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☆♪Taylor♪☆ (taybrookeg) | 133 comments Mod
i wrote a poem (no, it does not rhyme or really make any sense) it's not done, i'm gonna edit it and add more later. it's all i got for now.

Happiness

Happiness.
a simple, nine letter word.
not even that hard to spell.
Happiness.
A word that can change one's life forever. A kind smile. A warm welcome. An embrace. A kind action, and encouraging word. What would the world be without happiness?

Happiness.
hope. joy. Love.


☆♪Taylor♪☆ (taybrookeg) | 133 comments Mod
thanks. you gotta admit though, it's kinda cheesy


message 3: by *TheWrittenWord*Mo (last edited Jun 05, 2011 08:18AM) (new)

*TheWrittenWord*Mo (thewrittenwordmo) Happiness

I could be happy if the sun was shining
I could be happy if the grass was green
I could be happy if no one was crying
I could be happy if you stopped being mean.

'Cos you see that's the thing
you hate me and tell me so everyday
So if you would just go away
you and your disgusting nose ring.

I'm happy the way I am because you see
that's what true happiness is to me.


message 4: by Connor (new)

Connor Kinkade (connork) lol


message 5: by Jeanna-Has Probably Read It! (last edited Jun 05, 2011 10:02AM) (new)

Jeanna-Has Probably Read It! (j3j3real) This is just a thought not really a poem just a thought. I hope you like it.

Happiness

When you think of happiness do you think about the movie The Pursuit of Happyness or do you think of a kid who gets to taste his first ice cream cone? Or do you reference it with someone who has just won the lottery? Or maybe it's the first time that man or woman looked upon their newborn for the first time. Can it be associated as only a feeling or associated with an object? What can you say brings you complete happiness?

Happiness to me means having an inner peace. I don't have a care in the world because at that moment I'm just HAPPY. I find that happiness comes when I least expect it. It's when I get an A after I know I should have failed. It's when my baby says I love you, Mommy in her 3 year old voice. It's when I read a good book that I just can't put down. It's even when I push myself through whatever trying storm I'm going through and can say in the end, "Hey at least you made it through." I love it when I see people happy because it's as if they turned on a big bright light over themselves that says, "Look at Me!"

When I'm happy I want to drive with the windows down to have the breeze go through my hair. I want to feel the complete freedom of release that makes me want to spin openly in a park like on The Sound of Music. I want to sing at top of my lungs and not care that I don't sound as if I should be on American Idol. And most of all, when I'm happy it makes me want to spread my Joy to everyone else. Just seeing someone else smile is PRICELESS. It's as that saying goes, LIVE, LOVE, LAUGH. Well, I say you should Live to be happy, Love to be happy, and Laugh just because you are happy.


Jeanna-Has Probably Read It! (j3j3real) Thanks, Ally. I usually keep all that up in my head. Felt good to write it down.


Colette-writer-reader-dork (ColetteWriterreaderdork) | 8 comments Really short, random, sorta poem.

Happiness
It feels like sunshine
It tastes like sugar
It is the feeling that you want
But very rarely get
Happiness is worked for
And once it’s there
You never let it go.


message 8: by Connor (last edited Jun 06, 2011 03:34PM) (new)

Connor Kinkade (connork) You never let it go... until an earthquake takes your house while someone robs your bank account.


♫ Emily ♫ Heda Lives On ♫ cant post any stories this time... all my stories involve darkness, death, abuse, and that sort of stuff.


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

while someone robs you bank account?


message 11: by Connor (new)

Connor Kinkade (connork) HAPPY?????!!!!!!!!!!


message 12: by Jeanna-Has Probably Read It! (last edited Jun 06, 2011 09:07PM) (new)

Jeanna-Has Probably Read It! (j3j3real) Connor wrote: "HAPPY?????!!!!!!!!!!"

happy, happy, joy, joy,


message 13: by Connor (new)

Connor Kinkade (connork) my friend used to sing that all the time.


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message 15: by EmmaTheAmazing , Eeeek! (new)

EmmaTheAmazing  (Emamazing) | 98 comments Mod
Oops, I posted that, and then I read that we shouldn't post links. Should I just copy and paste, then?


*TheWrittenWord*Mo (thewrittenwordmo) i think so :)


message 17: by EmmaTheAmazing , Eeeek! (last edited Jun 08, 2011 07:14PM) (new)

EmmaTheAmazing  (Emamazing) | 98 comments Mod
Ok, cool. If links do work for people, I found a picture to go with it.


So many people,
all over this Earth,
looking for the same thing,
the same feeling.
Happiness.
They look
and look
and look
as if it's just waiting for them
behind a new house
or a being rich
or being important.
They look to yellow
smiley faces
winking at them,
and they ask
how they can find happiness.
But happiness isn't a
one-size-fits-all
kind of thing.
We all have different minds,
but more importantly,
we all have different hearts.
So they can look
and look
and look
all they want,
but happiness isn't behind
a house
or a job
or what people think of you.
It's tucked in your heart,
waiting for you to stop looking,
so that it can find you.


message 18: by EmmaTheAmazing , Eeeek! (new)

EmmaTheAmazing  (Emamazing) | 98 comments Mod
Yeah...


message 19: by EmmaTheAmazing , Eeeek! (new)

EmmaTheAmazing  (Emamazing) | 98 comments Mod
Or here, I'll be special...
'Sizes of Happiness'
Because of, you know, the one-size-fits-all thing.


message 20: by EmmaTheAmazing , Eeeek! (new)

EmmaTheAmazing  (Emamazing) | 98 comments Mod
Sound good.


message 21: by EmmaTheAmazing , Eeeek! (new)

EmmaTheAmazing  (Emamazing) | 98 comments Mod
I DID!


message 22: by Connor (new)

Connor Kinkade (connork) HI!


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

Hi


Jeanna-Has Probably Read It! (j3j3real) These are really good.


Jeanna-Has Probably Read It! (j3j3real) Connor wrote: "HI!"

hi back at cha.


message 26: by Connor (new)

Connor Kinkade (connork) What are? Oh yeah... I thought you meant HI! Hi and I DID and yeah...


message 27: by EmmaTheAmazing , Eeeek! (new)

EmmaTheAmazing  (Emamazing) | 98 comments Mod
HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm anxious to find out who won. It's not going to be me, of course, but I want to know which of the others.


Jeanna-Has Probably Read It! (j3j3real) I've never been in a writing contest before. This is nerve racking like waiting for my final grade on a final exam. Who got it???? lol


message 29: by EmmaTheAmazing , Eeeek! (new)

EmmaTheAmazing  (Emamazing) | 98 comments Mod
I know!
It's very scary...even though nothing happens if you lose. Nothing really happens if you win either...


*TheWrittenWord*Mo (thewrittenwordmo) LOL


message 31: by Connor (new)

Connor Kinkade (connork) LAUGH OUT LOUD!!!!


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

quit being redundant Connor!


message 33: by EmmaTheAmazing , Eeeek! (new)

EmmaTheAmazing  (Emamazing) | 98 comments Mod
x2!


message 34: by EmmaTheAmazing , Eeeek! (new)

EmmaTheAmazing  (Emamazing) | 98 comments Mod
How many people have voted?


message 35: by EmmaTheAmazing , Eeeek! (new)

EmmaTheAmazing  (Emamazing) | 98 comments Mod
Wow...that seems like alot. How many people entered again? 5?


message 36: by EmmaTheAmazing , Eeeek! (new)

EmmaTheAmazing  (Emamazing) | 98 comments Mod
Really? I'm not nervous at all...I know I'm not going to win. I'm just curious...and I get anxious when I have to wait for stuff. I'm terrible at waiting, or at least waiting without pestering. Plus, no matter how bad you did, first competitions are exciting.


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

I know what we should do next!


message 38: by EmmaTheAmazing , Eeeek! (new)

EmmaTheAmazing  (Emamazing) | 98 comments Mod
Oh, ok.


Jeanna-Has Probably Read It! (j3j3real) EmmaTheAmazing wrote: "Really? I'm not nervous at all...I know I'm not going to win. I'm just curious...and I get anxious when I have to wait for stuff. I'm terrible at waiting, or at least waiting without pestering. Plu..."

Awww you got 1 out of 5 chance of winning too. We all are great writers.


message 40: by Connor (new)

Connor Kinkade (connork) I need to read everyone's story and I need to start writing stuff.


message 41: by EmmaTheAmazing , Eeeek! (new)

EmmaTheAmazing  (Emamazing) | 98 comments Mod
1 out of 5, 20%
But it's not based on probability...
But yeah, I suppose there's a chance.


*TheWrittenWord*Mo (thewrittenwordmo) lol EmmaTheAmazingMathWizz :P


message 43: by [deleted user] (new)

Félicitations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Jeanna-Has Probably Read It! (j3j3real) Hey great job emma! And here you was doubting ur self. Great job.


message 45: by Connor (new)

Connor Kinkade (connork) Hi! what happened? Emma won or something? When did this contest start? Emma wrote something? I'm confused...


message 46: by [deleted user] (new)

...


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

all I can say is....


message 48: by [deleted user] (new)

wait for it...


message 49: by [deleted user] (new)

GULLIBLE IS WRITTEN ON THE CEILING!!!!!!!


Jeanna-Has Probably Read It! (j3j3real) Connor wrote: "Hi! what happened? Emma won or something? When did this contest start? Emma wrote something? I'm confused..."

Oooh Conner where have you been??? lol Yes, Emma won. We are gonna have to hold you hostage out here. :)


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