Just looking to get some reviews for new short story

[Jonathan]

Hey everybody,
Got a tip to come here to get some reviews from some awesome people.
My name is Jon Waters and I'm the author of the short story Relic Number 87.

http://www.amazon.com/Relic-87-Carmen...

Those are two of the sites. The summary:
in the not too distant future a relic from a past civilization is held prisoner. Ban, the king of the Light is relic number 87 and is contained within a stasis cell under the watchful eyes of Dr. Zimmer. Ban has to escape from this prison to gain his freedom and bring justice to those that imprisoned him.

I hope for this to be a jump off point to a series of short stories that span a great deal about the city of Carmen. A fictional city, although if someone knows where a particular city that happens to be called Carmen is - would be fantastic.
Anyway, I just would like to request some reviews from you guys and hope to boost some sales and so one.
Thank you all very much and I hope to hear from you guys soon. :)