Help for SLIP

[adi]

OK. I know some of you read SLIP, my story on here. I'm completely stuck with this section. To be honest, I've done about 8 drafts on what's going to happen after the chapter from Emile's point of view, and none of them make sense, or sound right...

So, I need help.
1) What do you guys want to happen? (Maybe I can get a good idea of what to do next ^^; )
2) What do you do when you can't come up with anything in your writing?

[Brigid ✩]

kk. oh wow i really need to catch up on this story... SO MANY STORIES TO KEEP TRACK OF!! XD well, number one i can't answer. as for number two... well, i get writer's block a lot too. what i usually do is just sit alone in my room, close my eyes, and focus on thinking about the story. i usually know the general direction i want to go in, so i just think about how to create a 'bridge' from one major event to the next. i let myself try a few different paths in my mind before i decide how i want to continue... if that makes sense. :D

[Brigid ✩]

... or i write character inventories, and that helps me decide if i need some more character development scenes: like more thoughts/dialogues

[Morgan]

Hmmmm........ Actualy, I put it down and forget about it, or go to my brother who is a well of strange, weird, and evil plots and ideas. I'm not sure what I want to happen........ You could switch between her and Emile for a bit over the winter, and fianlly have him not be able to take it any more and come out and find her half-dead from the cold or something.......... Eventualy, it seems like the story with either build up to an ending where they keep on trying to destroy Uncle, or they get into the main workings of the goverment and actualy do.

[adi]

thanks guys :]

[Brigid ✩]

wow i actually have to go read it... since i haven't quite caught up yet. AAAH SO MUCH TO READ!!! XD

[Paige]

I love SLIP...hmmm.... maybe get into the whole brainwash idea? Like, not literally brainwash, more like; the government had messed with people's brains so that they were always obedient, but some people could overcome it, and they were forming a rebellion

idk.... sorry.

[T.O.L.I.]

hmmmmm

[Brigid ✩]

this topic is really old ...

[Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive.]

Yes, it is. :D

[T.O.L.I.]

yeesirey

[[deleted user]]

wow

[T.O.L.I.]

*D

[Alex]

Uh . . . its not old for me!

[T.O.L.I.]

well the first post was forever ago...

[Paige]

yeah

[T.O.L.I.]

mmmhhmmm

[adi]

well thanks anyway, haha.
ugh i think this story is cursed.
i keep running into problems on it.
first i ran out of ideas, and then when i got them back, the computer broke down. when i got the computer back, it suddenly doesn't have microsoft word so i can't open any of my documents.
haha.

[T.O.L.I.]

mmmmmmm......maybe it is cursed! O.o

[Brigid ✩]

haha i've had stories like that too. lol

[Paige]

I'm sorry!

[T.O.L.I.]

O.o

[adi]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...
New chapter

[Veronica, What the neck!?]

Well, it looks like you got things sorted out! Yay!

[adi]

yup!

[T.O.L.I.]

great...thats good

[adi]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...
Another chapter!

[Paige]

COOL! *goes to look*

[T.O.L.I.]

hehe!

[adi]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...
A new chapter! (sorry it's so short)

[Brigid ✩]

kewl! i <3 it! ^_^

[T.O.L.I.]

lol

[adi]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/9...
new new chapter :)

[Brigid ✩]

it's awesome! :)

[T.O.L.I.]

lol