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May 25, 2011 05:26PM
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Ashby wrote: "random something. :)I SIT, AND WAIT, EXCITEMENT FLOODING THROUGH ME at the prospect of what is about to happen...Then a moment later, great buffets of wind are creating large clouds of dust below..."
I like this. It really took me there like I was flying too. Great job.
we can;t vote for ourselves, right?
can we vote if we don't write a story?
I imagine so. Don't we need as many votes as possible? What if we all just happened to get one vote each?
do we post the writing on here?
The best of friends we used to be, but something in us pushed us apart.
It couldn't be seen by you,
But it was more then visible to me
The silences screamed in my ears,
saying "this isn't meant to be,"
but i ignored it completely.
That was three months ago.
For weeks we exchanged hellos and goodbyes,
I could see the pain plaguing your face,
but i ignored it.
That was before my life was claimed,
a drunk man the killer
You came to my funeral in your finest clothes,
you were sad to see me go,
but behind this i saw something in your thoughts.
A silent thought saying "good riddance to that girl,"
I never imagined that thought in your head,
but I fled from there and didn't look back.
As a soul that wanders,
My brain tells me to go back,
but never will I ever go back to see you.
I am happy now being free from life,
from the burden i held,
from the pain i kept hidden.
You thought you knew me,
But you didn't at all.
oh. i didnt know. im smart.
I still have to read a few more stories. :(I'll vote laterish.
uh oh. THAT'S TOMORROW!!!!!!!! AUG!!!!!!!!!It's okay, you can relax Connor. Just read them after work or after the VFW services tomorrow.
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i can tell.
ally; he tends to talk to himself alot.
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OH! I have to read the stories!!!! AUG!
Ally wrote: "umm Connor if you were going to vote it would have to be for Violet's story because you can't vote for yours :)"
lol
lol
I haven't voted yet because the poll I wanted to vote on closed. :(
Oh I mean That comment didn't load when I made that comment. I know who he is. :D
Wait what? I won?OH! NO!!!!!! I FORGOT TO VOTE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now I feel bad because we would have tied again. :(
