Let's All Write STORIES!!! discussion

57 views
Realistic Fiction > Help! i totally need somebody!

Comments Showing 51-91 of 91 (91 new)    post a comment »
« previous 1 2 next »
dateUp arrow    newest »

message 52: by [deleted user] (new)

(oh teh noes... those awful years...) but Kendal hurried up the stairs. She got to her english class and then she saw the boy with blonde hair. (she secretly likes him!)
"hi im Brendan!" he said, "welcome to sighs 6th period..."


message 53: by [deleted user] (new)

(wow, she got popular and knows practically everybody on her first day!!)


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» "Um... I'm Kendel," she replied.


message 55: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 20, 2008 12:32PM) (new)

(no there are more problems later with the popular peeps... Liz and emilia are already planning her downfall)


message 57: by [deleted user] (new)

(huh? Kay, I think I missed a bunch!)


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» ((yah, you kinda did))


message 59: by [deleted user] (new)

(what happened?)


message 61: by [deleted user] (new)

((well thats middle skool....))
Kendel sat down in her seat when the late bell rang. The teacher droned on and on about correct spelling... Kendel hated it!!!!!! she was looking forward for the shopping trip that afternoon. finally the dissmissal bell rang. Kendel was trying to find Liz when Jake, Cheryl, and Devon stopped her...


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» "Why are you going with them?" Cheryl asked.


message 63: by [deleted user] (new)

(how does she know she's going?)


message 64: by [deleted user] (last edited Jun 20, 2008 01:14PM) (new)

(cuz they were at lunch too...))
"because they're being nice to me!" Kendel replied anxious to find liz
"Well its going to cause your ddownfall!" devon warned.
Kendel didn't pay attention to teh warning. she went over to Liz. Liz was laughing
"did you really think we were going to go shopping with you farm girl?" Liz taunted.
"ya go back to your shack on your farm!" emilia laughed.
"teh heh!!!!" Ashley stepps teased


message 65: by [deleted user] (new)

(oh.)


message 66: by [deleted user] (new)

(ya....)


message 67: by [deleted user] (new)

(ouch! jerks!)


message 68: by [deleted user] (new)

(oh teh noes.... now lets get back 2 teh story... u start...)


s•u•n•s•h•i•n•e «§KENZ§» Andrea scowled at Liz and Ashley, gave Kendel a sad smile, and walked away.
Liz ran after Andrea. "Hey wait, where you going?"


message 70: by [deleted user] (new)

(hm...:_
Kendel looked shocked. "I thought you guys..." She trailed off.


message 71: by [deleted user] (new)

"we had some blackmailing 2 do!!!! against Gordon sptiz!!!!" liz yelled.
"what?" gordon asked. looking up from his AP calculus (IN MIDDLE SKOOL cuz hes a nerd..). Liz laughed at hime and stole his glasses.
"hey!" he yelled stumbling of the bench and onto the grass outside the school.
meanwhikle, kendel wa s in tears


message 72: by [deleted user] (new)

She felt her sadness fade to be replaced by anger.


message 73: by [deleted user] (new)

Kendel would plan a war with all the wranglers against liz and her gang... this would be a REAL war


message 74: by [deleted user] (new)

(yeah! I'd like to know that too!)


message 75: by [deleted user] (new)

(i dunno... :|)


message 77: by [deleted user] (new)

(huh?)


message 78: by [deleted user] (new)

((its kinda like an inside joke but ill tell u... teh is like the and noes is Knows... and my friend and i made up this song where we sang oh teh noes!!!!!!!!! it was sooooo funny and we annoyed everyone during P.E... and meh means me))
"ya...." Kendel looked away... she wasn't going to be embarrassed...


message 79: by [deleted user] (new)

"oh.. i live up in the northpart of town,i have to take the bus..." Brendan said.


message 80: by [deleted user] (new)

"Oh, i'm sorry."


message 81: by [deleted user] (new)

"Nah, it's okay. I enjoy the ride. Do you want me to walk you home?" Brendan asked.


message 82: by [deleted user] (new)

"sure..." kendel said. she started to walk down the stairs. Just then kendel lost her footing and fell... papers went flying everywhere!


message 83: by [deleted user] (new)

((PLEASE don't go 2 far in the story while im at camp!!!)) thnx!!!))


message 84: by [deleted user] (new)

(okay! People!! No writing until Brianna gets back!! :D


message 86: by [deleted user] (new)

((well i'm back so we can write!!!!!! lets get on with it!!!))


message 87: by [deleted user] (new)

(Ok! where were we?)


message 88: by [deleted user] (new)

(?)


message 89: by [deleted user] (new)

(on this story thing!)


message 90: by [deleted user] (new)

(we were where kendel fell down the steps i think!!!!....!!!!... meh is bored...)


message 91: by Kendall Anne (new)

Kendall Anne (dance4life) (Lol my name in real life is Kendall! Cool!)


« previous 1 2 next »
back to top