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message 1: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments ((I mades it!))


message 2: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
((i love the name XD you wanna make your charrie first so i can see how the format goes?))


message 3: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments ((I guess. Steampunk is all new to me so. Before I make it do you wanna do one in the Victorian, or alternate today, or somewhere in the middle?))


message 4: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
((oh i thought you had actually done it and its up to you))


message 5: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments ((I think that a alternate present would be cool.

Name: Charles Windham

Age: 16

Looks: Average height, strong, blue eyes, short hair black hair, had a mechanical right arm.

Personality: Kind but tough at times, never really been close to anyone.

Occupation: Factory worker

Other: N/A

Add more if you like))


message 6: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
Name: Jinx

Age: 17

Looks: http://www.zastavki.com/pictures/1600...

Personality: cautious, reserved

Occupation:doesn't have one

Other: was a government experiment and she escaped, but is currently still trapped in the compound trying to get out

is that ok or does it not really fit the rp?


message 7: by Zachman (last edited Aug 08, 2011 11:17PM) (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments ((Considering that steampunk is about large cities and mchines that works. Maybe she could be underground, under the faactory that Charles works at. And for some reason maybe charles finds her and helps her escape. BTW What kind of expiriment? And does she have the massive laser type thing on her arm like in the picture?))


message 8: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
((yeah, that was the experiment, they attached the laser thing to her arm, but it can conceal itself to look like a regular arm. and i like the underground factory idea))


message 9: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments ((Ok but should it be a laser?))


message 10: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
((not sure what it is exactly lol))


message 11: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
((it kind of looks like a sword to me))


message 12: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments ((Definetely a lazor. Maybe instead of a laser she could have a radiation gun or something? Kinda like a mini nuke, like from fallout 3.))


message 13: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
((that would be cool, and it would make a lot more sense))


message 14: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments ((Lolz yeah. So do you wanna start? I don't really feel like it but will if you won't.))


message 15: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
((lol i will :))

Jinx ran and emerged from a panel in the floor of the factory and ducked behind a large pile of boxes she scanned the area


message 16: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments Charles was told to go get some of the old boxes in the back of the factory. HE did as he was told and started moving the boxes. When he moved one onto his cart, he saw a girl! "Uh, how did you get in here."


message 17: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
"Sh" she said putting a finger to her lips, she listened and heard footsteps "can you get me out of here" she asked


message 18: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments "What do you mean? Who are you? Where did you come from? What's that thing on your arm?"


message 19: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
she pulled out a knife and pointed the tip so it lightly touched his throat. "you are too loud, and ask too many questions" she said. she made rechtor cannon fold back into an arm. "now help me get out of here, or I'll be forced to kill you"


message 20: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments ((Does she have any knowledge of the outside world, or has she been an expiriment from birth?))

"Whoa now! No need to be like that. I guess I could lead you out" he said examining her clothes. "How are you surviving in those clothes? It's winter for pete sake!"


message 21: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
((thinking about that, i think a little bit of both))

she vaguely remembered winter from when she was younger. she thought of the heat and dryness, "I'll be fine, just hurry!" she urged


message 22: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments "Alright, alright miss bossy-pants! Follow me."


message 23: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
she nodded and put the knife away following him


message 24: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments He lead her to the exit. "So do you have anywhere to go?"


message 25: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
"all I need is to get away from here" she said.


message 26: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments "What's so bad about the gear factory?"


message 27: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
"it's what's below" she said


message 28: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments "The furnace?"


message 29: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
"you don't know" she asked in disbelief


message 30: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments "No. What's down there?"


message 31: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
she looked around and heard voices "not here, not now, no time" she said


message 32: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments "Then what about my house? My shift is just about over, I'm sure the boss wouldn't mind."


message 33: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
she studied him, then deciding she didn't have much of a choice she nodded "thank you"


message 34: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments "Alright then come with me" he said leading her to his house. He stopped. "You might need some warmer clothes."


message 35: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
"I'm fine" she said, mistaking winter and summer. "besides we don't have any time, they will be here any second"


message 36: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments "Alright" he said open the factory doors, and walking into the snow.


message 37: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
she took one step into the snow and quickly yanked it out "it's freezing!" she almost shrieked, she wasn't wearing shoes


message 38: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments "I told you you should get warmer clothes" he said taking off his jacket andtearing out the large pockets of his pants. "Here, put these on."


message 39: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
she nodded and put the pockets on her feet and putting his jacket on.


message 40: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments "Not the most stylish stuff around bt it should keep you a little warm until we get to my house" he said walking out into the snow.


message 41: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
she followed him, trying to ignore the cold that bit at her skin


message 42: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments "I like your arm by the way. What happened?"


message 43: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
"t-t-t-they p-p-put it in m-m-e" she stuttered, her teeth were chattering badly


message 44: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments "I can't understand you. Tell me when we get inside' he said when he reached his house. He opened the door and lloked around. He didn't want his family knowing that he was bringing a girl like her home. "Alright follow me" he said going upstairs.


message 45: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
she followed him upstairs, her entire body tingled at the sudden heat


message 46: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments He walked into his room. "You want some warmer clothes?"


message 47: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
"p-please" she said the chattering starting to stop. her whole body shook


message 48: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments Charles snuck into his sister's room and grabbed some of her clothes. He brought them back to the girl.


message 49: by Fiamata (new)

Fiamata | 5811 comments Mod
((she said sure))

she took the clothes and began to change


message 50: by Zachman (new)

Zachman | 5136 comments "Uh do you want to go change in the bathroom or something?"


((Woot!))


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