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Oct 19, 2008 09:33AM

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In response to your question, Nathan:
You can use 'too' in place of 'also'. Example- I will go to the mall also.
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I will go to the mall too.
You would mainly use it in a sentence where you are comparing something and where you are including yourself, or another person.
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Too is a word used to say you are doing something also. Like Riley already said.
Ex: I will go to the mall, too.
The other to is used more to connect words such as: Let's go to the store today.
Think of it this way: Too is an adjective. (ex. too much, too little, too high, too low, too painful) It can mean "also" as well.
To, well, I'm not sure what part of speach THAT is, but it could be a preposition(not positive on this one). Basically, it is where you don't use too or two, but it fits.
To, well, I'm not sure what part of speach THAT is, but it could be a preposition(not positive on this one). Basically, it is where you don't use too or two, but it fits.



Actually, I think the sentence sounds better with "that" than without it...I don't know why, it just rings better to me.
Well, 'that' would be more accurate, because without the 'that' someone could assume it was exact quotations (as in, "Your friend said you should be more friendly.")
What I do is eliminate "that" from all parts of my writing EXCEPT dialogue, because people talk using the word "that."
Pretty much I do that for any grammar rule (eliminating being verbs, using the word "like" and "um"
Putting those words in dialogue just makes it more realistic, you know? I think that's one reason why I'm good at not making cheesy dialogue.
Pretty much I do that for any grammar rule (eliminating being verbs, using the word "like" and "um"
Putting those words in dialogue just makes it more realistic, you know? I think that's one reason why I'm good at not making cheesy dialogue.
I actually like having words such as "um" in my writing, because it makes it more realistic, and makes awkwardness/whatever other emotion you're trying to portray clear.
haha. my characters say "um" a lot. it kinda gets annoying, but it makes it flow more realistically, u know?
Yes, sella, that's fine. I do that too.
Just make sure that your character is saying it, and that it isn't part of the story outside the dialogue or thoughts.
Just make sure that your character is saying it, and that it isn't part of the story outside the dialogue or thoughts.
haha ... my characters used to be too perfect ... i mean in the stories i wrote when i was like ten. and NOW, all my characters are too FLAWED!!! AAAH!!!
Oh my gosh, I just got an awesome story idea!!!!!
I actually might just switch my nano story, it's so good.
Plus I will be able to come up with a better plot with this idea...
the other one doesn't really have any obvious ideas in it.
I actually might just switch my nano story, it's so good.
Plus I will be able to come up with a better plot with this idea...
the other one doesn't really have any obvious ideas in it.
Roni, does it count if the story is in first person, and so there's "Um" because the MC is narrating the story and is a sarcastic person?
I think that is fine. Because it is the character speaking.
for instance, I have things like "you know?" that aren't in dialogue because my MC is speaking to the audience. :P
yay for crazy no-sense nano stories.
You know, I'm tempted to post mine just so you can see how horrible the last page and a half that I have written is. The rest is good, but ehn I started ignoring punctuation and spelling...
for instance, I have things like "you know?" that aren't in dialogue because my MC is speaking to the audience. :P
yay for crazy no-sense nano stories.
You know, I'm tempted to post mine just so you can see how horrible the last page and a half that I have written is. The rest is good, but ehn I started ignoring punctuation and spelling...

When do you say who and when do you say whom? We went over that in class today and I was totally lost!

He=Who
Him=Whom
So, do something like this.
Who/Whom wrote the letter?
He wrote the letter. Therefore, who is correct.
For who/whom should I vote?
Should I vote for him? Therefore, whom is correct.
We all know who/whom pulled that prank.
This sentence contains two clauses: We all know and who/whom pulled that prank. We are interested in the second clause because it contains the who/whom. He pulled that prank. Therefore, who is correct. (Are you starting to sound like a hooting owl yet?)
We want to know on who/whom the prank was pulled.
This sentence contains two clauses: We want to know and the prank was pulled on who/whom. Again, we are interested in the second clause because it contains the who/whom. The prank was pulled on him. Therefore, whom is correct.

