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Review of Ghosts of Coronado Bay, by JG Faherty
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I would agree that some of the parts were not necessarily appropriate for anyone under the age of 14 - about 8th grade to high school age. The grandma in the book did touch my heart though. I thought she was great.
She is sweet, but such a small part in the book. Lucy, however, is such a "live" character, which was a great off-set to Maya's more serious tone. I think I would be afraid of Stuart in real life! What a nasty piece of work.
Lucy is a great character too, she is the perfect offset to Maya. Maya I think wasn't too serious, I think she was more under stress so her real personality did not shine through as much. But OH YEA - I would have had a restraining order against Stuart. But some people really do show their true colors in times of need.




I liked the premise of this story, though the edgy nature is not for younger readers. There's not only the constant references to sex and teenage libidos, but a couple of death scenes that while not overly graphic, might cause some younger readers a few tense moments.
Maya and her best friend, Lucy, are fairly memorable characters and seem to be natural best friends. The cheerleaders are sterotypical in their cruelty, though the basis for their cruelty is never really defined, except the state of Maya's virginity seem to be their main focus. The description of Stuart, Maya's ex-boyfriend, is almost scary in its real-life portrayal.
I had a couple of problems with this book. Maya has known she can see ghosts since an early age, yet she doesn't seem to realize when she's talking to one until it's laid out for her in black and white. It would seem to me that someone who knows about ghosts and who can talk to ghosts, would at least recognize ghosts when she meets them.
The other problem I had with the novel is that, while expertly portrayed, for the first 2/3 of the book, Stuart is a total dick. There's not one redeeming quality to this guy. And because the author uses multiple points of view, you know what he's thinking in his head, and his thoughts aren't redeeming either. Then, suddenly, within a page or 2 toward the end, he changes his ways, helps to save the day, and becomes great friends with Lucy, Maya, and her new ghost friend that, up until then, Stuart has despised. No one changes that fast, especially if the character is not set up for change earlier on. It's just not believable.
I also would have rather seen this book in one point of view. While there were some surprising twists, due to the multiple points of view, the elements of mystery and suspense were missing, and I like to have a little guesswork going when I'm reading a book.
Overall a nice read.