Next Gen- Academy for heroes discussion
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Me: OHMIGOSH! LINKIN PARK IS AWESOME!!!Callie: shut up, hey aren't talking to you
Me: oops.
Thera (I'm losing what I don't deserve) wrote: "Me: ALL THE TIME. I adore it."Me: Sooo...... is the "(I'm losing what I don't deserve)" from their new album, A Thousand Suns??? XD
Me: Oh gosh, I love that album XDMy favorite is
When life, leaves you blind.
Love, keeps us kind...
And so on. =)
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Me: You know, I'm glad there is seriously a strict mod out there. See ya, Thera! ^^
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Me: I like how you recycled characters. I'll make one as soon as I get some math done.
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Me: Anyone have a good idea for a power? I'm clueless, but this is normal.
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Me: Ooh... transforming as in shape-shifting?
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Me: Me too. How come everybody else gets a cool hero name? *sigh* I'm so uncreative with this type of thing. Hmmm...*thinks*
Me: Thought of those already, hehe. Though they were kinda lame. I also thought of Impersonator.
Me: But you said no paradoxing, didn't you? But yes, if we can.
Thera (I'm losing what I don't deserve) wrote: "Me: I've posted most of the house topics, and I'm getting ready to do the training rooms. Paradoxing can be legal now, early for VIP members. ;)"Me: ;) Okay. You post first?
Me: Wait, no I didn't...:( I thought of patomimist, but then I looked it up and it has nothing to do with ventriloquist.
Me: Stop laughing at me! *runs away crying*
Thera (I'm losing what I don't deserve) wrote: "Me: Where?"Me: You decide.
Me: Jessie. And Jessie doesn't play an insturment...but on the other hand, he might just go there to carve or read or just enjoy silence. Once again, you post first?
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Me: I am. Post in the Front Hall, Kaylee.
Me: Hey, everybody.
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First off, make everything look nicer by putting a space immediately after each colon and period. For that matter, put a period at the end of each sentence. This includes paragraphs. Put spaces in between things outside of parenthesis and the parenthesis.
Next, you need to make everything more detailed. For instance, tell us how much she weights. What color is her hair? Does she always have a smile on? Appearances are really important. But a personality fills in the blanks (your's is pretty good but it just needs to be properly spaced). Another pro tip: Make your character separate from her power. Don't make a light controller just like light and hate dark. Tell us other things about her. Expand the history. What is normal? Was her family rich or poor? How did she do in school? Ask yourself questions like that.
Finally, tell us what she can do with light. Right now, all I know is she has an affinity for it and can shoot bolts of it. Can she change the color of light? Can she make things glow? Can she make light brighter or darker? Give a few examples.
Me: *is slightly offended* Rudy, me? Powerplay? Just because I make a powerful character doesn't mean that I want to abue that power I've willingly given her. After all, you don't powerplay with Septimus at Haven, and Thera doesn't powerplay with Tyson. I'm no different. :)
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EDIT: Oh, I forgot to mention: Huge difference between godmoding and powerplaying. Power playing is when you take over someone else's charrie, or tell someone how they are allowed to RP their charrie. Godmodding is just using your powers to become invincible.
Me: Yes, I am aware of this difference and I understand where you're comin' from. I'm just mentioning my opinion, is all.
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Me: I completely understand, trust me. I'm not blaming you or anything. :)
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Me: Wait, you can do that? Cuz I can't think of a single thing for a new charrie.
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Me: I really hope we can.
THIS IS ANNOYING>ME
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Me: me? yah i did... my computer was messed up
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