry, I would have told you if I found any mistakes. In fact I meant to come and tell you that I didn't find any :D


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Andre Jute (andrejute) | 4851 comments Mod
All hail to Andy Jenkinson, Karl Jones and Mark Ryan, who were the copy-editors on that edition of IDITAROD a novel of The Greatest Race on Earth.


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Katie Stewart (katiewstewart) | 1099 comments From what I've seen (though I can't find the link now I need it), people only see your highlights if you choose to load them for a particular book. There's something on your Amazon account that asks you if you want to...I just can't find it again!


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Andre Jute (andrejute) | 4851 comments Mod
I too thought they were on the "Manage your Kindle" page. I didn't bother with the switch since the only MS I highlight are unpublished, therefore not bought from Amazon, therefore under the old arrangement not stored on Amazon. The new arrangement would apparently store them too, so I've just given up editing on the Kindle, which is anyway unreliable and clumsy.


message 24: by K.A. (last edited Nov 09, 2011 11:14AM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

K.A. Jordan (kajordan) | 3042 comments I just picked up a copy of Scrivener - for windows.

It is one COOL piece of software for long documents. It has a Novel template with places for research notes.

I'm in LOVE!

http://www.literatureandlatte.com/scr...


Take a look - you might find it useful.


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Andre Jute (andrejute) | 4851 comments Mod
Bethany, take it from a Word warrior of thirty years standing, new features aren't the answer. You want to get the hang of a useful base set of features, and make them your own. Word is awful, and Microsoft has made it successively worse (honest, it used to be lean and quick and fabulously useful, not obstructive at all), but it is still the best general word processor out there.


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Andre Jute (andrejute) | 4851 comments Mod
It isn't too tough for someone with judgement and taste to learn to be an editor on their own. I were you, I'd choose classes in subjects you can't pick up on your own. One problem lots of editors have is they have no idea of design, and that will shortly become as important in ebooks as in trad books, and is anyway crucial in every other place where editors work. A decent background in design, even just a thorough introductory course, would set you apart from all the other editors in virtually every field of editing you might want to enter.


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Andre Jute (andrejute) | 4851 comments Mod
You can easily judge the value of a course on MS Word. Have they yet told you the big time-saving trick of returning where you stopped yesterday, without searching? Shift-Function 5 sends you to the last place you altered something, the end of the manuscript if you were writing, your last correction if you were editing, the last place you read if you work smart, by which I mean this: make your act of every working day spacebar-save-delete-save-quite-shut down and tomorrow Shift-Function 5 will put the cursor where you want to start work.

That's Word's biggest time-saving secret.


message 28: by K.A. (new) - rated it 4 stars

K.A. Jordan (kajordan) | 3042 comments I'm having fun with it.

It's a database of documents, photos, a corkboard and can print e-pub files.


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