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Another one based off of a song XDShe loved him, but he loved another girl. She pushed her long black hair out of her face. "I am a fool," she muttered. She could feel tears streaming down her face. The world started to get blurry. "What can I...how can I...I STILL LOVE YOU! YOU IDIOT," she cried out. She leaned over her balcony bars. She grabbed her cheer megaphone. She held it right next to her mouth. "THIS IS WAR! TO SEE YOU PLEASED WITH SOMEONE ELSE! EARNEST LOVE THAT IS SIN," she cried out. She chucked the megephone to the ground. "Its broken! These feelings are overcoming me! How can I control all of them at once," she mumbled. She shooked her head. "I'm not crying, no I am not," she mumbled. She stood up and leaned as far over the balcony she could without falling down. "I SHALL MAKE YOU GAZE UPON ME! EVEN IF I DO SOMETHING STUPID," she cried. The wind picked up and made her hair dance with it. She relized she was yelling at no one. "Love is blind," she snapped.
who me??????? im confused????
Leo wanted to know more about the new girl. Her name was unusual, Diz Kneely. Her smile was unusual, like ten different people were smiling. But her personality...her personality was the oddest of all. She says she has ten different personalities. TEN! Who could have ten different personalities? Don't you only have one? Who was this girl? And why did she seem so familiar...like ten people he had seen on the television? Who was she? And why was she so into Disney? He had to get answers...even if it meant stalking her.
Blood pooled inside her lungs, she could feel the grating ends of her ribs touching eachother. Heavy footsteps creaked down the stairs from above, she tried st swallow, coughing up blood instead, knoeing she was about to die. The cold metal barrel jabed into thee base of her skull, hammer clicking as it was cocked((Sorry if that was gristly just had the mood to write such))
She slowly walked down the stairs. Perhaps for the last time, she hadn't decided yet. Her room was at the bottom. She dropped her bag at her desk and wearily set her books on top. Sinking into her comfy chair, she began to think. That day, she had failed an English quiz. English was her best subject, always had been. But now, she was desperately clinging to her C. What had happened? And then, of course, her boyfriend of six months had finally dumped her after a big fight. Not to mention that her parents were mad at her for something she had no control over and she hadn't seen her best friend in FOREVER. And... No, she wasn't going to dwell on that. She had promised herself that she would never think about that again. She never thought she would consider suicide, but... To be honest, it was looking pretty attractive at the moment. She grabbed her iPod and tapped notes. And wrote and wrote and wrote, planning to email each letter as she finished it. The first was to her best friend. She decided it might be better to send them all at once. The next to her boyfriend, and then her parents, and then all of her friends, each individually. But then her phone buzzed. It was her best friend, Julie. The text read "hey chica, haven't talked to you in waay too long! Call me when you have time to chat! Luv ya!". Oh, the beautiful miracles a best friend can work without even knowing it.
He saw her run down Main Street. "Hey! Wait up! I didn't mean to hurt you," he cried. He kept running after her, but with the big crowd her would loose her soon. He could still see her, her purple dress fluttering in the wind. "Please stop," he yelled again. She looked behind her and started running faster. "Stay away from me! Youe creep," she snapped. He could feel people looking their way. "Who are you," he asked. The girl glared evily at him. "Why do you care," she asked. "Because you are different from the others," he mumbled. The girl blushed and then suddenly turned around and ran into a big crowd. He ran into the crowd and followed her. But her couldn't find her any more. He ran out of the crowd to see a huge group of little girls. "JASMINE," they were all crying. He looked at Jasmine and shrugged. He lost Diz in the huge crowd. He walked behind Jasmine, but as he walked behind her he noticed something. That Jasmine seemed a little...perfect. It couldn't be the real Jasmine...from the movie. Could it?
Issabelle stood there on the balconey. "Eveyone has a guardian angel that watches over your true self," the voice echoed in her head. She closed her eyes and held her hands together. "Dear Guardian Angel, I'm sorry I didn't believe in you earlier. But...can you show me my true self...I'd like to be reborn," she mumbled softly. The wind blew hard and it made her black hair dance with it. She shook her head and went to sleep. The next morning she woke up to find three eggs in her bed. A red one with a star on it, an orange one with a cresent moon on it, and a purple one with a sun on it. Issabelle freaked out. "I ASKED TO BE REBORN! NOT TO GIVE BIRTH," she cried. She poked the eggs. "They're still warm, maybe I should take them to school, just to be safe," she murmured.
Jo wrote: "Dear God, why. Why give it to me when you're going to take it away from me. Why when I thought it won't happen you let it happen. Why then give it to me when I'm completely unaware of it, when I do..."I like that very much, describes how I feel some days
He hit the wall. "NO! I WON'T KILL HER! SHE'S MY," he could feel tears streaming in his eyes,"She...my...friend." The others looked at him. "Miles, you have to...kill Ceely, I'm sorry," A boy with blue hair said. Miles looked at him and pushed his orange bangs out of his face. "YOU WOULDN'T SAM! YOU! YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND," he shouted. He turned to leave when Alice grabbed his arm, her pink hair was hiding her tearfilled eyes. "Miles, we do understand! She's our friend also," she said. Miles glared at her. "She's more than my friend," he snapped as he pulled awway. He walked out of the room. A young girl with two cream colored ponytails looked up at Alice. "What does he mean," she asked. "You'll understand later Chanel, when you're older," Alice said as she knelt down to look at the six year old's face.
I'm after my other half. My yang side. The good side of me. The boy version. I can feel him around me close. But I can only know who he is once I believe in myself...and him. But who should I be nice to? I'm not nice...at all. Where could he be...I don't understand. I can feel myself yell, yet I can't hear a thing. Who are you? Who am I? Where is he...where am I? And why is there an apple on the ground?
why am i almost the only one who postes on this??????? O.o I FEEL SO LONELY!!! XD
Sorry about that, I just haven't had time to get in to a writting mood.
I'm a background person. In my dance class almost everyone has had a part in our lyrical...not me. I...I wish I could prove myself worthy of having a part. But, I get so nervouse and I'm worried of what Melanie would do if I took her spotlight! She is Natalie's favorite dancer, she is the first person Natalie goes to. I'm sick and tired of being in the background! Why! I have a perfect idea for ou last 16 seconds of the dance, but I'm afraid of what Melanie will do to me...
They were pushed down onto the stone floor, both knees down, the position of the condemned. They stayed that way, heads bowed, kneeling before the man who held their lives in his hand. After several agonizing moments, the King spoke. "Rise, maiden." Connor gasped, a small involuntary intake of breath. His dream, the one he had all that time ago, before all of this started... He looked to the left, and saw Talaia as he had seen her in his dream, as a beautiful maiden. He looked to the right, feeling the spot where he had been bitten by the snake tingle. There was no snake, only Syara kneeling next to him. On her belt-why hadn't they taken it?-was her beloved knife, the one she had risked her life for. The intricate design on the handle glinted in the torchlight. It hit him suddenly, like a punch to the stomach, he knew where he had seen those designs before! Anger flooded his thoughts-Syara was the snake! The traitor...of course, why hadn't he seen it before? And now...if she told half of what she knew... He looked desperately back at Talaia, lovely Talaia, who hadn't harmed a soul, who had trusted Syara. And he knew, without a doubt, that before he died, he would kill Syara. If he had to use his last breath to do it, he would. He glanced around the room for a weapon.
@bookland- AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD She held out her hands. "Please! Don't leave me," she cried. She chased the kitsune down the street. A pure white kitsune. "Please wait," she cried. Her long black hair danced as she ran. She tripped over her blue dress but quickly got up again. She couldn't loose sight of the kitsune, they were rare to spot. And one with three tails! Even rarer! She ran quicker. She could hear people call her name. "Neko," they cried. She had it just in her reach when the calling stopped and she fell. She fell more. And more. More. She landed on the ground in a wierd looking room. "Why does it look like I'm on the," she started when she fell. "Ceiling?" someone next to Neko said. She looked up. There was a guy with long white hair with three braids as his bangs.
Silken crisp wings brushed my face as I laid in the grass, a ruby drop hit my cheek as I held him to me. H ewould die soon, too soon for my liking as it left an emtpy hole in my chest that could not be filled. His sea green eyes stared back as I gazed into them, only blinikng on acassion. "Why Allen why? Is ist because you are such a gentleman to shove yourself infront of me?" The stabbing replaye dover adn over in my head like a worn out move, each secne broken. My tear drops fell, soaking his green tunic as his stong hand stroked my cheek, "Apperentky if is destiny my dear, I wsas suposed to be your mate but as of the bond I am somehow dying. Don't shed tears for me, pity the living not the dead." he brushed my tears away, his warmth singing my skin. His animal kin stood beside him, whimpering ever so softly from tiem to time as they shared to pain. he would drown in his own blood as it crept up his lungs. I felt something isnide me break as he exhaled one last time, kissing me as softly anf pasionatly for the last time.
@Ana Thanks! Yours was interesting, how did she get on the ceiling? :)@Irene Nice! It sounds like the end to a great book, maybe you should write it someday! :)
@bookland: think alice in wonderland...with my own little twist XD
nanowrimo's coming up and i have two ideas......gonna do them both here!!!! XDmy angel cats one (oh gosh...)
Nervina stood there. She hated these type of field trips. All they did was go to the stadium and watch boys fight each other. She messed around with her orange tail as her, Gigi, and Sky walked into the stadium. "I wonder who's gonna fight today," Gigi said with excitement. "I think this is dumb, how we have to watch these boys act like wild animals," Sky said. "Well that because all you think about is books," Gigi said, her angel wings shined red and danced like fire. "Guys, calm it," Nervina murmured. They sat in their seats and watched as the first two boys came out. Nervina jumped. It was the boy she met in the meadow the other day...Leo.
How to Save a Life one:
Miles ran inside and sat down. He couldn't be late for his first day of superhero school. He sighed as he sat down right as the bell rang. "Lucky aren't we," murmured a girl in front of him. He nodded his head. He sat there quietly as the teacher explained everything. The door opened and a girl with short red hair walked in. "Why are you late," she asked the girl. The girl's sky blue eyes shone with fear. "II'm sorry ma'am, I got lost on my way here," she said quietly. "What was that," the teacher said. "I got lost on my way here," the girl said louder. "That's what I thought. Go sit behind Miles," the teacher said. Miles turned around so his blue eyes met hers. "Hi I'm Miles," he whispered. The girl blushed. "I'm Rose," she said. Miles smiled. "Nice to meet you," he said. "Miles, since you have NO powers, I'd shut up," the teacher said. Miles closed his mouth and slid down his chair.
Brooklyn wrote: "They were pushed down onto the stone floor, both knees down, the position of the condemned. They stayed that way, heads bowed, kneeling before the man who held their lives in his hand. After severa..."hummmmm, Syara sounds like the people i usually play as when we play games XD XD
Hey, what happened to Ingrid? On all the discussions she started, it says "by deleted member"!
Okay, I just went on the discussion "don't flip out" and no one else knows where she went!
She hung limply, held up only by the ropes tying her to the mast. She was dozing fitfully, as much as is possible standing up with ropes cutting into you. A sharp slap on her cheek woke her from her nightmares. "Are you ready?" a cold voice asked. Her eyes widened with terror, but she gave no reply. "Alright then!" the man laughed, a sound devoid of any real happiness. "Time to see the Captain." Rough hands untied her, then bound her hands together behind her back.
@Ana- We should start a roleplay! I'm not really sure how, but it would be fun. I don't really care what it would be about, but right now i'm in a pirate mood. :) Of course, only if you want to. :)
Sword pressing into his back, he glared up at the pirate captain. "What do you want with me?" he asked. "I think you know perfectly well," said the captain. "The son of a king is a fine prize for any pirate. Ransom money, you know." Hope gripped the prince's heart. Would his father pay the ransom? Could his father actually care enough to save him? As he was walked away, he over heard the captain tell his men to search the ship for the princess. Panic flared up in him. "She isn't here!" he called back to the captain. "She stayed behind in Alairn!" But his cries fell on deaf ears as he was thrown into the brig.
@At bookland- OMG I'M SO SAD RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'll tell you why at church. or right now, which ever is sooner XDHe looked across the room. There she stood so silently. Her eyes looked out the window. "The party wasn't quit what we expected but it turned out great," he said. She turned around and blushed. "I'm glad you like it Miles," she said, "I MEAN! I'M GLAD EVERYONE LIKES IT." Miles smiled and pulled something out from his back pocket. "You dropped this earlies," he said as he handed her a flower ring. "It's perfect," she smiled. "I polished it kinda, I hope your happy," Miles blushed as he rubbed his head. "I think its just wonderful," the girl smiled. Cherry is so special I-I wish I could tell her how I feel about her, Miles thought. "You're so beauti-AAAHHHH," Miles said, but he caught himself. "Its true, the stars are beautiful...i wish i could just stand here staring at them forever," Cherry said. Miles blushed. "So do I," he said.
Asia sat there in her seat. POOR TAILS, was writen all over her notebook. The boy behind her leaned forward. "Cosmo's dead, that's good. Now I don't have to see or hear her annoyingness anymore," he said. Asia clenched her fists, her sharp nails made it so a tiny dribble of blood flowed out. "Cosmo's dead and Tails can go on with out her," he said some more, noticing that it was getting to her, "Cosmo's dead and I'm happy." Asia stood up, tears streaming down her face as she rushed out of class. She hide in the only spot teachers couldn't reach that she could, the high window that looked over the duck pond and the park behind the school. "I hate Jon, I hate Jon, I hate Jon, I hate Jon, I hate Jon," Asia kept murmuring. She heard someone coming down the hallway. "Asia where are you," she heard the person yell. She hid behind the curtain of the window. She peeked out from one of the sides to see Dallas. Her and Dallas were close to each other. In creative writing they both agreed that they would read the dialoge of the two characters and it turned out wierd, Dallas's character was in love of her character. It turned out to be a very very wierd conversation. She closed her eyes and hid more. "Asia, I know you are up near the window," he said. Asia sighed and climbed down. "H-Hi Dallas," she mumbled. Dallas looked at her. "You okay, you ran out of class as fast as you could," he said. He knelt dow to the ground. "Almost as fast as Sonic," he smiled. Asia looked away and leaned on Dallas. "I-I watched the episode where Cosmo died, I've already seen it in english but the japanese version is so much more sad and when Cosmo died I-I couldn't bear it! I cried all day long and I'm still sad about it, but since we are at school I try to hide my sadness but Jon kept saying mean things about Cosmo and I...I couldn't stand it no more," Asia cried. Dallas hugged her. "It's fine..why don't we go talk to the counsler," he said. Asia pushed away from him. "NO NOT EVER," she said. "Why not," Dallas asked. "Because...because I'm afraid of talking to adults alone," she said. "Why is that," Dallas said. "BECAUSE! THEY JUDGE YOU! THEY SAY TO BE YOURSELF BUT THEN THE NEXT DAY THEY SAY NOT TO BE! I CAN'T! I'm afraid to," she said. Dallas smiled at her. "Don't worry, I'll be here no matter what. Just be yourself, I like that from you," he said.
Wow, that was awesome!!! And why are you sad? I'm guessing cuz you just watched the 77th episode of Sonic, or whatever it was. :)
@everyone: WHY IS IT SO QUIET!!!!????She hated it when her hair was brushed. It always hurt and she was always in tears when her mother was finished. She got up and left the room. She wanted to be alone for the rest of the day. She sat on her bedroom floor and opened up the closest comic she had. She closed her eyes and took a deepbreath. Maybe if she read some Sonic, it would calm her down, but her mind was else where. You tell me what I can and cannot do, you tell me who i am and who i am not, you tell me what i must and must not be, but aren't I suppossed to be the one to decide that? She wondered. She closed her book and grabbed her notebook and started to write. She sat there until she finished six chapters of th story. She took a deepy breath and set the notebook down. She finally picked up the comic book when her mom came in. "Ava, its time for bed," she said Ava glared. "Fine, mom," she mumbled. She got in bed and hid under the covers. "Why am I like this? Who am I anyways," she thought numbly.
@Anastasia - it's really late. I should be in bed... And that was pretty good!
ANY ONE OUT HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!! *crickets* just as I thought...OH WELL I'LL WRITE ANYWAYS. ^^She clenched her fists. She didn't know anything at all. She felt like a little kid. An emotional little kid. "Give it up Avril," she heard him say behind her. She opened her silver eyes and stared into the Grey eyes of her twin sister. Her black hair was down, while Avril's white hair was up. "Angel, please. You know what's going on," Avril said. She set her fair hand onto her sister's shoulder. "LEAVE ME ALONE! YOU KNOW NOTHING ABOUT ME," Angel snapped. Avril looked away. "Angel, I know you more than you think I do. We're twin sisters you know," she said. Avril looked at Angel's black skirt and tanktop. Angel had on black flats. Avril looked at her outfit. A long white dress and white highheels. Angel glared at her and held up her knife. "Leave me alone! PLEASE," she snapped. Avril sighed and undid her fan. "Whatever Angel, whatever floats your boat," she said. Angel watched as her sister walked aaway from her. Avril closed her eyes. "This dumb curse and prophesy," she muttered. A tear streamed down her face.
It had been eight weeks since Charlie had last called and that worried Sarah terribly. Joey had been moving more closely these past days but never once complained to her about his aches and pains. Although she was brought to different doctors all over the state Debby still refused to speak and even little Joey couldn’t bring out a pleasant smile from her. Mr. Reed explained to Sarah that Joey had a quite large hole in his heart and was widening every day.And there was no effective cure for it. Sarah sank heavily down on her bed clutching the phone to her ear and only removing it briefly to repeat the message. It was a very special phone-call she had recorded it a few months ago and what made it so special and precious to her.
This special message had been spoken by Joey but she could tell from his tone of voice that it was highly important and she patiently waited it out. His message was about his forgotten math home-work and at the end it turned into a birthday message. After she had listened to his sweet, innocent voice and Charlie walked inside of the room.
His trusting blue eyes gazed up at her and with a shaking bloodied hand he lifted it up and gently touched her tear covered cheek. Before his eyes closed, breathed a labored breath and died right there in her arms. Medics gathered impatiently around a now sobbing Sarah and tried to take away Joey’s still body but refused to let them away him away.
I know this sounds very unrealistic and quite sad at this time but I have to say that it came from an video I found online and the website I found it on is called istock, it has videos and pictures and stuff like that but ever since I saw a video of a laughing little boy.
I felt like it was my duty to write about this precious little boy and not only Joey but also Sarah's, Charlie's and Debby's stories, like it was my destiny to write something that would change the world.
I have tried so very hard to rename every single character with better names...I can't do it. I mean Joey is just a perfect name for him, Debbie on the other hand was changed because I forgot her name.
Please, please, please send me your feedback.
I welcome any other feedback from the other members.
"So it's come to this," Angel said. Her knife up against Avril's neck. Avril looked at her twin. She had severe sratches and cuts. She had a black eye. "Angel, you're just hurting yourself," Avril said. Angel glared at Avril. "YOU DO YOU THINK YOU ARE! I KNOW WHAT MOVES YOU WILL MAKE NEXT! I KNOW EVERYTHING ABOUT YOU," Angel said. Avril smiled. "Strange isn't it," she said. Angel smiled evily. "If you are so worried about me check up on yourself. You're just ast bad," she said. Angel pushed Avril so she looked into the ice of the bridge. Avril looked away. "Angel, whenever I look at you, I see myself. When ever I hurt you, I hurt myself. Physicaly and emotionly," Avril mummured. Angel picked Avril up. She stared right into Avril's eyes. "You are a quick and wise thinker, but those might be your last words," Angel said. Avril could hear their little sister behind her. "ANGEL PLEASE! DO NOT HURT Avril," she cried. Avril tried to look towards her. She caught sight of Knicky. "Knicky, take Tiana and run" she stuttered. Knicky nodded. Her red hair fell in her face. She ran and grabbed Tiana's wrist. "Lets go," she said. The little blonde aloud Knicky to take her somewhere safe. Suddenly an explosion happened behind Angel. "THE PRESEDENT," Tiana cried out. Angel let go of Avril and ran into the smoke. Avril looked up and tried to get up but fell. Tiana ran towards her. "AVRIL! WHAT IS ANGEL DOING," she cried. Soon the presedent fell right next to them. They looked up and there floating in the air was Angel. She had a faint smile and then fell. "ANGEL," Avril cried. She ran into the crater of the valcano that Avril had fallen into. Knicky ran after her. "AVRIL WHAT ARE YOU DOING," she cried. Tiana followed. "AVRIL," she cried. Avril climbed carefuly down the side. "ANGEL GRAB MY HAND," she cried. She grabbed hold of a sharp ledge and reached out her hand to Angel. Angel reached but slapped it away. "There's only one room for you. It is not my destiney," Angel said. Avril looked into Angels eyes as she disappeared. "NO! ANGEL," she cried. Knicky grabbed her and pulled her back up. Tiana ran and hugged Avril. "AVRIL! SHE CAN'T BE....Angel," she cried. Avril hugged Tiana. "Yes, T, she's gone," she muttered. They sat the hugging and crying for a few minutes.GUESS WHAT MOVIE THIS IS BASED OFF OF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (only a Sonic nerd would know XD)
Katrina sat up in bed, she smelled cinnamon. She shuddered, she was super allergic to cinnamon. "hello??" she yelled. A guy walked out. He smiled at her,
"no use yelling. We know what you are. " he said.
"what am I?" she asked.
"an angel. " he replied. Taking off his jacket to reveal black angel wings. He took off her jacket to reveal pure white angel wings.
"why are mine white and yours black?" Katrina asked. The guy hesitated before saying,
" no reason... My name is Stephan. " Katrina got up from the bed she was in. When she got up she floated to the ceiling. She screamed in shock. Stephan pulled her down, " let's take you to Maybel, she is the one who will help you more. I must leave now, just follow the golden path to a bright pink door, that is where Maybel will be. " he flew off waving at her. She walked out of the room following the path.
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"no use yelling. We know what you are. " he said.
"what am I?" she asked.
"an angel. " he replied. Taking off his jacket to reveal black angel wings. He took off her jacket to reveal pure white angel wings.
"why are mine white and yours black?" Katrina asked. The guy hesitated before saying,
" no reason... My name is Stephan. " Katrina got up from the bed she was in. When she got up she floated to the ceiling. She screamed in shock. Stephan pulled her down, " let's take you to Maybel, she is the one who will help you more. I must leave now, just follow the golden path to a bright pink door, that is where Maybel will be. " he flew off waving at her. She walked out of the room following the path.
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thats pretty interesting....AND YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SOMEONE FINALLY COMMENTED ON THIS!!!! IM NOT ALONE!!!! *looks up at date* :O WHERE HAVE I BEEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She scampered down the stairs. Her orange cloak danced behind her. "Gwendolyn! We have an emergency," she cried. Gwendolyn looked at the young, black, guardmouse. "What is it Daewn," Gwendolyn asked. "Its, its Kenzie! He's injured. He and his guard just got back," Daewn exclaimed. She was on the verge of tears. Gwendolyn looked at Daewn. "Daewn, I know you and Kenzie are close, you've got to calm down," she said. Daewn nodded. "Yes Gwendolyn. I know he wouldn't want me in tears over him. I-I'll just make him feel guilty," Daewn mumbled. She quickly wiped her eyes. They rushed out into the main part of Lockhaven. There layed Kenzie, Saxon looking down at him. "What happened," Gwendolyn asked. Saxon turned around quickly. "It's my fault! All my fault. I rushed into things like usual and he jumped in front of an attack to protect me. It's my fault," Saxon said. Daewn shook her head. "Saxon, that is your instinct, it is something you can't exactly grow out of. Its not your fault," Gwendolyn said. Saxon looked at Daewn. "You okay," he asked. Daewn stood there looking at the red spots on Kenzie's blue cloak. "Daewn? Daewn are you okay," Saxon said. He waved his paw in front of her face. Daewn jumped. "AHH SAXON! I mean...uh...um...its not your fault Saxon," Daewn said. Saxon looked at her. "I was asking if you were okay, I'm taking that as a no," Saxon said. Daewn looked at him. "There you go again jumping to conclusions...but you are right, I'm not feeling good," Daewn said, her eyes filling with tears.
He ran after her. "Raven! Raven! Wait up," he cried. She turned around, her raven black scales shone in the moonlight. "What do you want," she mumbled. He looked into her misty purple eyes. "Raven, you belong here. With us. The other dragons," he said to her. Raven shook her head. "No! This is not my place Spear. No one trust me. No one. I think I'm better off on my own," Raven said. She ran off. "WAIT! RAVEN," Spear cried out. The moonlight shone down on Spear's purple scails. He sat there. He started wonderin to himself. What did Sky do now? Spears let out a sad sigh and walked back into the cave. There near the enterace layed a sky blue dragonfly. "What now," he mumbled. Spear looked at Sky. "What did you do that made Raven want to leave," he asked. Sky rolled over. "Nothing," he mumbled. Spear layed the for a few more minutes, listening to Sky mumbled in his sleep.
My family has fairies. Each girl gets a necklace on their 14th birthday. For a year they wear this necklace, which figures out their personality. On their 15th birthday, a fairy is born from the necklace. The fairy's personality will compliment the wearer's.Today, I got my fairy. Her name is Merlina. She has dark purple hair and Golden eyes. She's very wild and had a free spirit. I find her annoying sometimes. The people outside my family can not see her, for they don't the special magic as we do. All they see is a shimmer in the air where the fairy is. The shimmer is always in the fairy's special color, for exapmle the people in my school would see Merlina as a purple shimmer. But its just a faint shimmer. They don't hear her speak either. That is unless she gets really close and wants them to. She does this a couple of times. And when they do, they jump. Its kinda humiliating and funny at the same time. Merlina can get kinda out of hand though... like that one time at school when she told Edgar that I had a crush on him.
She looked into his brown eyes. "I...I...I like.....I," she stuttered. He looked at her and smiled. "What's the matter Madi," he said. He pushed her blonde hair out of her face. "S-Sam," she stuttered. His black hair danced in the wind. "What is it Madi," he said. She looked down at the ground. "Umm...Sam...I...uh...I think I might actully kinda, a little, sorta, like you," Madi stuttered. Sam smiled. "I like you too, everyone likes you," Sam said. Madi blushed. "Yeah, like that," she muttered. Sam frowned. "Why do you look so sad? You okay Madi," Sam said. Madi shook her head. "I'm not okay Sam. You don't understand how much I like you! I like you more than a friend, I love you! I can't imagine my life without you. I wish you see me the same way, but even if you don't can we still be friends. I know, you might think I'm wierd for liking you that way. I'm sorry," Madi said. Her eyes filled up with tears. Sam opened his mouth to speak but before he could say anything Madi ran off.
She knew it would happen, she knew what was going to happen next. She had seen it before...he was going to be sad and she just couldn't stand it. "I have to stop this," she muttered. Memories passed through her mind. How she had met him, her feelings of fangirly screams. Her friend's fangirly screams when she met him and her hero. Saving the world sevreal times. She couldn't let her die. "Cosmo! COSMO," she cried. The green haired girl turned around sadly. "Ah! Aurora," she cried Aurora hugged Cosmo. "Don't do it! He'll feel terrible! Trust me," Aurora cooed. "What are you talking about," the young seedrian asked. Aurora looked at her. "Cosmo...i know how everything ends," she muttered. Cosmo looke at her funnily. "Tails, told me about how they knew about him and Sonic," she said. Aurora looked into Cosmo's blue eyes. "Please Cosmo...don't do it," Aurora said. "Don't do what," Cosmo asked. Aurora opened her mouth, but then remembered the curse she had set upon herself. "I can't tell you Cosmo...but what ever it is....the consequences end in Tails' hiding from everyone for a while," Aurora said. Cosmo looked at her. "Aurora," she said. Aurora could feel tears stream down her face. "Cosmo...just don't do it okay! Just don't do it! I think you belong with Tails! Ypu two are so cute together...please.....don't do it," Aurora cried out. She turned and ran out of the room and into hers. She could hear Cosmo run after her. "Aurora! Aurora! What are you talking about? You're starting to sound like Amy," Aurora heard her yell. Aurora closed her eyes. "She's going to do it...I just know it," she mumbled.
@Anastacia: I know a loong time ago you asked if I was going to create a freewrite into a book and that you would like to see it. Well, I have eight chapters up if you want to check it out, it's in my writting under 'Free Write One". I would love to hear what you think :)
The long summer days were slowly fading and she knew that soon it would be time for them to leave. The reality of it crushed what little happiness was left and unwanted tears sprung forth. The heat had slowly turned cooler and the leaves were fading from the vibrant green. "Hey, what's wrong?" someone asked her.
She turned to see Tails standing there, "Nothing. I'm just a little sad you have to go."
He came and sat in the empty space by her side, "It'll be alright. We'll be back for Christmas. Maybe even Haloween."
"It's not fair. Why does time have to fly by so quickly?"
"I know, I'm sad we have to leave too," he looked at her with large blue eyes, "but you know what'll happen if we stay to much longer."
She sighed and gazed out the large window, "Why did our worlds have to be one once? Why can't they be their own thing. Then you could stay forever. You wouldn't have to go," her voice broke on the last sentence.
He wrapped a comforting arm around her shoulders as she began to cry again, "It'll be okay. Sasha," he said her name softly, "Please don't cry anymore. We'll be back before you know it."
The tears continued, "It takes to long. Even the summer seems shortened when you guys come. The days fly by to quickly. I always know that the day is coming, but I push it out of my mind. I keep telling myself 'You still have a lot of time. Don't think about it', but then it's here before I know it. Tails, you can't leave!"
He pulled her into a hug and smoothed her short bron hair, "It'll be alright. You'll see."
"But everytime you leave, I get a year older. You only get one month. Soon I'll be too old..."
He placed something in her hand, "Here. So you can always remember us."
She looked and saw a familiar flower, "Cosmo's flower? But Tails, it's all you have left."
"Keep it. So you can remember," he assured her.
"Thank you," she whispered with shimmering blue-green eyes, "I won't forget."
He gave her another hug, "Why don't we go see what the others are up to? It's our last day after all."
She smiled, "Let's go. This'll be the best day ever. Even Eggman couldn't ruin it."
He laughed and wiped the tears off her cheeks, "Alright. Let's go."
He took her small hand and they took off running. The flower lay on the seat and a small voice spoke, "Good luck Tails. She'll be perfect for you," slowly Cosmo's voice faded and the only sounds were the occasional patters of leaves on the roof.
Kayla wrote: "The long summer days were slowly fading and she knew that soon it would be time for them to leave. The reality of it crushed what little happiness was left and unwanted tears sprung forth. The heat...":O so amazing!!!!!!!!!!!
She could see the planes flying this way. "Shoot, its them." She ran to her little sister Zoie. "ZOIE, GRAB MY HAND NOW," she cried. The little girl with red hair looked up at her. "Julia! What's going on," the young girl said. Julia put some of her red bangs behind her ear. "Nothing, just follow me," she said. Julia and Zoie ran down the street with all sorts of other people who had noticed the planes. "Julia, why do those planes have huge crosses on them! They don't look like peaceful, happy crosses like the ones at church," Zoie cried. Julia picked up her three year old sister. "Just burry your head into my jacket! And don't look," Julia said. She suddenly heard a huge explosion behind her that sent her flying. Julia heard Zoie whimpered. "Zoie are you okay," Julia cried. Zoie's face was bruised. "ZOIE," Julia cried even more. Zoie's soft green eyes opened slowly. "Julia...what's going on," Zoie mumbled. Julia saw something coming their way. "Julia...why is that plane flying so low," Zoie said. Julia grabbed Zoie and ran. Julia closed her eyes. "This can't be real, this can't be real," she kept mumbling to herself. Could this be the beginning of a new war? Why did they attack here first, the city was just a dainty town that didn't matter to the world. She caught site of a place where they could hide. She pushed Zoie in and then got down. "What are we doing," Zoie asked. "Zoie this is hide and seek, we don't want anyone to find us...AT ALL. So be quiet," Julia said. Zoie closed her eyes and curled up next to Julia. Soon Zoie had fallen asleep. After several hours of the bombing and screaming and crying, everything went quiet. Julia layed Zoies head on her jacket. She sneaked out of their hiding place. Everything looked grey and depressing in the smoke and debrees. Suddenly Julia say something caught up in a tree. It was a red balloon. Julia got it down and looked at it. "Some poor little girl must have lost it in the attack," Julia mumbled. She closed her eyes as she bagan to cry. She let of the balloon as she wiped her eyes. Julia walked back over the the hiding spot that Zoie was in. "What should we do know Zoie...what should we do now," she said