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message 1: by Andrew (new)

Andrew Waite (zaronas) i thought of this while reading the posts if you've read the character game and the lets write a book as a group
i think the book can be as silly as you want or as serious and real as you want it can drift from fiction to non-fiction from fan-fic to harry potter from a scientist to a knight of king Arthur's court.
i think you get the idea so ill start, but only write one paragraph unless its a dialogue (paragraph 5-8 sentences.)

it was the middle of the knight when i got to the gate the guards werealmost all gone.


message 2: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
And I say "almost" for a reason. I say "almost" because there were still two guards left, blocking me from my only escape. And they happened to be the biggest, scariest-looking guys I had ever seen in my entire life.


message 3: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (last edited Apr 24, 2008 01:41PM) (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
But that's not all. The last thing is that they were staring straight at me.

I gulped nervously and put my hand to the small dagger at my side. But it was too late. The guards had seen me do so, and their swords were already drawn. Pointed straight at me. I froze. I am doomed.


Xerxes Break(Vivian Ephona) (ephona) My legs just had a mind of their own as they ran forward. I heard the guards yelling out to me but as much as I just wanted to stop there on the ground in fear my legs weren't in the mood.


message 5: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
The slash of a sword danced around my ears, and I braced myself for the pain. Instead, my body seemed to have a mind of it's own as it dodged the sword experientially and ran away from the guards. The guards were not the only ones who stared after me in disbelieving shock; I wore their same expression.


♥([Melody])♥ Killer-Queen (madmonkeyink) | 7 comments What had just happened? It was as though some other force had just got ahold of my body.
I tumbled into a grassy area and stood still catching my breath.


message 7: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
I pricked my ears for any sounds of approaching guards, but all was silent. That's weird, I thought. Why aren't they pursuing me?


♥([Melody])♥ Killer-Queen (madmonkeyink) | 7 comments The clearing was silent.I walked through the forest searching for what i was set out to do. Nothing could stop me now.


message 9: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
I padded through the forest and found what I was looking for. A small cottage stood out in the side of the woods, looking small and innocent. I opened the window and snuck through, my heart pounding with the heat of my mission.


message 10: by ♥([Melody])♥ (new)

♥([Melody])♥ Killer-Queen (madmonkeyink) | 7 comments A fire was burning lighting the cottage. It looke very well live in.
"Jane?! Jane?! Are you in here?",i cried desperatley.



message 11: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
Silence.

I wondered if I was in the wrong cottage. It seemed right, didn't it? I checked the number. 3342 What number did Jane live in? I sifted through my papers. 3343.

Whoops, I thought with a thrill of fear. Wrong house.

Before I could get out, though, there came a scream, and someone threw something at me. It was too late. I had been spotted.

"You're coming with me to the police right now!" The woman shrieked, dragging me out by the ear. I had to choice but to follow.


message 12: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments I grabbed the womans hand. "Look," I said. "I'll go with you, but don't touch my ear."

The woman looked at me, shocked. She dropped her hand and ran away.

That was weird. Am I that scary? I didn't realize I had changed so much.


message 13: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
I didn't have much time to dwell on it, though. Before the woman could get reinforcements, I ran until her house was out of sight, then I searched for the correct number.


message 14: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments 3339, 3340, 3341, 3342, 3343! I ran up to the house and knocked on the door. This time I should be careful. Don't want to end up with the police.


message 15: by ♥([Melody])♥ (new)

♥([Melody])♥ Killer-Queen (madmonkeyink) | 7 comments I let myself in and called again.


message 16: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments Silence.

Was she not home? (hey, is the main character a guy, or a girl?)


message 17: by ♥([Melody])♥ (new)

♥([Melody])♥ Killer-Queen (madmonkeyink) | 7 comments character is a guy for all i know


message 18: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
Then I heard her voice.

"Who is it?"

I took a deep breath. It was time.


message 19: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
"It's me," I called, my voice slightly hoarse. There was nothing more that I needed to say. She would know who it was.

There was silence for a few seconds. Then I began to hear the sound of her footsteps on the floor above me. I heard a door open somewhere upstairs. A few seconds later, she appeared at the top of the staircase.

It had been a whole year since I had seen Jane. It seemed like even more time than that had gone by. Up until this moment, I had been worrying that she would change. But as soon as I saw her, I knew that she had not changed at all--at least, not on the outside. She was still tall, slender, dressed plainly. Her long dark hair hung in two braids on either side of her face. Her dark eyes looked right at me, filled with an unreadable expression. She gasped.

"Oh my God. What's happened to you?"






message 20: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
(srry...that was more than a paragraph)


message 21: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments What's happened to me? I thought. I don't know.

I made use of my voice, "I don't know what you mean?"

She stared back at me as it confused.


message 22: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
I only stood there, staring at her in bewilderment. A realization suddenly struck me: she didn't just looked confused. She looked frightened. Frightened of me.

"What's wrong?" I asked her, as anxiety crawled up my spine.

Jane paused, hesitating. "I think you should look in the mirror," she finally said, quietly.


message 23: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (last edited Apr 25, 2008 10:27AM) (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
Suddenly nervous, I walked up to the gold-trimmed glass mirror she had up on the wall. I squeezed my eyes shut, opened them...and gasped in shock.

"Do you see?" Jane whispered.

I nodded. "But I'm still the same old George!" I protested. "You don't need to be afraid of me!"


message 24: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments She flinched away.

"Honestly, I haven't changed!"

Still she continued to leave.

"I don't...I don't know if...," she began.


message 25: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
"You don't know if it's me?" I hissed angrily. "How can you not?"


message 26: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments "I'm here, right in front of you!" I said, voice raising. "Why is it so hard for you to believe it's me?"

She held up a photograph. "Because that's the George I know." She pointed to me.

I took the photo from her.


message 27: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
After studying it, I shook my head. "That's me! This is me! Why can't you understand that, Jane?"


message 28: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments "You aren't the same!" She cried. She turned and started pacing back and forth. "I don't know you anymore! You've been trapped in that place for ten years! How do I know who you've become?"


message 29: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
My mouth dropped open. Was this really Jane? "You've changed on the inside, it seems," I said softly. "The real Jane wouldn't question me like this."


message 30: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments Jane looked down in embarassment. "I don't want to...I don't think I can...I don't know if..."

I stared at her. "I'll leave."

I turned to go. I was half-expecting her to try to stop me, to tell me she would adjust, to let me stay. But that didn't happen. She let me go.


message 31: by Andrew (new)

Andrew Waite (zaronas) one main charectors a boy
two whts the time era i got lost


message 32: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
(Yeah, the main character's a boy. And I'm not exactly sure what time period...)

I reached the door and hesitated one last time, waiting to see if Jane would call me back, apologize, say what a fool she'd been, that of course I could stay home. But she didn't say anything. I looked back, and she was turned away from me, silent. With a pained sigh, I opened the door and stepped out of what had once been my house.


message 33: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments My own sister! Sending me out! I can't believe it! Family is family, right? Wrong! Not with my sister. I'm an outsider now. Being locked up for ten years did nothing for me.


message 34: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
As the door closed behind me, I strained to hear her footsteps coming and welcoming me back, but she did not. Salty tears streamed down my face as I slowly walked away, stinging my cheeks.


message 35: by Andrew (new)

Andrew Waite (zaronas) Then and there i felt the hatred and the sadness swell up all at once,it was time to release my full fury. It all had happened at once the planes started flying around and the soldiers shooting, now was the time. i took the opurtunity and lashed out at the army then came the planes with there annoying bullets.


message 36: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
(Wait what? Now I'm confused. Where did the planes and soldiers come from?))


message 37: by Andrew (new)

Andrew Waite (zaronas) (the soldiers and planes came from the army)


message 38: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments (Army?)


message 39: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
(What army??? omg i am so confused. what the heck is going on in this story? it made sense until the army came in...)


message 40: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
(Yeah..now it's confusing.)


message 41: by Andrew (last edited Apr 29, 2008 03:48PM) (new)

Andrew Waite (zaronas) (well one seck ill make evrything right with a few paragraphs)

well for some strange reason all the planes ran out of gas and landed on all the army destroying them all then i horible earth quake happened and i fell into a giant abbys.
it was at least an hour before i woke up apperently in the other side if the earth in some labortory then i saw this wierd door like structure with swirling colors in it i was so dazed that i stumbled threw and i was spinning for an hour at minumum. when i stumbled out i only remebered one thing it was 1554. ( at the moment


message 42: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
(uh... srry, but i think that's even MORE confusing)


message 43: by Andrew (new)

Andrew Waite (zaronas) it was a time machine


message 44: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
I still don't get it.


message 45: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments Me either.


message 46: by Andrew (new)

Andrew Waite (zaronas) The End!!


message 47: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
okay...


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