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Jun 19, 2008 07:00AM
Kendel walks the halls of her new school, she feels pretty good until these girls wearing designer heels and tiny skirts show up. Kendel would never have clothes like that, it's not her fault that she gets the hand-me-downs from her older sister
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"i'm liz! and this is Emilia" th blonde girl said. she flicked her hair back making it shimmer. A blonde boy walked past and gazed at liz. Kendel looked at him, amazed.
the girl with black curly hair, emilia, said, "now GET OUT ofour locker terriotory!" Kendel hurridly went to the other side of the hall
'oooh! i'm kendel! well im kinda new..." kendel replied.
"oh, they're just super popular and most boys like them, i don't! oh, and i made up a nick ame for them, just call them the pretties," Jake said, "don't listen to them, they HATE new kids"
Kendal doodled and daydreamed through most of her classes. class itself was boring. but the drama at school was more fun to watch. Kendel walked into the cafeteria and saw Liz Benton with her gang, Emilia Karsh, Ashley Step, Gwen gillwood, Lauren Oaks, and Andrea Red.
"why don't you come and sit with us!" Andrea asked. She was the only nice girl in the popular group. Liz cackled, "you want that freak to sit with us?"
then cheryl corder came over to see what was going on, she was Jake's twin sister, and she was nice.
"whats all the drama?" Cheryl asked Kendel.
"why don't you come and sit with us!" Andrea asked. She was the only nice girl in the popular group. Liz cackled, "you want that freak to sit with us?"
then cheryl corder came over to see what was going on, she was Jake's twin sister, and she was nice.
"whats all the drama?" Cheryl asked Kendel.
Kendel felt like she wasn't worth their time. "Yes, I do!" Andrea stated.
"she's cool!" Andrea admitted
"cool?!?!?!" liz spat she was in hystaria
"cool?!?!?!" liz spat she was in hystaria
"Oh come on Liz!! you don't even know her!" Andrea argued. Kendel felt like she was just a big problem now.
Andrea plucked one of Kendels doodle's out of her binder.
"look at this!" Andrea stated. Kendel seriously liked 2 draw anime and make fun of evil teachers. Liz was laughing so hard at the drawing of the evil math teacher that she could hardly breathe, "now that is funny"
"look at this!" Andrea stated. Kendel seriously liked 2 draw anime and make fun of evil teachers. Liz was laughing so hard at the drawing of the evil math teacher that she could hardly breathe, "now that is funny"
Kendel felt a bit of hope flicker in her. "really?" she asked.
"ya! i hate mr. Misha too! and i hate math!" liz confessed, "doesn't everybody?"
"what did you just say?" Mr. Misha yelled. he was on lunch duty. Kendel crumpled up the paper quickly. Mr. Misha was really evil and would give out detention in a snap.
((hello????))
"what did you just say?" Mr. Misha yelled. he was on lunch duty. Kendel crumpled up the paper quickly. Mr. Misha was really evil and would give out detention in a snap.
((hello????))
Mr. Misha was a fairly large and fat man with only so much hair. He walked over to the girls table
"now what are you girls talking about?" he asked angirly.
"nothing Mr. Misha!" Andrea said sweetly. Mr. Misha looked at the girls suspiciously, seeing them all wearing innocent smiles.
"And about the test on monday.." Liz said sweetly, "how long is it going to be?"
"only 5 pages!" Mrs. Misha answered. Once he was gone kendal moaned:
"not another test!"
"i guess you put a lot of though into that drawing..." Cheryl sighed. the girls watched Mr. Misha waddle to a table of cute boys, wondering to talk about..
"only 5 pages!" Mrs. Misha answered. Once he was gone kendal moaned:
"not another test!"
"i guess you put a lot of though into that drawing..." Cheryl sighed. the girls watched Mr. Misha waddle to a table of cute boys, wondering to talk about..
"So, Kendel! Where did you come from?" Andrea asked.
"i came from pensecola florida, it was fun down there, more fun than i think of Atlanta!" kendel confessed (atlanta Georgia.. A town!)
"well welcome to A town Cheryl laughed., "luckily we're in the good parts and not in the hood, you know, colledge park"
"well i live real close to here" kendel said
((bye))
"well welcome to A town Cheryl laughed., "luckily we're in the good parts and not in the hood, you know, colledge park"
"well i live real close to here" kendel said
((bye))
"nothing much..." Kendel replied, "want to sit with us?"
"no..." said Jake softly, "we sit with the wranglers, not the popukars.."
Kendel decided to sit with the wranglers because Liz gave Kendel a mean look.
"tell us more about where you live, what neighborhood?" Jake said. Kendel started to think. She didn't live hwere liz and Emilia lived, the 'mansion park' kendel called it. Kendel lived in a small house on the backroads.
"no..." said Jake softly, "we sit with the wranglers, not the popukars.."
Kendel decided to sit with the wranglers because Liz gave Kendel a mean look.
"tell us more about where you live, what neighborhood?" Jake said. Kendel started to think. She didn't live hwere liz and Emilia lived, the 'mansion park' kendel called it. Kendel lived in a small house on the backroads.
Kendel sighed. "Well, I live, well, yeah." She didn't like talking about her family a lot. Her mom and dad were divorced, and her mom never talked to them."It's alright." Jake said. I didn't mean to make you uncomfortable or anything."
"That's okay." Kendel said.
"ya... its kinda a mess, right after moving in. you know, boxes everywhere!" kendal improvised. also her sister was always annoying her and her mom was always angry. the only talking was a fight
"I wouldn't know," Jake said. "I've never moved."
"whats it like?" cheryl asked.
"stressfull" kendel said. she thought of her old house and when her parents will still together.
"stressfull" kendel said. she thought of her old house and when her parents will still together.
Jake gave Kendel a funny look, like he knew she wasn't telling them something.
"so are we friends?" Jake and cheryl asked, "we have to get you to know the group"
"how about you? ooops! Cheryl is your sister!" (*u* kendel is sooo me...)"well who else is there in this group?"
"theres Devon..." Jake said pointing to a girl with eyeliner"
"theres Devon..." Jake said pointing to a girl with eyeliner"
Devon smiled and waved to Kendel. She shyly waved back.
Devon then started to talk to another boy named will. Devon kinda looked like the leader of the group.
((GOTTA GO.... SRY BYE!))
((GOTTA GO.... SRY BYE!))
"There's Cecily," Cheryl added, motioning to a somewhat plain girl with brown hair and brown eyes. "She's on the track team. She's really fast."
"Um..." Kendel remarked uncertainly, "will I be expected to remember all these people and names?"(How old are they?)
(i don't know... this could be middle school, if it is then i'd want it to be seventh grade!)
"and does your clique have a name?" Kendal asked.
"yes," said Cheryl, "some people call us the wranglers because of Devon Angler.. she had this war against the populars in 6th grade and they started to call us and her teh wranglers... and its not a bad name!"
((we have to make kendel a little more stupid, kinda like me stupid... not like academicly stupid....*u*))
"and does your clique have a name?" Kendal asked.
"yes," said Cheryl, "some people call us the wranglers because of Devon Angler.. she had this war against the populars in 6th grade and they started to call us and her teh wranglers... and its not a bad name!"
((we have to make kendel a little more stupid, kinda like me stupid... not like academicly stupid....*u*))
(alrighty)"A war?" Kendel questioned.
"yes..." chryl sighed, "Devon stole Ashley Stepp's boyfriend, Bredan and they had a war after that"
" a voilent war?" kendel asked
" a voilent war?" kendel asked
"so thats where the wranglers came from!" kendel acknoledged, "at my old skool, if anyone had a war.. it would be a huge fight at the beach... it would be one of those swordfights to death in teh movies... but people would just get hurt... no death.. pesecola wasn't that bad of a town.." *u*
((i image kendel as kinda tall with dirty blonde long hair... straight but wavy at the bottom hair...))
((i image kendel as kinda tall with dirty blonde long hair... straight but wavy at the bottom hair...))
(same here)Devon walked over and sat down by Kendel. "Where's Pensecola?"
"on the pan handle of florida," she said finding it hard to ignore Devon's southern accent and the heavy eyeliner stare (i imagine Devon with short and sharp dark brown hair.. kinda what i look like...)
((have we decided on teh age???? or does is need to be older/younger...))
((and by the way... its pensecola like cola.. with an N... its very important 2 spell it right cuz otherwise... well u know.. it lookes weird! REMEMBER TEH N!!!!))
((have we decided on teh age???? or does is need to be older/younger...))
((and by the way... its pensecola like cola.. with an N... its very important 2 spell it right cuz otherwise... well u know.. it lookes weird! REMEMBER TEH N!!!!))
(i did =D actually, i just edited it, but i'll remember!)
(its OK i am the worst speller ever. i was just worried that in the end that name would turn into an innapropriet word... sighs) Devon nodded and said, "stay away from Liz!' then Devon sat back down at her seat and startedd to talk to Seth.
"Hi new girl..." Liz said making her way over to the wrangglers' table, "i think we need to go on a shopping trip! how about today!"
"sure... why not? i just need to call my mom!" kendal agreed ot was one more step to being popular
"Hi new girl..." Liz said making her way over to the wrangglers' table, "i think we need to go on a shopping trip! how about today!"
"sure... why not? i just need to call my mom!" kendal agreed ot was one more step to being popular
((isn't this supposed to go in the write as you go along catagory ur somthing like that?))
(idk... when i created teh page it just automaticly went here!)
"Sure.. can i borrow your phone?" Kendel asked Liz.
"why don't you have a phone?" liz asked
"Sure.. can i borrow your phone?" Kendel asked Liz.
"why don't you have a phone?" liz asked
"My mom said she get me one for my birthday this year." Kendel said.
"OMG!" i can't believe u don't have a phone!" Liz gasspes, "youe seriously are a deprived child!!!!" liz pilled her i phone out of her purse
"Thanks," Kendel said."She doesn't seem spoiled," Andrea pointed out. "I can't say that much about the rest of us."
Kendel flushed in embarassment.
liz gave Andrea a mean look. the bell rang and now it was time for 6th period... joy...
(ha ha!! The world of middle school!)
