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message 1: by adi (new)

adi (restartaugust) | 125 comments OK. I know some of you read SLIP, my story on here. I'm completely stuck with this section. To be honest, I've done about 8 drafts on what's going to happen after the chapter from Emile's point of view, and none of them make sense, or sound right...

So, I need help.
1) What do you guys want to happen? (Maybe I can get a good idea of what to do next ^^; )
2) What do you do when you can't come up with anything in your writing?


message 2: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
kk. oh wow i really need to catch up on this story... SO MANY STORIES TO KEEP TRACK OF!! XD well, number one i can't answer. as for number two... well, i get writer's block a lot too. what i usually do is just sit alone in my room, close my eyes, and focus on thinking about the story. i usually know the general direction i want to go in, so i just think about how to create a 'bridge' from one major event to the next. i let myself try a few different paths in my mind before i decide how i want to continue... if that makes sense. :D


message 3: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
... or i write character inventories, and that helps me decide if i need some more character development scenes: like more thoughts/dialogues


message 4: by Morgan (new)

Morgan (cheshire) | 181 comments Hmmmm........ Actualy, I put it down and forget about it, or go to my brother who is a well of strange, weird, and evil plots and ideas. I'm not sure what I want to happen........ You could switch between her and Emile for a bit over the winter, and fianlly have him not be able to take it any more and come out and find her half-dead from the cold or something.......... Eventualy, it seems like the story with either build up to an ending where they keep on trying to destroy Uncle, or they get into the main workings of the goverment and actualy do.


message 5: by adi (new)

adi (restartaugust) | 125 comments thanks guys :]


message 6: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
wow i actually have to go read it... since i haven't quite caught up yet. AAAH SO MUCH TO READ!!! XD


message 7: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller
I love SLIP...hmmm.... maybe get into the whole brainwash idea? Like, not literally brainwash, more like; the government had messed with people's brains so that they were always obedient, but some people could overcome it, and they were forming a rebellion

idk.... sorry.


message 8: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1770 comments hmmmmm


message 9: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
this topic is really old ...


message 10: by Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive. (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 2205 comments Mod
Yes, it is. :D


message 11: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1770 comments yeesirey


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

wow


message 13: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1770 comments *D


message 14: by Alex (new)

Alex Lindon | 28 comments Uh . . . its not old for me!


message 15: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1770 comments well the first post was forever ago...


message 16: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller yeah


message 17: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1770 comments mmmhhmmm


message 18: by adi (new)

adi (restartaugust) | 125 comments well thanks anyway, haha.
ugh i think this story is cursed.
i keep running into problems on it.
first i ran out of ideas, and then when i got them back, the computer broke down. when i got the computer back, it suddenly doesn't have microsoft word so i can't open any of my documents.
haha.


message 19: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1770 comments mmmmmmm......maybe it is cursed! O.o


message 20: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
haha i've had stories like that too. lol


message 21: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller I'm sorry!


message 22: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1770 comments O.o


message 24: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
Well, it looks like you got things sorted out! Yay!


message 25: by adi (new)

adi (restartaugust) | 125 comments yup!


message 26: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1770 comments great...thats good


message 28: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller COOL! *goes to look*


message 29: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1770 comments hehe!


message 30: by adi (new)

adi (restartaugust) | 125 comments http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...
A new chapter! (sorry it's so short)


message 31: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
kewl! i <3 it! ^_^


message 32: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1770 comments lol


message 34: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
it's awesome! :)


message 35: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1770 comments lol


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