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Iviana (The Sign Painter), The Goddess of indecisiveness
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Would you prefer me to refer to you as Ivi or Cassidy?
DRAKEY WIF ___________ at ___________.
Avery/Telly wif _____________ at ____________.
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Iviana (The Sign Painter), The Goddess of indecisiveness
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Me: It should. OwO did you check your text settings?
Doesn't matter to me. :3
Drakey wif idc at zeh forest.
Telly with Ivan at idc.
Avery wif Caleb at teh music gazebo.
Doesn't matter to me. :3
Drakey wif idc at zeh forest.
Telly with Ivan at idc.
Avery wif Caleb at teh music gazebo.

Ivi it is, cuz I'm used to it. ^~^
DRAKEY wiiiiiiiiif........ Herm. >_>
Telly and Ivan at Beach.
KHAY.
*poofa*
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message 7708:
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Me: >_< I wanna skip ahead to night time at the Hecate cabin just 'cause Anfisa's gonna wake up with a nightmare and go over to Noel and ask if she can sleep with her.
:]
Urmmmm. Idc.
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Urmmmm. Idc.

Urrrrrrrmm...
Gee, let's ask the murderer himself.
Who would YOU like to
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Me: I'M SO FREAKING PISSED RIGHT NOW
But I'm happy cos I got a PINGPONG TABLE!!
Anyway pissed news:
This NEWB in this other group PMed me:
hi dis iz sagar.regarding the topic the dots are put there intentionally.meaning its an incomplete thought where he is talking to himself and others too. when someone faces a situation which he havn't faced before,the person surely talks carefully thinking what to talk..the dots suggest that he has paused his conversation for a moment and he continued.and if u want to give any suggestions just msg me dont write in the discussion and disturb the story,thank you.
I MEAN WTF?! HE TALKS IN LIKE TEXTInG LANGUAGE WHEN EvERYONE ELSE IS VERY GOOD AT GRAMMAR. DUDE I MEAN IVE BEEN IN THIS GROUP FOR LIKE 8 MONTHS, AND IM A MOD. HE CANT TELL ME WHAT TO DO.
But I'm happy cos I got a PINGPONG TABLE!!
Anyway pissed news:
This NEWB in this other group PMed me:
hi dis iz sagar.regarding the topic the dots are put there intentionally.meaning its an incomplete thought where he is talking to himself and others too. when someone faces a situation which he havn't faced before,the person surely talks carefully thinking what to talk..the dots suggest that he has paused his conversation for a moment and he continued.and if u want to give any suggestions just msg me dont write in the discussion and disturb the story,thank you.
I MEAN WTF?! HE TALKS IN LIKE TEXTInG LANGUAGE WHEN EvERYONE ELSE IS VERY GOOD AT GRAMMAR. DUDE I MEAN IVE BEEN IN THIS GROUP FOR LIKE 8 MONTHS, AND IM A MOD. HE CANT TELL ME WHAT TO DO.
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Iviana (The Sign Painter), The Goddess of indecisiveness
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message 7738:
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Iviana (The Sign Painter), The Goddess of indecisiveness
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Post at Memory Hall?"
Me: RIGHT *runs to post*
NYEH IMMA SHOVE THAT PERSON DOWN A WELL IF I SEE EM. >_>
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Iviana (The Sign Painter), The Goddess of indecisiveness
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Me: He's so annoying. I saw his posts and it bugs the crap out of me. There's a space after the periods, dammit.
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Iviana (The Sign Painter), The Goddess of indecisiveness
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Me: Lol, wanna see my reply?
I was all professional and shizz, but really I just wanted to go
HOLY SH*T YOU HAVE 3 COMMENTS AND NONE OF THEM ARE CORRECT GRAMMAR I HAVE 551 COMMENTS AND ALMOST ALL OF THEM ARE CORRECT GRAMMAR! I'M A MOD, YOURE NOT! DONT TELL ME WHAT TO DO!
I was all professional and shizz, but really I just wanted to go
HOLY SH*T YOU HAVE 3 COMMENTS AND NONE OF THEM ARE CORRECT GRAMMAR I HAVE 551 COMMENTS AND ALMOST ALL OF THEM ARE CORRECT GRAMMAR! I'M A MOD, YOURE NOT! DONT TELL ME WHAT TO DO!
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Iviana (The Sign Painter), The Goddess of indecisiveness
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Me: XD lol Ivi, i don't care. But I PM-ed him this:
1) Yeah, but some of those were complete thoughts.
Example
She seems nervous. __Correct__ It has a subject, and an action.
She seems nervous... Either Could be a complete thought or they could be continuing the sentence.
She seems...nervous. Correct They were thinking of the verb.
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My mom is running alot... Incorrect It's a complete sentence. With a subject, and an action. Mom + running
My mom is running alot. Correct.
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2) It's not just the '...'s it's how you use them. Yes it's a fetus but this is impossible anyway. No 10 week old FETUS can learn ENGLISH. Much less make out words through 7 layers of skin and at least a gallon of blood and water. The '...'s are just THERE. They don't need to be and it makes it look slopy.
3) Also I have a problem with your SPELLING. In this group we're not TEXTING, or IMing. Were writing a story so that we can improve our writing skills. If people can't understand your story, it's not worth it. I've asked you several times, and you still haven't changed it. It's not that hard to type complete words. It makes you look very immature writing that way. Amature like, even. Like I said, we're not texting. Me, John, and Asami are very serious about writing.
4) It's also a matter of disrespect.
A) I know how 'dots' work. I was the one who explained it to you.
B) It's not your story. But it is my group. And you're not asking me. You're feeding words into my mouth.
C) If you were writing a report on viruses would you talk like this:
Da virus isn livin becos it doesn hav a metablim
No. I think not. But if you did and the teacher/who ever's in charge asked you to clean up a bit, would you? I think so. Please, I just want to help you. Grammar like that will not gain you any respect in this writing world. Plus I don't know what grade you're in but in Junior High when/if you take computers/writing- they're not going to like that.
So please, just try to fix grammar mistakes. Like your email.
It could've been
'Hi, this is Sagar. Regarding the topic 'The Twins Wins'; the dots are put there intentionally. Meaning; it's an incomplete thought were he/she is talking to himself/herself and others also. When someone faces a situation where he/her hasn't been in before, the person surely talks carefully thinking what to say. The dots, or periods suggest that he has paused his conversation for the moment and that he continued. If you want to give any suggestions just PM me, don't write in the discussion and disturb the story.
I would've taken you more seriously, because in your format it looks like you're texting and don't really care about the matter at hand.
Also regarding your PM:
It's not a suggestion it's a rule. Seriously, rules have to be enforced.
You can not tell me what to do. I was using brackets, and you were disturbing the story more than I was. Did you ever take to hand how people ad trouble reading that?
Thank you, but I do not give grammar lessons. If you have a problem with our rules, find another group. But I expect this is an all around rule: You won't be respected with texting language.
Very long.
1) Yeah, but some of those were complete thoughts.
Example
She seems nervous. __Correct__ It has a subject, and an action.
She seems nervous... Either Could be a complete thought or they could be continuing the sentence.
She seems...nervous. Correct They were thinking of the verb.
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My mom is running alot... Incorrect It's a complete sentence. With a subject, and an action. Mom + running
My mom is running alot. Correct.
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2) It's not just the '...'s it's how you use them. Yes it's a fetus but this is impossible anyway. No 10 week old FETUS can learn ENGLISH. Much less make out words through 7 layers of skin and at least a gallon of blood and water. The '...'s are just THERE. They don't need to be and it makes it look slopy.
3) Also I have a problem with your SPELLING. In this group we're not TEXTING, or IMing. Were writing a story so that we can improve our writing skills. If people can't understand your story, it's not worth it. I've asked you several times, and you still haven't changed it. It's not that hard to type complete words. It makes you look very immature writing that way. Amature like, even. Like I said, we're not texting. Me, John, and Asami are very serious about writing.
4) It's also a matter of disrespect.
A) I know how 'dots' work. I was the one who explained it to you.
B) It's not your story. But it is my group. And you're not asking me. You're feeding words into my mouth.
C) If you were writing a report on viruses would you talk like this:
Da virus isn livin becos it doesn hav a metablim
No. I think not. But if you did and the teacher/who ever's in charge asked you to clean up a bit, would you? I think so. Please, I just want to help you. Grammar like that will not gain you any respect in this writing world. Plus I don't know what grade you're in but in Junior High when/if you take computers/writing- they're not going to like that.
So please, just try to fix grammar mistakes. Like your email.
It could've been
'Hi, this is Sagar. Regarding the topic 'The Twins Wins'; the dots are put there intentionally. Meaning; it's an incomplete thought were he/she is talking to himself/herself and others also. When someone faces a situation where he/her hasn't been in before, the person surely talks carefully thinking what to say. The dots, or periods suggest that he has paused his conversation for the moment and that he continued. If you want to give any suggestions just PM me, don't write in the discussion and disturb the story.
I would've taken you more seriously, because in your format it looks like you're texting and don't really care about the matter at hand.
Also regarding your PM:
It's not a suggestion it's a rule. Seriously, rules have to be enforced.
You can not tell me what to do. I was using brackets, and you were disturbing the story more than I was. Did you ever take to hand how people ad trouble reading that?
Thank you, but I do not give grammar lessons. If you have a problem with our rules, find another group. But I expect this is an all around rule: You won't be respected with texting language.
Very long.
message 7748:
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Iviana (The Sign Painter), The Goddess of indecisiveness
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ME!I got a cell phone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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