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message 1: by Tiny, Currently revamping (last edited Dec 31, 2009 08:38PM) (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
Okay so this is just for fun! Just somewhere to unleash your creativity...and because I'm in a poetry mood and want to read what you have for us lol

Show us your hidden talents and make up a poem! it can be short/long/rhyme or not, just as long as it has something to do with VAMPIRES!....

Rules you HAVE to mention VAMPIRE LOVERS at least once yeah? I'll give one to start one off but EVERYONE IS WELCOME TO JOIN/POST...


message 2: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
okay from the top of my head lol....ummmm...ahhh...

A Masquerade of pearly white
He stalks his prey at the peak of midnight
Luring his victims toward its favorite spot
She lets him because he's oh so hot!
Minutes tick by and seconds near end
His fangs pierce right through to her skin
A lover by day, a monster by night
But all it takes is just one bite
Open minded or skeptical?
Don't put it past you, you might be fooled
A family or friend, or a vampire lover
Just might be a vampire undercover

see easy as 123 lmao now you try!!!




message 3: by Werewolf☆Vi☆Iran♥ (last edited Dec 31, 2009 10:28PM) (new)

Werewolf☆Vi☆Iran♥ | 6670 comments i am 19 and my family friend is 20
even though we know each other for a long time
the distance between us now is plenty


LMAO SORRY I JUST WANTED TO GET THAT OUT OF MY SYSTEM ummmm ok now for a vampire one

long fang
white skin
sweet scent
many legends
and yet
no one really suspect that they are amongst us
hey, there's a hot one on this bus!!!

LMAO so was that ok?


message 4: by Tiny, Currently revamping (last edited Jan 01, 2010 03:10PM) (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
yuss! someone gave me a poem lmao...I might send an email out to everyone to participate...I love to hear what other people have to say!! lmao but you forgot to put vampire lover in it lol


Werewolf☆Vi☆Iran♥ | 6670 comments yea do that! i want to see what people comes up with too


message 6: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
oh sheesh would be nice if I knew how to do it lmao...


message 7: by Esther (new)

Esther (essie7198) uhhhhhh... i hate poetry... ;P uhhhhhh.... does it have to always ryme???

teeth white as moon
lips as red as blood
he haunts the night and my dreams
not as mortal as he seems
by day they see him as beautiful
by night they see him as horrible
but i see him as misunderstood
because i am the vampire lover

yea i know it sucks!! i just felt like doing one ;P


Werewolf☆Vi☆Iran♥ | 6670 comments THATS COOL


message 9: by Esther (new)

Esther (essie7198) thanks!! yours too!!


Werewolf☆Vi☆Iran♥ | 6670 comments lmao ur kidding right? i was being a goof, i'm not good with peoms


message 11: by Thomas (last edited Jan 01, 2010 08:52PM) (new)

Thomas (artangel) | 1062 comments Love is Vain?

There was once a man,
Who loved another,
Much from vain,
Rather than for the other.

Was he not a fool,
Some used to say.
To not love someone so beautiful,
As beautiful in heart none could betray.
Still life went on,
And the man never loved,
Although, but in vain.

And one fine day,
There lay the beauty,
Frozen in time.
Forever and never,
To wake from a slumber,
So weak and so strong,
Yet calm and lifelessly wrong.

He knew not,
For the life there was not,
The sight opened his eyes,
So late, yet so strong,
A love so vain
Was the cause for his pain

The pain took over
What was vain,
Vanished.
Replaced by a feeling so not felt
Until it fell on him
That a love lost can never be regained.

Love is like the eye,
Never of much use than to see you and I
Until it’s lost,
Will you see what the cost,
Of a loss that is immortal until the day you die.




For more of my poems, Go here: http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...
And please do comments. It helps me a lot more than you can think.


Werewolf☆Vi☆Iran♥ | 6670 comments ummmm this is about VAMPIRES lol


Werewolf☆Vi☆Iran♥ | 6670 comments but thats a cool poem LONG one at that too lol


message 14: by Thomas (new)

Thomas (artangel) | 1062 comments Its actually about a Vampire that loved a human. Just a different take on Edward and Bella.


message 15: by Thomas (last edited Jan 01, 2010 09:19PM) (new)

Thomas (artangel) | 1062 comments read the last line!! though Vampires don't die!! they can be killed.


Werewolf☆Vi☆Iran♥ | 6670 comments oooooo lol i was in a rush...ok ill read it properly


Werewolf☆Vi☆Iran♥ | 6670 comments i like it!


message 18: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
YAY!!! thanks Tom and Ester!!! Love your Poems and yes yours too Vi!!....keep em coming I love reading people's talents!


message 19: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
ok, I'm gonna write one from my head, I'm bored.


message 20: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
Victim of the Night

Run!
NOW!
He'll get you.
He always does.
Trap you
torture, it's a game
rape you
fun for him
steal you
but not quite
bind you
eternally his
rip you
never to heal
heal you?
never
you are a toy
his plaything
you are entertainment
the quick, fleeting dust mite
you are a meal
sucked down too quickly
RUN!
NOW!
do not suffer what I have.



message 21: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
sooo...any good?(espically for litterally poping out of my head, :P)


message 22: by Esther (new)

Esther (essie7198) Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ...Vi...Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ wrote: "lmao ur kidding right? i was being a goof, i'm not good with peoms"

neither am i!!!


message 23: by Esther (new)

Esther (essie7198) Mari は 狼 です。 wrote: "sooo...any good?(espically for litterally poping out of my head, :P)"

pretty good!!


message 24: by Esther (new)

Esther (essie7198) Tom wrote: "Love is Vain?

There was once a man,
Who loved another,
Much from vain,
Rather than for the other.

Was he not a fool,
Some used to say.
To not love someone so beautiful,
As beautiful in heart none..."


i really like that one!! wait can it be sorta poetry but not an oficial kind??


message 25: by Tiffany (new)

Tiffany (vampoholic) | 1279 comments My Immortal

Just look into my eyes
Though that's not what some would advise
I can want and feel things
Beyond your wildest dreams

I'll make u scream and beg
Just to get a glimpse at what's between my legs
But before u come to my bed
Rest assured u will have bled

Oh yes, ur blood is as exquisite as the finest wine
Um, before we lay I will indeed dine
Oh don't worry I won't drain it all
But I will make sure u only come to my call


message 26: by Tiffany (new)

Tiffany (vampoholic) | 1279 comments sorry that's all i could think with the kids buggin me. lmao


message 27: by Lena (new)

Lena (lenaxd) | 297 comments V-isious
A-lways living
M-arble
P-ulls with teeth
I-mmortal
R-unning fast
E-ternal love

all i could think of
lol


message 28: by Lena (new)

Lena (lenaxd) | 297 comments his skin sparkles and shines
it is so cold on mine
his lips are an amazing shade of red
hes so quiet i want to know what he said
he runs so fast im probably not supposed to see
i ask myself 'what is he?'


message 29: by Lena (new)

Lena (lenaxd) | 297 comments lol
sorry that wasnt really about love


message 30: by Tiffany (new)

Tiffany (vampoholic) | 1279 comments u would write about twilight wouldn't u lol ;)


message 31: by Tiffany (new)

Tiffany (vampoholic) | 1279 comments I used to think that love could last
But that 1,000 years in my past

Even thought there such a thing as trust
Until he tried to take my heart and turn it to dust

I learned the true meaning of the word betrail
So did he, when i bathed myself iin his entrails

They say revenge is a dish best served cold
I don't what they've been told

See I warmed his blood to a nice simmering boil
And grilled his insides over some flaming charcoal



message 32: by Lena (new)

Lena (lenaxd) | 297 comments well so far thats the only vamp book iv read
and my mom wants me to read these books she got me before anything else so im speed reading those

lol

o and thats good


message 33: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
WOOHHOO!! LOve the freaking awesome poems guys lol thankx Tiff, Lena and Mari too for participating! OoH you make me want to make another one lmao...wait until you guys get a hang of it...but I seriously love them all!!!



message 34: by Lena (new)

Lena (lenaxd) | 297 comments yay


message 35: by Thomas (last edited Jan 02, 2010 07:56PM) (new)

Thomas (artangel) | 1062 comments There is a deep secret... that you can't become a Vamypre unless you choose to be one. But the choice has to come from your deepest... darkest part of the heart. A Choice that fills your eyes with the feral light of a blood-thirsty might and a power so old that it has chosen evil as its base instinct. So here it is, a poem about the one thing that a mortal loses in exchange for immortality...


Eternity

Eternity is but a faint mirage,
Seen by eyes no man can charade
Set aside only for the man of courage
Who embrace the world with a choice none ever made.

But is it not true,
that none has any clue.
As to what the eye nor ear,
has never cared to hear
A cry of a lifetime,
arising from a heart made of stone.

For who can foresee what the One has thought,
Hereafter eons to come as of yet.
For in His eyes lie the depths of heavens,
Of hells and the end of days.


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((hope everyone likes this one as well as my old one. and this one has a dark and light theme at the same time. A Yin & Yang sort of thing.))


message 36: by Tiny, Currently revamping (last edited Jan 02, 2010 08:00PM) (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
awesome!! Love it Tom! And I was just going to say that it has a dark feeling to it, my voice in my head turned dark as soon as I read the first line lmao


message 37: by Thomas (new)

Thomas (artangel) | 1062 comments Thanks Tiny... i value your views above all else. Thanks.


message 38: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
No probbs! And I give you permission to go Poem crazy on me lol I LOVE it!...goes to the rest of you too lmao


message 39: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
..I'm thinking of posting another poem I've written recently, it's not about vamps, but is that ok?


message 40: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
no yeah thats fine Mari! post away!


message 41: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
yayz!!! (let me go copy/paste it)


message 42: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
'Cuz You're Not Here

I listen to our song
but it feels so wrong
'cuz you're not here.
I try to sing along
but it still feels wrong
'cuz you're not here.
I go to the game
but it's not the same
'cuz you're not here.
It all feels so lame
because it's still not the same
'cuz you're not here.
They talk about you
but there's nothing I can do
'cuz you're not here.
They say there's no clue
but there's still nothing I can do
'cuz you're not here.
I go to our place
It feels like a waste
'cuz you're not here.
There's no more space
it's only a waste
'cuz you're not here.
I go to the yard
this is so hard
'cuz you're not here.
I glance at the gaurd
it's still so hard
'cuz you're not here.
I finally get to it
I slowly sit
'cuz now you're here.
I watch the candle lit
and still I sit
'cuz now you're here.
You are in the air
way up there
'cuz you're not here.
But also in the ground
so deeply wound
'cuz now you're here.
You are there
I am here
I leave the graveyard
it's not so hard
now.


message 43: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
awww thats beautiful Mari...describes a girl or guy that lost their lover...and finally works up the courage to move on! very good!!!


message 44: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
Thank you!(bowing)


message 45: by Tiffany (new)

Tiffany (vampoholic) | 1279 comments AWWWWWW...crying again


message 46: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
lmao, do I always make people cry?


Werewolf☆Vi☆Iran♥ | 6670 comments wow tiny this have really BLOOMED lol


message 48: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
it has right? Man I love it when people write poetry, it gives me a break from the normal reads and I feel this gives you an insight to peoples hidden talents from expressing poetry more than just their talent of creative writing lol love it lmao


Werewolf☆Vi☆Iran♥ | 6670 comments lol totally! i like poems about legends lets see if i can find some good a?


message 50: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
oh! The Highway Man by Alfrad Knole!!(I probably spelled his name wrong)


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