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What did you think of suzanne collins writing style???
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Collins would write: "I run up the hill as fast as I can." See the difference?
I noticed the present tense right away, but I think it really worked because the books moved so quickly and were full of action, which is best to read in the present tense. Somehow it makes me feel like I'm there, in the moment, more than past-tense written books. Basically I loved the Hunger Games. (-:

Almost frustratingly so at points, if I had something to do and all I wanted to do was read!



Hope wrote: "It was an unusual style, what with it speaking in present and not past tense. Most authors would write: "I ran up the hill as fast as I could."
Collins would write: "I run up the hill as fast a..."

Elena wrote: "I noticed the present tense right away, but I think it really worked because the books moved so quickly and were full of action, which is best to read in the present tense. Somehow it makes me feel..."


I heard somebody say once that the writing in The Hunger Games is very frontloaded & active. Like, the present tense verb would be right at the beginning of the sentence, and there weren't any long modifying clauses to set the sentence up. So it really pulls you in and it's very exciting!

No offense to Suzzanne Collins and people who like the 3rd one. It just got old for me.


Her characters were amazing. Each one had their own story, their own strengths and weaknesses, they were so real, and that's what made them relatable and interesting.
Take Peeta for example, many strengths, like his strong penchant for public speaking, his purity of self (the way he was most worried about staying himself in the arena, not letting the Games change him into a monster), many weaknesses, he had no survival skills, no ambition to win. He had interest in painting, but worked as a baker, though that may not have been his true calling. We all know what it's like to have a skill that may not be marketable, but it truly makes us happy. I could see myself being friends with Peeta, felt like he really could exist. That right there is good writing.
She writes in present tense. It's actually becomming more and more popular nowadays in modern literature. Jodi Picoult is known for writing that way, in fact.

I wasn't a fan of the third one either. I kind of felt like she may have had to write it rather quickly. It was a lot different than the other two, and when I start wanting to skip parts in a book, I know that I don't like it 100%. But the first two are insanely addictive.

It's really good. I don't know if this is her writing style or just the content adn topic of the book, but was I the only one who noticed a LOT of scenes describing pain? Like, a whole lot. I remember PAGES full of just decriptions of how muhc pain Katniss was in. I really did like it though, it gave a really gritty edge to her style.



Totally agree!!

But all in all, I really like this series. Very well written and a great story. I cannot wait for the movie to come out next year! I think its in March?









I liked the way that she wrote--very detailed and visual. I really liked the way the story was in present-tense, and from Katniss's view. It was an interesting way to go about writing that kind of book. One thing, though--I'm curious to see how the movie will turn out, as the whole series was narrated by Katniss, and you can't exactly NARRATE an movie by one person.

There were several points where the sentence was missing a vital comma or contained typos.
I really wish Collins wrote this better, but the story is definitely captivating.



that is a good point- the style didn't work as well for the other two books.
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