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Who thinks Daenerys should have flown back to Westeros a long time ago?
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Well yeah, the only problem is she had to wait for her dragons to grow up. I think she should have gone straight back to Pentos once Illyrio sent those ships to retrieve her and there wait for her dragons to grow up and train them as they did. But alas, if that happened, she would never learn to rule. I guess you could say ruling Mereen was practice to ruling Westeros.
Georgie wrote: "I really like her but I wish she'd get a move on. And even though one of her dragons killed a child I felt that locking them up wasn't the right decision. She should have been trying to train them ..." <-- yes, i totally agree.
I'd like to see her return to Westeros, but I'm in no hurry.
What annoyed me was that her character used to be clever and cunning - she conquered three cities by guts and guile. Yet in the latest book, she regresses and is more immature than she is in "A Game of Thrones," falling for the same husband trap she wisely avoided in Quarth. It's as if all of her wisdom evaporated and her fixation with Daario was so out of character and unbelievable it was nauseating.
What annoyed me was that her character used to be clever and cunning - she conquered three cities by guts and guile. Yet in the latest book, she regresses and is more immature than she is in "A Game of Thrones," falling for the same husband trap she wisely avoided in Quarth. It's as if all of her wisdom evaporated and her fixation with Daario was so out of character and unbelievable it was nauseating.


Also, she's what? 14, 15, an obsession with a charming man isn't that strange. Look how stupid people get over film stars and pop stars.

As for Meereen being practice: at this rate, she'll have to conquer ten or twelve more cities to practice on before she manages a vaguely tolerable degree of competence.
The whole of this book was a waste of space so far as Dany goes. If he needed her to end up in the Waste again, he should just have cold-opened in the Waste, and let her brood bitterly on what had happened. [Which wouldn't have taken much time, let's be honest, it wasn't that complicated].
In fact, I think he could just have had a gap in the narrative for, say, about five years or so. It would have given some characters time to age up, it wouldn't have made things appear so rushed, and it would have saved us a few thousand pages of filler - some of it was entertaining filler, but there was nothing there that couldn't have been pushed five years later, or else just told briefly in flashback.

That's because Cersei relied on the men around her. Of coarse, she thought she was so strong and didn't need them so she fought them like enemies. Once they were out of the way, The kingdom starts to fall apart around her because she didn't realize how important those people were. So it's not that she was initially smart and has become dumb, she's always been stupid and short-sighted, it just didn't become apparent until later.

But of course, that doesn't mean I have to like it. That dang book was like a tornado of boring.

Blasphemous to write, I know. But she has no memory of Westeros: when she dreams of home, Dany doesn't dream of Westeros... she dreams of the Red Door of her childhood home in Braavos.
As you read these books, you get hit with Martin's not-so-subtle pounding of the fact that "birth right" and "claim to the throne" are mularkey.
Dany's other driving force is revenge. Does anyone in these books who desires "revenge" get it? No.
Did Visersys get revenge? No, trying to get revenge led to his death.
Did Robb get revenge for Eddard's death? No, the desire for revenge led to his death.
Will Arya kill anyone on her list? No, she didn't even kill The Hound when she had the chance.
Is it a coincidence that once Jon thinks about getting revenge on the Boltons... he's 'killed'?
At a certain point, Dany will come to the same belief herself: All the people she'd want revenge on: Robert, Ned, Tywin, etc. are dead. There's no one left to hate. And her desire to reclaim her "right" to rule is weak-sauce too.
Martin hasn't been stalling because he needs the dragons to get big... or because he needed the winter & white walkers to attack.
Martin has been "stalling" because it would take a person a while to give up on their childhood/lifelong dream. To come to the realization that "my need to reclaim my parents throne" is ego-driven not "manifest destiny".
It will probably frustrate readers (just as many other twists and turns already have), but it's the bittersweet ending Martin has talked of.

False. Tyrion got revenge against his father and against Shae. Arya gets revenge against Weese, her abusive captor in Harrenhal. There have been a couple othors I'm forgetting, but the point is there are characters who get revenge.

Having said that, I agree that Dany will never get to Westeros, but that's because I think the odds are pretty slim that we will ever see volume 6, at least from Martin.

I think Dany invading Westeros is most likely. Two alternatives, however, are quite possible:
a) Dany doesn't come back, but her army does, lead by somebody else - that way, the story of creating her army still plays a role, even if she doesn't lead it
or
b) Dany decides not to invade Westeros - but then the Others invade and Dany decides to counter-invade, not to regain her throne but to defeat the Others.
I think b) would be best. Bonus points if Dany's victory lands her the throne anyway, but she's already dead or abdicated by then and the throne instead goes to Jon.


A. It could be that he sees the dragons as so powerful that once they're there, it's game over; so it has to be at the end of the story. But that doesn't feel like Martin.
B. He's saving Dany & the Dragons in Westeros for the BIG BATTLE: the Dark Force of the White Walkers vs. the Dragons. But the big "good vs. evil" battle doesn't feel like Martin either
C. Dany doesn't get to Westeros until the land's been destroyed and ravaged by constant war. At that point, she doesn't need dragons... there's no army to fight. She takes over a ruined country. Feels more like Martin and his melancholy ending.
D. As I wrote earlier, he never intends Dany to get to Westeros. She grows up and moves on, forgetting petty revenge and birth rights. Would be an incredible let-down for readers, but isn't Martin trying to tell a more 'human' story? It's my "best guess" right now.
BUT LET'S MOVE AWAY FROM MY LARGER POINT, AND TACKLE THIS 'REVENGE-GATE' THAT I SEEM TO HAVE CREATED.
Will wrote: False. Tyrion got revenge against his father and against Shae. Arya gets revenge against Weese, her abusive captor..."
I could see it on Tyrion, but it's not like he plotted and plotted and got his revenge.
Do you consider Weese's death revenge? IMHO, it came across as "here's a douche, go kill him." :)
Duffy wrote: "Littlefinger seems to be doing a pretty good job at getting revenge. And the Red Wedding was a nice revenge too.
Ned had never seen Littlefinger before in his life... and Ned spent those few weeks he did know him trusting and trying to partner with him. I suppose you could argue it was revenge on Brandon, who he lost to fair & square. Or revenge on Cat for never loving him. Doesn't feel like real revenge to me.
I'll grant you the Frey's do get revenge on Robb for not keeping his word. Is it a betrayal or revenge?
Duffy wrote: "I think the Bolton's largely see it as revenge. Also, Theon's capture of Winterfell is a kind of revenge, as is Ramsay Bolton's treatment of Theon. These may be misguided. They may be gross over..."
The Boltons are getting revenge the Starks? I don't see it. Revenge on Theon? Umm, I may have forgotten, but I didn't think Theon treated him so bad. Ramsey was an a-hole to everyone, don't think revenge had much to do with it.
IMO, Theon takes Winterfell to impress his Dad, not so much because he wanted revenge on the Starks. And even if it is, Did Theon actually GET revenge? Bran & Rickon escaped unharmed, and his desire for revenge got him "killed" as much as Visersys and Robb's did.
I'll give it up to Casey who wrote my point better than I did: Revenge as a form of Justice does not appear to be part of Martin's M.O.

She needs an army because everyone who sees those dragons who is not loyal to Dany already has designs on killing her and taking those dragons. As readers we know the bond those dragons have to Dany is too strong to for anyone to just "take" them, as we have already seen, but the people in Westeros have no idea or will be blinded by greed, just like everyone else thus far.
Finally she needs her army and her loyal followers because we have already seen throughout the story how important the placement of a loyal staff is in running the kingdom. She can't just come to Westeros with her three dragons, and shuffle the deck around and expect to be alive to reign very long - that hasn't worked for ANYONE so far.



True steve. But what we are asking is whether Mr.GRRM has the story already planned out or is he making stuff as he goes ? Because the part about mereen certainly sounded like it ?


His mother is identified as a common woman who Ned fell in love with on the campaign with Robert Baratheon to destroy the Targaryan dynasty. Her name is even given in book 5 if I remember, but I can't quite recall what it was.
Either way I agree with you and other people that this story is heading to a meeting between Dany's Dragons and the white walkers in the north, and thus Jon will play an important role. What kind of song of ice and fire would it be otherwise?


It's a combination of both. He knew going into it where he wanted his characters to be by the end of the series, but the path the characters take to get there changes as he writes and learns what his characters would do given the personality he gave them and the situation they're in.


Really? I always felt that the story of Jon's mother was a lie by Ned (because Robert loved Lyanna so much, but either she was raped by Targaryan and was ashamed or she loved the Targaryan and didn't want to break Robert's heart). Anway, neither here nor there. Get back to Westeros, Dany!

GRRM has also answered this concern before. He stated that he doesn't do that.

That is what I'd like to see and eventually seeing that in the past Targaeryans married in the family, that Danny and Aegon would unite the countries.


But I had hope still that Martin would bring her back to claim Westeros with her dragons to battle with the Lannisters and the worthless Greyjoys in Dance with Dragons (I mean it had "dragons" in the title right?) Then she once she united the realm in the "Winds Of Winter" she would fight the Others with Jon the "lost" targaryan.
Nope not even close.
I have a sneaking suspicion that Jon IS Ned's bastard at this point not to say GRRM didn't toy with the notion of making him the Targaeryan prince. Now though its seems he won't. Why else include the long lost Prince Aegon who now is going to steal Dany thunder who for four books was the "Last Targaeryan" and only dreamed of returning to Westeros.
Long story short, GRRM needs to make Dany get off her ass in Meeran (Really don't care what happens to the people and stuff of Estros) and head to Westeros to united the realm to fight the Others and fulfill prophecy even if GRRM needs to take a five year gap in the novel to let the characters grow as Wastrel suggested and do a quick recap if necessary. ( In Harry Potter, JKR didn't write about Harry sitting on his ass all summer did she?) I felt a gap would have been perfect after the Red Wedding and Joffrey's death in the Storm of Swords. However it could still work.
In the end though, I anxiously await the next book addicted as ever..
P.S he should make someone visit Valaryia seems too awesome of plot place as to leave sitting on the sidelines.

But, now- I don't know. Maybe she never will make it.




So Martin is brewing something so she can have real enemies. Like the Others. Who had no particular purpose so far...

Well yeah, the only problem is she had to wait for her dragons to grow up. I think she should have gone straight back to Pen..."
If Mereen was her practice for Westeros, she will get eaten alive by the Small Council alone.


On another note the real question I have is who will fly the dragons with Dany? I think one is likely to be Bran. My reasoning for that is because the three eyed crow says he will fly but will never walk again. I think this has to mean he will fly a dragon because if flying meant just taking over the mind of a crow then by that logic he could also walk (because he takes over the mind of Hodor, and his wolf). For that reason I really think that he will have a large roll with the dragons. I am also of the belief that Jon will ride the other dragon. I think the red priestess will bring jon back to life in the next book just because we have to much unanswered about his lineage. (for that one person who believed that we already know where he is from you are mistaken. There have been several "possibilities" 1) targaryn and stark child. 2) the sword of the morning's sister and 3) the fishing women from the sisters island. There has been no clarification of who the child actually is. But I believe #1 is the best possibility.
What does everyone else think?

Yes I am... Tired of trying to read GRRM's mind....yes that as well... Ready for clarification? Hell yes!
( sobbing into my Kleenex..... Yesssssss!)

True steve. But what we are asking is..."
Sathya wrote: "Steve wrote: "No, I'm happy to let Mr. Martin write the ubook. I'm not an author so if he was writing it the way I thought it should be, it would be terrible."
True steve. But what we are asking is..."
Yes, he's making it up as he goes. He's much like Lucas, I think. Makes us think he's got this massive story all figured out and such when, in reality, he had ONE good story (first book for GRRM, Episode IV for Lucas) and is now scrambling to write the rest of the story.

Of course he does that!
Ned Stark
Khal Drogo
Jon Snow (though, he may not really die)
Robb Stark
Other people ...
He kills them off intentionally, trying to make the story "memorable" or something. Leaves all the boring characters alive and in stupid circumstances (i.e., Bran, Theon). Only, at this point it is not dramatic or shocking. Just waiting for dragon lady to get iced by her dragons in the next book so that her silly handmaiden can take over for her.
Sorry, sounds very bitter, eh? Yeah, this last book in the series was MASSIVEly disappointing to me.

I think Hodor is the one, true Targaryen. Incest would have a Hodorian effect. In the end, everyone will be dead and Hodor will find a pretty chair, it's just a little pointy ...

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