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message 51: by Esther (new)

Esther (essie7198) does it still have to vampire related?


message 52: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
I don' think so. My second one isn't.


message 53: by Esther (new)

Esther (essie7198) ok...


message 54: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
nah just post any lmao...although if you do have a vampire one it still welcome


message 55: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
This is not a poem by me but I like it so I'll share it with you lol its a vampire one...

The Giaour (1813)

But first, on earth as vampire sent,
Thy corse shall from its tomb be rent
Then ghastly haunt thy native place
And suck the blood of all thy race;
There from thy daughter, sister, wife,
At midnight drain the stream of life
Yet loather the banquet which perforce
Must feed thy livid living corse;
Thy victims ere they yet expire
Shall know the demon for their sire,
As cursing thee, thou cursing them,
Thy flowers are withered on the stem.
- by Lord Byron -


message 56: by Lena (new)

Lena (lenaxd) | 297 comments i like that one! :)


message 57: by Lena (new)

Lena (lenaxd) | 297 comments i cant think of anything...
lol im not good at this kinda stuff


message 58: by Lena (new)

Lena (lenaxd) | 297 comments you went on a walk & you never came home,
when i fall asleep i feel so alone,
i think youll be there when i walk throuh the door,
so many weeks pass but im still very scared,
one day i awake, ur at my side.
ur eyes hav changed from brown to deep black,
you look like you might just atack.
the next thing i know, im standing with him
my eyes like his, my lips so red


message 59: by Lena (last edited Jan 03, 2010 08:42PM) (new)

Lena (lenaxd) | 297 comments any good?

sorry it doesnt rhyme


message 60: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
yeah see thats awesome! Great way to write a girl getting changed into a vampire by her lover ;) very good!!


message 61: by Lena (new)

Lena (lenaxd) | 297 comments yay thanks!!


Werewolf☆Vi☆Iran♥ | 6670 comments Lena wrote: "you went on a walk & you never came home,
when i fall asleep i feel so alone,
i think youll be there when i walk throuh the door,
so many weeks pass but im still very scared,
one day i awake, u..."


i like it! lol not all should rhym u know!


message 63: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
tru. most of mine usually don't, I was just being...a waste of brain earlier.


message 64: by Esther (new)

Esther (essie7198) ahahaha...


message 65: by Lena (new)

Lena (lenaxd) | 297 comments LOL


message 66: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
Rembering

We saw each other today
we knew that it would happen someday.
it was a shock to,
see you.
seeming so changed
all rearanged.
some words were spoken
to be kept as a token.
"Hello to you."
"And to you."
"Have you been well?"
"Quite swell."
"Oh, good"
"Yes, good."
Then there was silenc
right there inbetween us.
The words that were next speck,
I will never forget.
"I miss you
I do.
Will you come back?
it's you I lack.
I miss those days
that are now a haze
when it was you and I
instead of just I.
I need you, you see
I will even get down on a-knee."
The words flit through
a nice memory though.
I had never thought
that you had taught
me to care
when you wouldn't dare.


message 67: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
Hey awesome Mari! nice poem... ;)


message 68: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
thankie. wrote it a while ago, but noone ever reads my stuff, :P.


message 69: by Lena (new)

Lena (lenaxd) | 297 comments wow good!!


message 70: by Tiffany (new)

Tiffany (vampoholic) | 1279 comments Where the hell am I?

My felt like it was just full of cotton. I kept shaking my head trying to wake myself up. But even that was just too much effort. It felt like friggin workout just to lift my eyelids partially open. Everything was haze to me just then. I could barely remember what happened.

My arms above my head chained to a wall. Its so cold in here there is no way I can summon any fire whatsoever.

This cold is completely draining me. I have never felt so helpless. My eyelids are getting so heavy. I just want to sleep. No. I can't sleep I have to think of some way out of this.

But what? It is so dark in here. I have to focus on something.

I look over to my right. Is someone else chained in here with me? I can't focus on what or who it could be. I can barely see or even breathe. I have to...keep...my...eyes...open..........

I began having the same dream I always had as a young witchling. Whenever I was feeling alone or afraid, or just plain pissed off about something or at someone. My guardian angel, or so I always thought of him, a gorgeous pale man with slick black hair, mesmerizing dark chocolate brown eyes, high cheeks bones, the softest most delicate features, yet utterly masculine all in the same. It was never one of those romantic dreams, but more like a comfort dream. He was always there when I felt I had no one else to turn to. Sometimes we wouldn't even talk, we would just be in a park and he would push on a swing. Or just hold me on his lap and sing to me with a soothing - almost hypnotic-like - voice, while playing in my hair.

But it had been years since I had had those dreams.

In this dream I was wearing a long silk blood red dress. It came down to my ankles, sleeveless with a V neckline. My red hair falling down my back to my waste. He came to me and pulled me into a long fierce embrace.

"Oh my beautiful, Tialanna, look at how much you have grown." he said with a eerily seductive voice, "You are truly a woman now are you not? I almost cannot believe my eyes. I have missed so much of your life. So many things I should have told you long ago. How many regrets I do have. Well, I am not just here merely on a social call my sweet. We have things to discuss."

"Ok...This is nothing more than a dream, yet you are talking like a father seeing his long lost child." I started to laugh at that, until I saw the intense glare he was giving me. "Hey, that was meant to be a joke. And seeing how this is my dream, whether the joke was actually funny of not, you are pretty much guaranteed to laugh."

He took a step closer to me and I felt an instant chill crawl up my spine. "This is more than just a mere dream, child. They all have been more than just dreams. What you just said is more true than you could possibly begin to fathom."

"Well then, since this isn't a dream is it some kind of nightmare?"

"No, child." he said shaking his head.

"If this is not a dream and not a nightmare, then what the hell is it, 'cause I am so not in the mood to play 20 questions."

This is starting to get really weird. What in the blazing hells is he talking about. Of course this is a dream. Or maybe it is a nightmare - cause I would never be caught dead in a dress like this.

"Please, child, what I need to tell you is important. I wanted to do this differently. This is not easy for me. Though it must be even more difficult to you. How can I even begin to explain when you continue to believe this is nothing more than a dream? I told that damned Grim he needed to bring you to me so that this could be done properly. Then we possibly could have averted all of this."

Alright, is he talking to me or to himself. And Grim...

"What the hell does Grim have to do with anything? You know, I liked you a whole lot better in my childhood dreams when you pushed me on a swing."

"Child please. We are running out of time-"

"Will you stop calling me child, when we look to be damn near the same age. What kind of dream is this? And how could Grim bring me to y-"

Before I could get another word out he was right in front of me. And his eyes....

"This is not how I wanted to do this, but you leave me no choice. Hear my words and know that they are true."

I couldn't move or speak. Just stare into his eyes and listen to him.

"I call you child because you are my child. All of the nights you dreamt of me were more than just mere dreams. It was the only way for to look in on you coming up. The only way to be close to you without upsetting your mother. And as for how old I look, well I am well over a thousand years old. None of that matters right now. What matters is this."

My grandmother, what big teeth you have. I thought as he showed me his fangs.

"You will not come into your full powers until sunset on the eve of you birth. Your enemies are counting on just that. And by full power I do not mean mere witch powers, my child, but your birth right as one of my line. There is no time to fully explain. When this is done, the man you have believed to be you father will no longer except you, please know I take no pleasure in that. Also know that will always have a home with me should to choose to. If you except me, I will tell all you wish to know"

I kept trying to snap out this, to pull myself free. All the while, trying desperately not to believe what he was telling me, though every fiber of my body knew he was indeed speaking the truth. But how could any of this be real?!

I was taught to believe vampires were evil incarnate. Nothing more than vicious unfeeling monsters. Even if what he said was true, why would he give a damn about me?

"Please stop trying to deny what I am telling you when you know it to be true. And care a great deal about you, more than you know."

Great, was heading my mind too?

"Oh my darling child, I wish we had more time. But there is none. You must be strong right now. If what I am about to do costs me any chance of having your ability to possibly love and accept me, so be it. I would rather you hate me, than to just sit back and allow you to die."

Finally, I could at least wiggle my fingers.

"You must drink from me. With your vampire blood and witch blood running through your veins, a drink from me should awake some of your vampire abilities. And help you to win this fight. Grim should be on his way as we speak, to help you."

He sliced the artery in his neck with his fingernail, no, correction, claw.

I could almost move my arm.

Then he grabbed my head, putting my mouth to his bleeding neck. I couldn't stop myself.

The first couple of drops tasted salty to my tongue, then it started to taste...good. I can't even begin to describe the taste. It was wet and hot and...with every drop I just wanted more.

"That's right, child, drink."

I sucked deeper and deeper. I couldn't stop. It was like I getting a taste of something I had been missing my whole life. Just when his wound began to close, I felt my canines elongate and sink into his neck. How the hell did that happen!

I could move my arm again. But instead of pushing him away - the way my brain kept telling me to - I reached up to grip his hair and pull him closer to me.

I should be feeling disgusted right now.

Instead this felt, right.

His blood was flowing down my throat, with each swallow I pulled from him seemed to fill me. And no, I don’t mean just my stomach. It seemed to be going my limbs. Strengthening me. It was sliding down so easily; so naturally, so…..

No, this isn't right. I am not a vampire. This is just some sick fucked up dream.

Isn't it?

"ENOUGH" he said

Slowly I pulled away from him.

"I only hope this will be all you need."

Suddenly I felt a sharp pain in my chest. I looked down and saw blood.

I woke up still chained to the wall. I heard howling and fighting outside the room. I looked down to see a dagger sticking out of my chest and one of my captors right in front of me. I looked up at him with my eyes blazing red.


message 71: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
:O That was awesome Tiff! Realy descriptive might I add! My mouth literally watered for some blood lmfao...

That was awesome!!!


message 72: by Tiffany (new)

Tiffany (vampoholic) | 1279 comments lol, thank u ;)


message 73: by Thomas (new)

Thomas (artangel) | 1062 comments Me unleashing my singing prowess at a Wedding today!!

MP3 Snippet extracted from the video: http://www.mediafire.com/?mcnqtzm2ngy


message 74: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
I don't want to download anything.


message 75: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
Tom wrote: "Me unleashing my singing prowess at a Wedding today!!

MP3 Snippet extracted from the video: http://www.mediafire.com/?mcnqtzm2ngy"


aww you have a sweet voice Tom ;) if that's you this time lmao...can't hear it that good though. And thanks for expressing your creativity prowess on here lol



message 76: by Thomas (new)

Thomas (artangel) | 1062 comments ♥☆♥☆_Tiny_☆♥☆♥ wrote: "Tom wrote: "Me unleashing my singing prowess at a Wedding today!!

MP3 Snippet extracted from the video: http://www.mediafire.com/?mcnqtzm2ngy"

aww you have a sweet voice Tom ;) if that's you ..."



it was from a friends wedding. I never did sing at a wedding before. It was my first time. She kept on saying that i should sing at her wedding that i had no choice but to do it. Its low quality audio because it was extracted off of a video one of my friends took.



message 77: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
Tom wrote: "♥☆♥☆_Tiny_☆♥☆♥ wrote: "Tom wrote: "Me unleashing my singing prowess at a Wedding today!!

MP3 Snippet extracted from the video: http://www.mediafire.com/?mcnqtzm2ngy"

aww you have a sweet voice To..."


Ohk well I can imagine you blew the audience away, ummm do you write songs too? If you do, chuck us one on here...anything short or long...I feel like reading someones creativity...


message 78: by Tiffany (new)

Tiffany (vampoholic) | 1279 comments and about vampires lmao


message 79: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
yeah lol


message 80: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
lmao. hey, Tooommmm...are you a Vamp in disguise? lmao


message 81: by Tiffany (new)

Tiffany (vampoholic) | 1279 comments if he is i call dibs, lmfao


message 82: by Thomas (new)

Thomas (artangel) | 1062 comments Mari は 狼 です。 wrote: "lmao. hey, Tooommmm...are you a Vamp in disguise? lmao"

lol... what can i say!! i am a lot of things! Guess i might be a Vampire too!! lol


message 83: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
lmao. Join the club then! what's your Fav. blood type?


message 84: by Thomas (new)

Thomas (artangel) | 1062 comments Mari は 狼 です。 wrote: "lmao. Join the club then! what's your Fav. blood type?"

O_O idk


message 85: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
lmao. you don't know? mine's AB.


message 86: by Thomas (new)

Thomas (artangel) | 1062 comments oh! that!! mines B+


message 87: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
lmao. nice. brb


message 88: by Thomas (last edited Jan 15, 2010 08:06PM) (new)

Thomas (artangel) | 1062 comments

Stillness...: These Lonely Roads (by Tom Xander)

Stillness...
as i walk through the silence.
Will i be forever alone,
to walk these roads on my own.
And still my broken heart beats,
to the sound of my footsteps.
Making my tears fall on roads,
made with things like blackened stones.

My hands rips through my chest,
clawing at something that i've never felt.
But still, my life goes on,
to an end even i cannot be shown.
For a life without the One,
is like waiting for a breeze that never came.



message 89: by Marielle, cool cat, good cat, pussy cat (new)

Marielle Savoie (mrsavoie) | 5497 comments Mod
?


message 90: by [deleted user] (new)

okay I'm gonna be post a couple cuz I have a contest I'm entering and idk which 2 to take to contest with me... hmmm.... okay sorry. but there a couple poems.. here you gooo....


message 91: by [deleted user] (new)

Love From Afar-

~Description:idk.. a love poem I wrote. It's short. What do ya think?


I watch you walk with fingers entwining;
Your hearts just as entangled while mine is pining.

You explore each feeling with every little touch.
You can’t comprehend that to my broken soul, you’re my crouch.

I’ve wanted you more with each passing day,
Yet you never even look my way.

You haven’t considered the product of you and me.
I love you for you, why can’t you see,

That nothing can blossom from the feelings she shares for you
While I’m your Cinderella, just look at the fitting shoe.

Hold your breath and count to three,
And jump into the possibility of you and me.


message 92: by [deleted user] (new)

Mistakes:

~Description: A really sad poem... my friend was cutting at one time and I expressed my view through it. Let me know what you think sorry it's so sad.

Bleed deep and cutting to the bone
The weight of the world makes her knees crumble, fallen, scraped
Torn apart and burned to the soul
Sorrow pouring out over flows the bowl, heart-shaped

Eyes sewn shut and grin plastered on
She needs some hope, a nudge ever so lightly
Some pass by never noticing, but he’s the only one who sees
Her heart’s ripping to shred while she nods politely

Hold her hand and take her pain
Remove those tears that seem to engross her face
Fix her worries and love her problems
Coat her life with a vial of fine lace

Scars will heal and pain will die
Never knew I caused the difference, the cause of such aches
He will protect her and teach her what’s right
Never again will she follow my mistakes


message 93: by [deleted user] (new)

Love Departed

~Description: A few sonnets of love its life cycle

Your arms hold me tight so loving and strong
You are the one who makes my life so bright
We have to say, “I love you and goodnight”
These feelings can’t even be put in song
For this great love can last forever long
You make my heart flutter carefree and light
Your innocent smile gives me such delight
I don’t know anything that could go wrong
Your eyes twinkle just like the midnight skies
I just want to walk with you hand-in-hand
One plus one will forever equal two
Just hearing you laugh gives me butterflies
And you always seem to just understand
Happily ever after, me and you

Our tender hearts are warm, loving, and true
Our love is deeper than even the sea
The great earth revolves around you and me
Love thrives and blossoms from the life of two
I’d give anything to be next to you
Our love is precious and ever so free
If only you and I could always be
Alas, you must depart with an adieu
It kills me so much to say our farewell
It pains me so deeply to see you cry
You shall stay with me in my cosmic dream
And I can almost hear that wedding bell
I know without you I could nearly die
For you stole my heart, you wonderful fiend

For three very long years we’ve been apart
I still love you and want you home with me
You called after I waited patiently
“It’s over” you have killed me a dart
Everything shattered including my heart
You push the pieces back but kept the key
So much for it was always meant to be
This love we once had just seems so darn tart
This hurt in side makes me empty and frail
Crying alone, I just wanted you home
Everything I do reminds me of you
Your life has flourished while mine seems to fail
You have a new love while I’m all alone
And, one plus one will never equal two


message 94: by [deleted user] (last edited Feb 07, 2010 04:14PM) (new)

My Book & Pen

~Description: Okay, I know, it's weird but I HATE writing in empty books, it's almost scary so its a poem filled with imagery about a book and pen...

These blank pages
Haunt my soul
For they shed no light,
No hope, no cure.

Curious, I want to find
An answer hidden
Upon a page,
But all they hold is
Empty, forgotten, untold.

Untold-stories that burn
To scream out,
But this pen so black
Cannot commit to offer
To express what’s within.

Inside this pen
Holds nothing
That can command
These dark feelings
To open and soar,
Since a pen is dead,
No life, no door.

Doorways open up
To new paths,
But an empty book
Is a bleak window
That allows you
To only see,
Never to touch,
What you truly want
Everything to mean.

Meanings that I
Can never discover
Since this black pen
Is an insight
To death and sorrow.

Sorrowful my heart
Now reluctantly feels
For these small cuts
Hurt much more
Then they should.
And my haunted soul
Shall be buried
Forever more.


message 95: by [deleted user] (new)

January Lost

~Description: So this poem makes me cry. I lost my older sister of a drug overdose a while ago and my other older sister (the middle of the three of us) has green eyes fyi. I wrote this on her anniversary January 6th. So its pretty upsetting

I sit beside her, face soaked with remorse,
Her eyes so wide sparkled of tears and jade.
We hold each other with our emotions sprawled out.
Some events are so horrific they can never fade.
“Why do these things have to happen,” I shout.

It was January many years ago.
We were all so happy way back then.
It snowed so fierce and wild.
We were just going to visit her again.
She was just a child.

There she was… lying there,
Sleeping so sound.
She wouldn’t wake,
And that’s when we found
That our hearts were in for an earthquake.

Pronounced dead and gone,
We somehow survived her farewell.
Even though everyone who could comfort came,
It is still easy to say that that day was like a visit to hell,
And nothing could ever be the same.

Many years later, I stand at her tomb,
Hold the middle of the sisters, three.
Snow hovers just like that day,
But at least she’s gone, free.
It takes time to heal, but until then everything is still gray


message 96: by [deleted user] (new)

The Seasons Of Love

~Description: A random poem literally going through the seasons and love's steps

Spring
First Encounters
Lips grin with blossoming hope
Flirtatious eyes twinkle and flutter
Beginner love and a future of warmth
Rain drops wash away any sign of loss for a new life has begun
New feeling, new experiences, new beginnings
Spring

Summer
Climaxing Hearts
Love conjoined in the heat of day
Swimming in a pool of delight
Sweat hot, smile familiar, eyes locked
Love in sunshine and warmth
Heat to heat, heart to heart
Summer

Autumn
Hibernating Sensations
Drawn back and pulled away
Frost rims the corners of a smile
Leaves of life wither and drop
Raking the piece, taking a break
Falling together, falling apart, falling of hearts
Autumn

Winter
Death of love
Icy stares of cold intentions
Snow drifts the pain to and fro
Tears hail from eyes so dark as night
Twinkle no more the eyes of anger replace
Dying love, dying life, dying hope
Winter

Spring
First Encounters…


message 97: by [deleted user] (new)

LAST ONE!!!

Wings

~Description: A random song/poem I wrote about love and how its so powerful it can give a person wings. How someone can save another from the depths of sorrow through love.

You catch me when I fall.
You hold my hand through it all.

You kiss my forehead.
You find my life when I feel mostly dead.

Each touch, each embrace brings me closer,
To see what you mean to me.

That smile that warms my heart
Gives me the hope for a fresh start.

And those wings that you gave me, defy
All gravity, to soar, reaching for the sky.

The wings that set me free,
They guided me to be everything I can be.

You guide me without a reason why,
But I don’t understand what you could possibly see.

You gave me hope to stand tall,
The wings to soar high,
And you’ve held my hand through it all.
You found me when I was lost and would cry,
And brightened my life removing my dark home.
You make me feel, not so alone.

I’ve been through those rough patches,
But none that deserve a metal.

I’ve struggled and failed,
While you stepped in and picked me back up.

I’ve lost all sense of pride in myself,
Yet you never gave up on me.

Those eyes of yours bring me out into the light.
You brighten the darkest of the night.

And on those dark nights when I’m all alone,
You lead me to the safe place removing my inner cyclone.

You help me escape from all the blunders and mishaps of my world.
When you walked into my life I just couldn’t let you go.

You gave me hope to stand tall,
The wings to soar high,
And you’ve held my hand through it all.
You found me when I was lost and would cry,
And brightened my life removing my dark home.
You make me feel, not so alone.

My wings can soar thanks to you,
But don’t leave; there is always room for two.


message 98: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay thats all... SORRY there are soo many.. but just comment please.. i can't pick.. I am allowed to explain their meaning after I read


message 99: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
Kayla wrote: "Mistakes:

~Description: A really sad poem... my friend was cutting at one time and I expressed my view through it. Let me know what you think sorry it's so sad.

Bleed deep and cutting to the ..."


I love this poem, and because it has depth to it...obviously because it's true, so in my opinion I'll go with this one, it has more of a story to tell and some morals in it, to never be scared to ask for help or lend a hand for a friend in need...I like how it ended...awesome Kayla!!!


message 100: by Tiny, Currently revamping (new)

Tiny ♥Hearts (tinyhearts) | 2412 comments Mod
Kayla wrote: "Love From Afar-

~Description:idk.. a love poem I wrote. It's short. What do ya think?


I watch you walk with fingers entwining;
Your hearts just as entangled while mine is pining.

You ..."


cute little fairy tale story :) it's awesomely well done!


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