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uhh? two??lol well it really like it! It's just FILLE with emotion...
Could i .. make it into a song?? hehe?
(S) Asami Seo Hyun 축구 wrote: "uhh? two??lol well it really like it! It's just FILLE with emotion...
Could i .. make it into a song?? hehe?"
LOL, sorry!! I was like 'two what???' just saw I placed this thing twice xD! I'll go delete the other one hehe...
Haha, my friends are also making it into a song xD! sure :)
oh lol!!Really!!!! Awww they beat me to it!!!!
(S) Asami Seo Hyun 축구 wrote: "oh lol!!Really!!!! Awww they beat me to it!!!!"
lol, aww sorry ^^
This is my last poem,
My last note for you.
But not an apology
Not this time, not for you.
You accused me of wanting nothing,
Didn't I tell you
"I don't know what I want"?
But you pushed it aside
and ignored my remarks.
You wanted me so bad,
that you focused on your need
and forgot all about me.
Why two days after our goodbye
You ran into some other girl's arms?
You said I was the one,
Good thing I didn't believe you,
You were never one to trust.
Remember when I said I Love You?
Did I ever mentioned what I felt?
That doubt in the back of my mind?
The way it came so forced?
That pressure inside of me,
Pushing me to say the words?
That pressure, it was you.
You and your want to hear it,
You and that need to keep me.
Didn't you ever think I was too young?
That this was all kinds of wrong?
Weren't you old enough to see I wasn't one to be played with?
To be toyed around, your own personal doll?
Cheering at your stupid jokes, your personal lies,
With thousands of girls between the lines.
Thank God I never trusted you,
Thank Got I wasn't the one to fall.
Don't ever call me your Sweet Pea,
not ever, not again.
Get out of my life,
not a message, not one more time.
You accused me of wanting nothing,
But that's not true,
I wanted everything, I just never wanted it with you.
And I'm so glad I never trusted you,
I have no tears wasted on you,
No heart to mend, no story to tell.
I may be a collector, but you're just a line in this note.
The last one for you,
no more paper to be wasted,
no more thought in me about you.
You want to know the answer?
why so much suffering for you about me?
why so much fights, distrust and why you were so blind?
Why your selfishness never let me shine?
and why your jealousy, always came back twice as hard?
Here's my simple answer, my last words from me to you,
And the way I let go, of this Big Mistake.
This Big Mistake that it was You:
I. Was. Never. Yours.
PS: You were never the only one who could write a note, a verse, a poem or a song. But you were always thinking of you, that's why it doesn't surprise me, that was all I ever knew.
-Jude